The Narcisuss Flower
Written on February 27th, 2007 by DreamlightStory Details
- Status : Complete
- Category: Other and Romance
- Author: Dreamlight
- Word Count: 104
- Read 359 times
(12 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
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In her world of grey, she sees a dash of color.
She picks the blossom from its nest, smoothing slight fingers over the delicate golden floweret. It trembles in her hands, swaying in harmony with the breeze. A petal slips between her fingers and drifts upon the silent pool before her.
She stands and turns away, floret clutched tightly in her hands. Then she sees him. He is like the flower, in full chroma.
Ebony hair shrouds his pale face, and sapphire eyes gaze upon her.
Arrogant, dignified.
She drops the golden flower.
Insignificant, invisible.
And yet he sees her.
February 27th, 2007 at 1:17 pm
This is my favourite drabble of all time! I’ve read it on FF.net and loved it there, and I love it here.
I think you are an amazing author!
The end is definately the best part.
February 27th, 2007 at 8:09 pm
I love it! Its so poetic.
February 27th, 2007 at 11:03 pm
Brilliant- It’s beautiful, and, as Athena says, very poetic.
February 28th, 2007 at 7:50 pm
I’ve never heard such wonderful drabble. It’s awesome. Keep drabbling.
March 2nd, 2007 at 10:58 am
Deep words.
Very meaningful
keep up the good work
March 4th, 2007 at 11:30 pm
wow it was beautiful. i loved it.
nowandforever
August 5th, 2007 at 6:36 pm
it is like shakespear - i love it! ‘ did my heart love till now? forswear it sight for I never saw true beauty till this night’ (billy shakespear)
she drops the golden flower
insignificant, invisible
and yet he sees her.
dreamlight u roc luv V. xx
May 31st, 2008 at 12:34 pm
This is the best piece of drabble. So beautiful especially the ending. In 100(+4) words you have moved me. This is my favourite piece of drabble. Like Kandy says ‘Keep drabbling’. Hope you write more wonderful drabble like this.