Early Train
Written on November 8th, 2007 by artyfowl3Story Details
- Status : Complete
- Category: Poetry/Songfictions
- Author: artyfowl3
- Word Count: 553
- Read 186 times
I heard a song i like on my iPod by Dave Nachmanoff that reminded me of Artemis Fowl. I’m not too great at writing tragedy and songfics, but it’s nice to write something different once in a while right? I didn’t get all the words, but I tried my best.
You caught an early train to Heaven,
I hope there wasn’t any pain,
If there is life here after,
I’ll see you once again,
I’ll see you once again.
Holly’s eyes filled with tears. She sniffled as she blinked them away. She remembered his last words… “Be well.” She was trying to, she really was. But she wasn’t. Life wasn’t the same without him. True, he did have his problems, but didn’t everyone?
You had an easy kind of laughter,
Some people always see the dark side,
But that never was your style.
She chucked grimly. Okay, maybe not an easy kind of laughter. But you didn’t have to have a good sense of humor to be a cop.
You caught an early train to Heaven,
I hope there wasn’t any pain,
If there is life here after,
I’ll see you once again,
I’ll see you once again.
A salty tear fell onto Holly’s lap. She felt her cheeks. Both were wet. The tears were flowing freely now. The most painful part about his death was the fact that she wasn’t doing a very good job respecting his last words. If only she could try to be well, like he said.
And though you had no sons or daughters,
Your spirit’s shining in the People,
Look at how those seeds have grown.
Everyone in the LEP loved and respected him. Even if he did have a bad temper. Most who you inspired have grown you be good officers, she thought. Like Trouble Kelp. If only you could see how you have inspired them all.
Said you didn’t want us crying,
Or feeling sad when you were gone,
Now we’re singing and celebrating,
Your love and laughter carry on.
She held her head in her hands. Her shoulders shook and the tears leaked through her fingers. She still couldn’t believe he was gone forever. Forever. It sounded like such a long and horrible thing. She wiped the tears from her eyes but they were quickly replaced with fresh ones. If only he could be here now. If she could see him again, she’d tell him how the People really did respect him. How they did mourn his passing. If she could see him again.
You caught an early train to Heaven
I hope there wasn’t any pain
If there is life here after
I’ll see you once again.
I’ll see you once again.
I’ll see you once again.


(11 votes, average: 3.27 out of 5)
November 8th, 2007 at 7:21 am
*FCD*
i liked it
one question….how did he die?? coz coz coz coz coz yea
November 8th, 2007 at 4:01 pm
i have a question was it ROOT OR ARTEMIS ? because if it wsa ROOT it was very well writen. If not it was o.k. I guess!
November 9th, 2007 at 2:03 am
I like it. Yes, it was Root, right?
November 9th, 2007 at 3:13 am
same question.
November 9th, 2007 at 3:15 am
Defiantly NOT Artemis!
I am positive it was Root.
November 9th, 2007 at 6:21 am
yup, it was Root.
November 14th, 2007 at 3:50 am
wow awesome! great tragic song or whatever 4/5
November 23rd, 2007 at 7:28 pm
nice! it was Root, definitely!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:26 pm
ROOT IT WAS ROOT!!!!!!!!!! HE BLEW UP ‘MEMBER?????
November 30th, 2007 at 10:40 pm
yeah/… i know.. it IS root , I always new that. Y do we keep saying ‘ it is root it is root’ if we all already know it is root? Ah well , do wutever u want ppl.
December 8th, 2007 at 7:46 pm
It’s ROOT!!! lol glad this story got an award!
December 8th, 2007 at 7:58 pm
award? u meen editors choice? COOL !!
CONGRATS
December 9th, 2007 at 7:42 pm
congrats for editor’s choice!
December 23rd, 2007 at 11:18 pm
congradulations on making editor’s choice!!!
December 27th, 2007 at 1:40 am
very good. i thought it was artemis at first, but it soon became appairent that it was root.
February 15th, 2008 at 3:29 pm
ITS ROOT!!!!!!!!!!(hee hee!)
February 25th, 2008 at 4:13 am
It’s AWESOME! I didn’t think anyone could write such a good songfic!!!
March 23rd, 2008 at 2:49 pm
I thought the same thing olive at first I thought it was Artemis 2 seconds later I knew
it was Root I cried reading T.O.D.