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Waltz of Shadows

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Hay guys long time no see. I suggest listening to this while reading makes it more dramatic. “http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eoQah-ac3bY”

 

As my eyes close

As my heart stops beating

As my life ends

All cares dissolve to nothing

All memories lost in 

Dark

My soul waltzes with

Shadows

Step…

Step…

Step…

I become invisible 

Weak

So long I waited

For things I don’t recall

But my waltz 

Goes on  

When

I find the light that burns  

And I know my 

Loves await me

And so will I waltz with

Life

Once more

Step…

Step…

Step…

 

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  1. Absent_Minded_Professor November 16th, 2012 at 12:41 am 1

    Love the word choice and theme. ‘Tis onimous, and wistful, and slightly morbid. Just a little. 😉

    However, I think the rhymn is disjointed in some places. Lines are too short in some places, in my opinion. In other places, that is good – for example, the “step” lines. It all flowed together well in all though. [KEEP IN MIND: only my opinion. Don’t go all beserk on me now. X) ]

    I believe I shall favorite this. Nice to see more poets around here, ‘ay? 😀

  2. Nice poetry…nothing to critic

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