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Four Characters

Summary: This is my fic for my four songfics in Fowlie's contest, Challenge of the Appellations. CHAPTER THREE IS NOT APPROPRIATE! :O

Chapters: 1 2 3 4

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This is my fic for my four songfics in Fowlie’s contest, Challenge of the Appellations. Here is the first one:

 

Song:

Wunderkind, Alanis Moresette

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BnGdx40919M&feature=related )

Charecter:

Holly Short

Songfic name:

Princess

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A soft wind blew through the tree tops, rustling through the trees and causing golden leaves to fall to the ground, making the ground seem to shimmer. A girl, no, an elf, ran her hand through the Autumn bushes, the leaves breaking through the stiffening silence. Was she making the right decision? Her engagement ring glittered on her right hand, a diamond in the rough.

Oh perilous place walk backwards toward you
Blink disbelieving eyes chilled to the bone
Most visibly brave no apprehended gloom
First to take this foot to virgin snow

On the day in had started to snow, and as the elf girl looked out her window she saw snow, real snow, for the first time. White, to match her long dress. And white, to match her clear smile.

I am a magnet for all kinds of deeper wonderment
I am a wunderkind oh oh oh
And I lift the envelope pushed far enough to believe this
I am a princess on the way to my throne

The elf was being helped to lift her long train of lace, by another elf. Slightly shorter, and in the man’s eyes, much less beautiful.

Destined to serve
Destined to roam

Oh ominous place spellbound and unchild-proofed
My least favorite chill to bare alone
Compatriots in place they’d cringe if I told you
Our best back-pocket secret our bond full-blown

Everyone gazed as she walked down the isle, the elf man especially. He stood behind the groom, his normally happy eyes strangely shadowed, it was his best friend’s wedding day, after all.

I am a magnet for all kinds of deeper wonderment
I am a wunderkind oh oh oh
I am a pioneer naive enough to believe this
I am a princess on the way to my throne

Her dress glittered in the Winter light, breaking through the clouds and catching on the pearls set in the cuffs of her beautiful dress. The man remembered, he had always thought of her as a princess, a beautiful princess. Oh how he wished she was his.

Destined to seek
Destined to know ooh
Most beautiful place
Reborn and blown off roof
My view about face whether
Great will be done

The priest began droning on. The bride didn’t really listen, she just stared into her groom’s eyes. And they both smiled, clueless to what was going on right behind their backs.

I am a magnet for all kinds of deeper wonderment
I am a wunderkind oh oh oh
I am a ground-breaker naive enough to believe this
I am a princess on the way to my throne

What happened to you, you were once my princess, I had only eyes for you, what happened, my princess? Wondered the elf man behind the groom. Why must you hurt me like that?

I am a magnet for all kinds of deeper wonderment
I am a wunderkind oh oh oh
I am a Joan of Arc and smart enough to believe this
I am a princess on the way to my throne

“I do,” said Holly Short, a smile in her mismatched eyes.

Destined to reign, destined to roam
Destined to reign, destined to roam ooh

And Trouble Kelp wondered if anyone one could hear his heart break when Artemis Fowl the Second kissed her, his princess, and know Artemis’ queen.

Destined to reign, destined to roam
Destined to reign, destined to roam

Why, why, why?

Chapters: 1 2 3 4

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6 responses to “Four Characters.” Join in!

  1. I really like this. It is very well written. One critic though, you should not tell us that it is an elf who is thinking about the bride. Leave us guessing until the big reveal. I found a couple of spelling mistakes but otherwise, it’s great.

    (First comment!) *happy dance*

  2. FantasyDevourer July 26th, 2011 at 3:58 am 2

    No, don’t change the big reveal for the end. I hate when you don’t know who it was!!!!! I loved it, only found exactly 1 mistake (a typo) and I’m so happy Arty+Holly are together!

    You will win. (I’m not entering because I suck at songfics) This was beautiful.

  3. You know, you’re not supposed to give constructive critiscisms for these. Just saying.

    This was…beautiful. I thought that the not song parts seemed kinda harsh, but its still beautiful. Loved it! You have a really good chance of winning! 5 stars!

  4. in_love_with_Arty_6302 July 27th, 2011 at 7:10 pm 4

    I really liked it. But that’s because I like every single songfic that I’ve read so far.

    Seriously. Does ANYONE read the rules? ~Fowlie

  5. Arty 6302, no con crit.

    Sooo, yeah. Too bad you couldn’t finish all 4 songfics. You had a good chance of winning.

  6. I am nearly done, TM, you’re so very behind the times, I have until Midnight XD

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