Christmas with the Kelps!
Written on April 17th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(22 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
Loading ...LEP Ball
Tonight was the Chirstmas LEP ball.
Holly wore a cream strapless dress, with no glitter. It did gather up round her waist to create a kind of bow at the back. The top had a thin line of crystals.
Her hair was gettig longer so she could put it up. Trouble looked very smart, Grub looked very awkward. When they got there Grub started to moan with the other Corporals about-
- The wage the LEP gave them
- The shortage in desk jobs
- The long hours
- The lack of this that and the next thing.
The music started
“Where do I know that from?” Trouble asked
“Well I don’t think it’s been a recent realise!” Holly said “I think they played it at all our school dances.”
Trouble swallowed “Do you want to dance?”
Holly looked at him- was he joking? No…he wasn’t! Her heart fluttered she couldn’t figure out why. Trouble was her friend… only her friend?
She held out her hand……………………….
AN: Aren’t I awful? Leaving you hanging like that but I will update so quickly you won’t even realise I was gone!
April 18th, 2007 at 9:22 am
It’s really good! You just need to reread your work, there’s a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
April 18th, 2007 at 3:16 pm
I love it…good as always!
Thanks for making my internet time worth it!
Keep it up.
April 20th, 2007 at 4:29 pm
Wonderful!!! And don’t keep me in suspense; update!
April 27th, 2007 at 2:20 am
I love it! How come everyone else has the talent? Why not me?? Keep writing!!!
April 27th, 2007 at 8:20 am
it’s GR8 so keep writing
April 27th, 2007 at 12:33 pm
AAAAHHH! MORE STORY MORE!!!!
P.S. Does anyone else watch Naruto, I do, Go Gaara! Go Sasuke! They’re both hot!
P.S.S. I never shurt up!
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.
ha.
April 27th, 2007 at 12:33 pm
that’s right! never shurt up does me!
May 7th, 2007 at 10:40 am
once again ur story rocks…..um….well…do u think u could send me a copy….this muust be really annoying for u…..plzzzzzzz…
May 10th, 2007 at 2:49 pm
i swear i read this on fanfiction.com
May 10th, 2007 at 4:23 pm
You may have. It’s on here and ff.
I’m under a different pen name there though (xamethyst girlx).
May 22nd, 2007 at 2:30 am
I like it. It’s funny.
June 11th, 2007 at 3:36 am
is there gonna be more?
June 11th, 2007 at 8:56 pm
Sorry that’s it finished!
August 5th, 2007 at 7:09 pm
i love it sooooooooooooo much it is so charming and cute andexactley how trouble and holly should be it is soo good i could cry lol ( in a good way) xx keep up the good work lol
October 6th, 2007 at 5:42 pm
HE HE HE HE THAT WAS DIFFERENT !
October 8th, 2007 at 3:34 am
I love stories where Holly doesn’t like Artemis!
October 14th, 2007 at 12:36 pm
THATS SOOOOOO OFFENCIVE JELLY!!!I THINK HOLLY AND ARTY SHOULD BE TOGHETHER!!!!
October 27th, 2007 at 12:41 pm
OMG!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! ITS MY FAVE!! I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU!! U ROCK GIRLFRIEND!!
PLZ CONTINUE!!
;) xoxox
October 27th, 2007 at 12:44 pm
No they shouldn’t!! holly and Artemis are so different not to mention Artemis only see’s her as an ally. Gosh i H8 holly/Arty love stories. They make me sick!! (but they’re still pretty good) apart from the pairing. Eoin Colfer put a post up saying thatin the next book there was gonna be something between Holly and Trouble in a Love sorta way! YAY!! anyway thats all i have to say. TYVM
;) xox
October 27th, 2007 at 5:58 pm
GO EOIN COLFER!! i AM SOOO GLAD HE SEES IT OUR WAY!
October 28th, 2007 at 1:23 am
oh ya you should probably continue you should leave us like this HOW will the wedding go?
November 9th, 2007 at 7:08 am
WRITE MORE STORIES OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE STORIES OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED YOUR STORY IT WAS GR8
November 9th, 2007 at 7:42 am
plzzzzzzzz write more stories i beg of u
November 25th, 2007 at 9:04 pm
new fic. on the way
November 25th, 2007 at 9:08 pm
YAY!!! plz cintinu ths 1 2!!!!!
December 3rd, 2007 at 1:53 am
This is a wonderful story! but I must say His daughter is my favorite. does anyone know where bath is? I think its in england.
December 3rd, 2007 at 3:51 am
I loved it!
December 4th, 2007 at 7:08 pm
Yeah Bath IS in England.
December 4th, 2007 at 10:49 pm
Ok just wondering cause my brother gets 2 go there about the time Eoin goes and if he meets him I want to get an autograph. Lucky brother! and he hasn’t even read a book that was more than 30 pages yet he is in 3rd grade!
December 4th, 2007 at 10:57 pm
cool , when is eion going to england , I can go too!! ( dont worry I GET WHAT I WANT my parents never say no to me { im spoiled } ) yeah , same with mine! my brother HATES to read , idk how we are related! I love t.v and books and of course the computer.
December 4th, 2007 at 11:15 pm
I bet you are my mom’s cousin’s brother’s aunt’s grandma’s grandson’s uncle’s brother’s aunt’s cousin’s sister’s child! AHA! I have long last FOUND YOU JENNY!
December 4th, 2007 at 11:34 pm
lol???? MAXINE? MT GREAT LOONGG SOME HOW RELTED TO ME PERSOON? ( my mom doesn’t even have a sister…lol)
December 5th, 2007 at 12:07 am
I mean brother! whew close save! actually you could be Panamore! I met her in an airport in Italy she is my evil twin sister… But is incredibly kind! To me.
December 5th, 2007 at 12:38 am
evil & kind? well , yeah my mom has 3 bro’s all younger though!
December 5th, 2007 at 1:02 am
hmm.. no u can’t b Panamore u r to nice to everyone. Maybe u r Jenny.
December 5th, 2007 at 2:08 am
grrrrrrr* ( panamore sounds like pandora ) grrrr* I hate it when people say I am too nice , HATE IT! I can be mean if I wanted to! I just chose not to because it is wrong!
January 18th, 2008 at 3:35 am
Cool but I don’t think holly is mushy and sappy and neither is trouble and by the way holly WOULD NOT scream
January 18th, 2008 at 3:40 am
question waht does  mean?
January 18th, 2008 at 3:43 am
how do you do that? Â
February 1st, 2008 at 5:15 pm
WRITE ANOTHER! EASTER WITH THE KELPS!I’M A CRAZY FANBOY!WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!
AND…NOW…I…FAINT!
February 18th, 2008 at 9:50 pm
Whats that A thing mean?
February 18th, 2008 at 10:32 pm
I haven’t a clue- I didn’t put it in, I’ve
just found out it was there.
February 19th, 2008 at 3:50 am
lol, ummm…. how bout, valentine’d say with the kelps, that woulod be a good one, lol.
February 19th, 2008 at 7:34 pm
The pre-sequel “Not again” is up
February 19th, 2008 at 7:35 pm
Oh and Decisons Decisons & Grow Up were updated last night.
July 10th, 2008 at 9:26 pm
this is really good! write a sequel!