Of the Atlantis Complex:

Summary: This is obviously a spoiler. This also happens to be my first poem for this site. I’m sorry if I […]

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This is obviously a spoiler. This also happens to be my first poem for this site. I’m sorry if I added too much ‘Fog of Death’, the style of sheer confusion I used in ‘Shattered’. Like I said, it’s my first.  Do fives protect you 

 

Do fives protect you? The Complex is calling. 

Do fours disturb you? 

The Complex is calling. 

Into your deepest thoughts, 

Some true and others not, 

And feed it. 

The Complex is hungry. 

Foreign, unavoidable, 

The Complex is hungry. 

Falling, deep into a pit, 

Of romance and foolishness; 

Held by invisible bars, 

Birthmarks and pet centaurs, 

Magic rocks and shooting stars. 

Prison of fours, 

No doors, 

The Orion jerk thinking he scored. 

No more Ice Cube, 

Only confused. 

Everyone to blame 

No one but myself. 

The Complex is calling. 

 

 

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  1. Ohansahyosheli August 13th, 2010 at 1:44 am 1

    May be one huge spoiler for those four–sorry, poor ( 😉 ) unfortunates who don’t have the book, but for me, it’s a Censored for spoilers 😉 so…I can’t complain…
    Ahem. Great story. 😀

  2. i have the book but haven’t finished it yet. pretty good poem though. Ohansahyosheli you spoiler you explained more than the poem! grr..

  3. Awesome! Really good! Beside the shortness, I can’t find anything to complain about!

  4. Beckett Simpleton August 13th, 2010 at 11:16 am 4

    It’s allowed to be short. Its a poem. And a good one i might add 🙂

  5. I read it in two days. It is AWSOOME. But i read it too quickly. 🙁

  6. I love it! Even though I’m one of those poor sorry souls who have not yet been enlightened by the Atlantis Complex 😉

  7. Beckett Simpleton August 13th, 2010 at 4:18 pm 7

    Fowl Star: Poor you. You are sooo missing out

  8. Great stuff. I read the entire book in four hours and I;m very sorry to say that… I didn’t really focus on the small bits, but: GOOD JOB 😀

    Now I have to go and read it again…

  9. Every time i read this, i like it less and less…

  10. Fal it’s great. I loved the birthmarks and pet centaurs bit.

  11. Beutiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It brought tears to me already-read-the-book eyes!!!!Wait…I think I read it too fast…

  12. Why is everyone saying they read it too fast?

  13. I havent read the book yet but this poem is good.

  14. I bought the book in a hurry, came back next week to get the Graphic novel (havent seen them) and it was HALF PRICE! stupid me xxx

  15. And, oh yeah, This is awsome
    No grammar or punctuation complaints that i can see…
    Well done!

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