A Perfectly Good Heart

Summary: A song fic about Artemis breaking up with Holly

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Disclaimer: I do not own Artemis Fowl, or perfectly good heart by Taylor Swift.

~Why would you wanna break a perfectly good heart?
~Why would you wanna take our love and tear it all apart, now?
~Why would you wanna make the very first scar?
~Why would you wanna break a perfectly good heart?

Holly Short was flying over Dublin on her way to go see a certain Irish mud boy; she was thinking one thing HOW COULD HE BREAK UP WITH ME!

~Maybe I should’ve seen the signs, should’ve read the writing on the wall.
~And realized by the distance in your eyes that I would be the one to fall.
~No matter what you say, I still can’t believe
~That you would walk away.
~It don’t make sense to me, but:

Holly was so mad at Artemis, he hadn’t even had the decency to call her, and he sent her a break up text message A TEXT MESSAGE!

~Why would you wanna break a perfectly good heart?
~Why would you wanna take our love and tear it all apart, now?
~Why would you wanna make the very first scar?
~Why would you wanna break a perfectly good heart?

Holly arrived at Fowl manor and rang the doorbell. Artemis opened the door.

“Hello Holly” he said.

Holly hit him across the face and started yelling at him.

“You stupid, dumb, dimwitted, mud boy!” she yelled as she hit him, “How could you break up with me? I thought you loved me, I thought you wanted to be with me.”

~It’s not unbroken anymore.
~How do I get it back the way it was before?

After Holly had calmed down a bit Artemis said, “I have no idea what you’re talking about Holly I didn’t break up with you, I love you.”

“What? But you sent me a text message saying that you wanted to break up with Me.” said Holly almost in tears.

~Why would you wanna break a perfectly good heart?
~Why would you wanna take our love and tear it all apart, now?
~Why would you wanna make the very first scar?
~Why would you wanna break, Why would you wanna break a:

“Holly I didn’t send you a text message.”

“Then who did.”

“I don’t know.” said Artemis, “but you know what I do know?”

“What’s that” said Holly.

“I know that I Love you Holly Short and I never want to break your heart.”

“I love you too Arty” and with that they kissed.

~Why would you wanna break a perfectly good heart?
~Why would you wanna take our love and tear it all apart, now?
~Why would you wanna make the very first scar?                                                         ~Why would you wanna break a perfectly good heart?

 

(A/N this is my first song fic so don’t be too hard on me)

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  1. This has a good plot, but it needs to be WAY WAY WAY longer. Add more to the beginning, show us what the text said, have them find out who did send it. *cough cough Trouble cough*

  2. Fowlfan4ever May 22nd, 2011 at 3:55 pm 2

    Loved it! Needs to be a little longer but good! I have NO idea who sent the text *cough cough Foaly cough*

  3. Yes, this songfic was very long and had a very elaborate plot. And by that, I mean that it must be longer and with more plot. Honestly, the text could’ve been from Foaly OR Trouble — only you updating will tell. Plus, you didn’t make anything really clear, and you had some grammar issues. More info, please!

  4. okay thanks!

    Ilovefowl: I hadn’t thought of making Trouble send it.

    Fowlfan4ever:I will try to make it longer.

    WE:Longer and more elaborate. Got it 🙂

  5. Adorable. 🙂
    I’ve never heard the song, but the story part was kinda good. 😛 A little more info would be great, though. 😉 Who sent the text? Why did they try to break ’em up?
    A sequal, perhaps? :p
    Good writing. You’ve got phenomenal spelling and great punctuation. Keep up the good work! 😀 I look forward to more from such a great writer in the future. 🙂

    ~CC

  6. BoboParadizo May 22nd, 2011 at 7:16 pm 6

    You should have a sequel! This is really sweet.
    I LOVED IT! 🙂

  7. I think there will be a sequel 🙂 I originally wrote the fic to go with a different song so it was a lot longer, but i didn’t like the song so I changed it.

  8. LEPreconGirl May 22nd, 2011 at 7:47 pm 8

    Come on guys, we all know who sent the text.
    Chix!

  9. I wonder who sent the text*cough cough trouble cough cough and foamy cough cough* and you should have a sequel where they find out who did it

  10. FantasyDevourer May 23rd, 2011 at 4:24 am 10

    🙂 Loved it. Little things with grammar, but it’s really nice.
    *cough, cough, Trouble and Minerva, cough, cough*

  11. I liked it! But you don’t see this many people reviewing my stuff…

  12. I LOVE IT!!! 😆

  13. AFisawesome24689 June 3rd, 2011 at 1:48 am 13

    awesome i agree make it longer. this is just a suggestion but, possibly add some make-outs and cuddles;D

  14. FowlsGirl123 June 19th, 2011 at 11:13 pm 14

    It was good, but I agree with everyone else. Longer, who sent text, etc. And no offense, but I don’t really like T.Swift, so if you could please not use her songs…I mean, its up to you, but yeah. It was adorable! UPDATE!!!

  15. trollslayer5 June 25th, 2011 at 1:55 am 15

    I liked it and (echo, echo) who sent the text?

  16. loved it. I wonder who sent it though. *cough, cough, Foaly, cough, cough*

  17. in love with Arty 6302 August 2nd, 2011 at 3:22 am 17

    I agree that its too short and I have one other question before I yell at you saying its f***ing awesome for ur first time: WHO SENT THE TXT MESSAGE?!

    WAS IT YOU?!

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