~’Going Under’~
Written on August 30th, 2007 by Jade MaliceStory Details
- Status : Complete
- Category: Romance and Angst
- Author: Jade Malice
- Word Count: 600
- Read 158 times
A/N sorry that this isn’t a color story everyone but as I said the blue is the color of courage story was my last one for awhile. I’m going to start Song stories now. Hope you like em.
~Sincerely Jade Malice
Now I will tell you what I’ve done for you
Fifty thousand tears I’ve cried
Screaming decieving and bleeding for you
And you still won’t hear me…
Propping her back up against the wall, Holly looked up into the gray clouds. It seemed as though they too wanted to cry. She glanced down at the wedding invitation in her hand. She tried to hold them back but the tears refused to be denied their freedom.
Don’t want your hand this time I’ll save myself
Maybe I’ll wake up for once
Not tormented, daily defeated by you
Just when I thought I’d reached the bottom
So? This was how he wanted it? He didn’t want to be with her? Thought it was Impossible? Idiot. No. Genius.
I’m dying again…
This was the second time she’d been let down. Trouble and Frond. Now Artemis and Minerva. “Why do you insist on torturing me?!” Holly cried out to the sky as the rain drops began to fall.
I’m going under, Drowning in you
I’m falling forever I’ve got to break through
I’m going under
Holly lost her self in thoughts of hatred. Malicious thoughts of jealousy that should never be caried out. Most unlike her….
Blurring and sotirring the truth and the lies
So I don’t know what’s real and what’s not….
Always confusing the thoughts in my head
So I can’t trust myself anymore
“Opal?” Holly asked. Opal lifted her spiteful gaze to Holly. “I need your help” Holly said. Her voice was unusually cold and bitter. It made Opal feel warm and fizzy inside. As Holly whispered the plan to her, the feeling began to grow.
I’m dying again….
Opal let lose the Trolls upon the wedding. Everyone screamed and scattered. Every LEP officer there tried to take down the Trolls. But to no avail. Holly watched from above as bitter tears began to fall from her eyes. She saw Juliet hurrying Artemis and Minerva back into the house. A Troll spotted them….Juliet went down.
So go on and scream
Scream at me, I’m so far away
I won’t be broken again
I’ve got to breath, I can’t keep going under!
Artemis and Minerva stared at Juliet as the troll ran towards them. The held each other close. The troll was almost upon them when Artemis gazed up at Holly. Holly’s breath caught. He was staring right at her.
I’m dying again….
‘Why?’ he mouthed with tears in his eyes. Holly closed her eyes and looked away….
I’m going under, drowning in you
I’m falling forever I’ve got to break through…
When Holly looked back again it was all over. Opal Pressed the button and the area was blue rinsed. Holly stared down at her hands….
I’m going under (going under)
As she turned her head she saw Opal with a vicious smile and a gun in her hand…
I’m going under (drowning in you)
“Good bye…” Opal whispered and pulled the trigger.
I’m going under!
It was over. Opal had won.


(6 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
August 31st, 2007 at 9:44 am
*first comment dance* yay i got to do the dance!!
that was such a terrific story~~
so much meanin. doin song stories i think will be a hit just like the color stories..
August 31st, 2007 at 12:40 pm
hey i started the song fic thing lol! this is good i think we have started a tradittion lol!!!!!!!!!!
August 31st, 2007 at 2:47 pm
Whoohoo! High five Vinyaya! Us tradition starters. BTW. You All have permission from me to continue my color stories until I come back with more ideas. And thank you Lil.arty. I appreciate it.
August 31st, 2007 at 7:26 pm
ok lol i will have a little think
August 31st, 2007 at 8:28 pm
*gives return high five and punches air* hey read my new one lol whiskey lullaby!
September 2nd, 2007 at 8:03 pm
sad very sad
September 3rd, 2007 at 4:22 am
omg so powerful…. cant say more
September 5th, 2007 at 11:45 am
i love this… i wish there were more chapters or something… that part where artemis says “why” … its just so..
i cant stop reading it over and over again, no story from here has gripped me this much since jade malice’s ” green is the colour of envy”
congratulations, this is great.