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Harbored Love

Summary: This is supposed to be from Artemis' P.O.V. as he thinks about what Orion was talking about.

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Drifting through there thoughts of mine

Seemingly untouched by the passage of time

Focused soley on another

Whos’ feelings for I shall uncover

The arrow of love, Cupid fletched

Perhaps his ramblings weren’t so far-fetched

Perhaps there was some truth to them

From my own thoughts they did condemn

For those feelings were no mirage

But, instead, from inner thoughts, a collage

Of all the emotions I kept at bay

Out of fear of what you would say

You could break my heart, tear it to pieces

Or fill my days with tender kisses

Was this love lost before it was born?

Will you dismiss it with shallow scorn?

No, I must tell you, I can no longer hide

The feelings I have always harbored inside

Hmmm… i must be on a poetry binge. Two in the same day must be some sort of record. I like this one better that the other one. Also, on line 6, the tidbit “his ramblings” being Orions’ ramblings. Please review! I feel so unloved, because shaadia is pretty much the only person who ever comments. I wis 

 

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  1. SilverGoddess March 1st, 2013 at 7:42 pm 1

    I just noticed that it cut off the last sentence of my A/N, but it said I wish that we could see how many people viewed out storys so we could know how many people actually read them, not just how many people commented.

  2. I am the only one who comments? WHAAAAT!!!
    YOU DESERVE MORE.
    COMMENT ON MY FRIEND’S FICS OR SUFFER MY WRATH!!

    Good job. Nice writing.

    “My friend” means you, silver.

  3. Okay, I’ll comment. 🙂 I really like this story. I usually am not very good with poetry, that’s why I don’t do any. It is very good. And as for seeing how many people actually read this, I haven’t figured out a way to do it on here, but I know you can on fanfiction.net. I know that doesn’t solve the problem on here, but maybe if you put it up on there you would be able to tell how your story is doing that way. Sorry, just a thought. Anyways, good story! 🙂

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