Always
Written on January 29th, 2010 by bookwormchickStory Details
- Category: Romance and Angst and One Shots
- Author: bookwormchick
- Word Count: 436
- Read 136 times
(7 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)
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“Trouble come on pull through! Please come on! Please!” Holly knelt by Trouble’s side as he lay wounded, tears streaming from her eyes “Don’t leave me.” The gash against his side was gaping, blood was everywhere and still the warlocks could not come, there were to many wounded. “H-hol-holly,” Trouble’s breath came short, “Stay with me, pl-please.”
“Always,” She answered, “I’ll always stay. Don’t worry you’ll be fine. Where’s your magic?”
“Used up.” He gasped, “Every drop. What a-about you?”
“Dry. Oh Frond, why?” She said, “Why do you have to be so damn heroic?”
“Hehe,” He let out a weak laugh but is eyes started to roll back in his head.
“No ,Trouble stay awake, stay with me, please Trouble please.”
“Always Holly always.” Trouble went limp in Holly’s arms.
“No…no I can’t watch you die!!! I…love…you.” Holly’s scream rippled like a shockwave chilling the bones of all who heard it. It was a shriek of loss, more animal than fariy. Holly held Trouble’s face in her hands and kissed him. The kiss was electric, sending a shock down Holly’s system pulling her very essance into a healing. Her hands went numb and her head spun but she still gripped Trouble ,she had to, it was the only way. It felt like her blood was on fire and her bones had melted she heard chanting in the background. Then it all went black.
Trouble sat bolt upright, his side completely healed. Holly was infront of him ,not moving. No Holly! He thought. He grabbed her up and listened for a pulse……… there it was, very faint but still there. Trouble carried her ,running, to the nearest warlock station. He grabbed the nearest warlock and put Holly on a streacher. “Heal NOW!! That’s an order!” He commanded. As the warlock worked Trouble thought of the last thing he had heard as his spark was going out. I can’t watch you die. I love you…. I love you. The words passed through his mind and he stared at Holly ,hoping, praying, that she would wake up and look at him with those big hazel eyes and talk to him with that beautiful voice again. The warlock stepped away telling Trouble that it was up to Frond whether she would wake up or not. Trouble took Holly’s hand and held it, “Please Holly,rest and be okay, please…please.” he wispered to her. Her hazel eyes opened slowly and a small wisper escaped her lips, “Will you be here when I wake up?”
“Always,” he answered, “Always.”
January 29th, 2010 at 9:02 am
Awww so pretty! 5 stars!
January 29th, 2010 at 9:41 pm
Awww. I don’t ship H/T but that was cute. (If i may use that word)
January 29th, 2010 at 10:42 pm
I’m not a H/T shipper either, but it was pretty good. There were some things you forgot to capitalize, though. Good job, anyway.
January 29th, 2010 at 11:40 pm
I just felt angsty and wanted to write this its just dribble and i know its O.O.C but I really wanted to write a love scene. You make up how Trouble gets hurt I was to lazy to think that up.
January 30th, 2010 at 3:32 am
It’s not that I’m against H/T…but…this has no plot.
Um…“no…no I can’t watch you die!!! I…love…you” OMFG then cheese-ish-ness of it.
Why is the keyboard doing the 2 key as ” and the ‘ key as @???
January 30th, 2010 at 4:36 am
Yay! So sweet! Im a H/T shipper (I guess, cuz its so hard not to write about A/H) Anyways. That was good! 5 stars!
January 30th, 2010 at 11:00 am
Hum… I kinda hate to rain on the parade here, but…
It’s… well… first of all, you should run it through spell check. There are quite a few mistakes there. Second of all, you really need to work on the grammar. There were portions that were hard to read because of it. Third was going to be OOCness, but if you recognize that and are truly happy with it, I can’t complain. You’re the writer here, not me.
And now for the good news. Although the plot may have been a tad cliché, it also had aspects that are unique and original. It may have happened a tad too quickly, but I suppose it’s fairly well paced for what it is.
At this point, taking the mechanics into consideration, I would give this 3 out of 5. Ignoring the grammar, I would give it a 4. It makes a huge difference. Revise and it could be great.
January 31st, 2010 at 1:08 am
I saw several spelling and grammar mistakes, but they were probably just typos.
You may want to arrange it into smaller paragraphs, so that it’s easier to read. 
Keep on writing!!! 
I love the whole idea of a battle scene/romantic thing. I could toy with that idea for a while.
February 1st, 2010 at 1:20 am
Awwww! That’s so sweet! =)=)
February 5th, 2010 at 4:13 am
Awww! That was so sweet! 5 stars, two thumbs up, 100%, WHATEVER. I loved it. Keep it up!
February 7th, 2010 at 9:34 am
Problems are there, like me not being an H/T shipper, and me not liking romance, but I loved this.
February 7th, 2010 at 9:05 pm
I’m not a H/T shipper al ALL! But this was sooooo cute, and it’s not your fault I just happen to hate troubs with a fiery burning hatred, so 5*’s! this is soooo romantic!
February 7th, 2010 at 9:05 pm
at all, sorry. =D teeheehee…
February 12th, 2010 at 2:11 am
*brings own crackers, so kind of enjoys the cheesiness of it* Mmm, cheddar.
1 star for satisfying fluff,
1 star for satisfying H/Tness,
1 star for the romance,
1 star for the descriptiveness,
and 1 star because it’s not all that OOC.
:D
~Yoshi