Envy

Written on January 10th, 2008 by Holly314

Story Details

Strangely enough, I got this idea from my english book. It said, “Write a poem comparing envy and a wasp sting.” So here I am. It was, to me, very inspirational. This can be any ship you want, not including any names. R&R please.

I sit here, and watch them laughing. I feel as thouch I have been stung by a wasp. The pain is unbearable. I want to run away, but I’m forced to sit there, watching. Why can’t that be me? Shall I compare envy to a two-edged sword? There is always a goal, something to work for. But it always comes back. This is what I deserve. Why do I deserve it? Because I am me. So many things I feel. So many things, so overwhelming. I have to move, have to speak, have to do something. But I can’t. I’m too weak. I was always too weak for him. He never wanted me; he never will want me. Why did I ever think? Why did I have to be this way? Why can’t I be good enough for him? He knows I’m here now, I’m sure of it.

Hope, of course. That’s why. I feel only two things now; hope and envy. That persistent hope that never dies. Envy that has cursed me ever since I met him. Not even the sharpest blade, the strongest gun, the largest weapon can compare to what I feel now. The all consuming hurt that will never leave me.

ENVY

Fin

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Filed in Romance, Angst, Poetry/Songfictions |

17 Reviews for “Envy”

  1. Star Jinin Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 1:24 am

    It’s kind of confusing.

  2. Holly314 Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 1:24 am

    Yes, a short angstfic, might be a drabble since I don’t really know what that is…can someone please tell me?

  3. lil.arty Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 2:20 am

    i really enjoyed that it was meaninful to.

  4. Jelly Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 2:40 am

    i don’t really get it…

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 3:12 am

    Very meaningful, the parts aboutr the guns fits holly , the parts about ” envy since i met him” fits minerva but since none of them in my opianion feel thatway it fits neither all the smae it fits both , ackward but still amazingly written.

  6. Olive Says:
    January 10th, 2008 at 3:42 am

    it really fits envy from my point of view. nice job!

  7. Holly314 Says:
    January 11th, 2008 at 1:53 am

    Aaaaaw..thanks you guys….:)

  8. bluesparks Says:
    January 14th, 2008 at 12:45 am

    who’s it about? that confuzzled me, just a little. please explain!

  9. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    January 14th, 2008 at 1:52 am

    it could be eitheir shipper u want.

  10. lil.arty Says:
    January 14th, 2008 at 8:33 am

    it fits all of them,,,basiclly anyone

  11. Jade Malice Says:
    January 17th, 2008 at 1:53 am

    Lovely.
    Constructed criticizing: Write in a more poetic format.

    That’s it. That is how good you are. Congrats.

  12. Jelly Says:
    January 21st, 2008 at 8:46 pm

    I reread it and understand it better good job!

  13. bluesparks Says:
    January 26th, 2008 at 7:01 pm

    I get it now! vey cool.

  14. Demon_Obsession Says:
    January 29th, 2008 at 8:02 am

    a bit confusing at first, but it’s versatile, it fits with anyone. Now you won’t be killed by people who strongly support some of the ships.

  15. ArtemisFowl III Says:
    February 2nd, 2008 at 2:53 am

    I thought it was great.Incredibly sophisticated.I felt as if I was reading a poem by Robert Frost.Very good.

  16. Lydia Tall Says:
    February 24th, 2008 at 2:45 am

    I like it, to me it kda fits H/T, except that Troubles dating Lily and Holly’s envious.

  17. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    February 24th, 2008 at 2:58 am

    wow…. yeah that too.

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