No sister of mine
Written on December 10th, 2007 by PRGStory Details
This is a story about Holly’s older sister. Don’t make fun of me, I am new here. This is before the first book! R+R+MP(make Popcorn)
My sister, Holly, is my parents dream child. My father was a Captain, and my Mother was an explorer. Both are retired. I am totally opposite, I am not athletic, and I want to be an actor, but my parents say no. I am positive that is Holly asked, they would say go ahead.
“I love you both the same,” My mom always said, but she would always be looking at Holly, in the eye.
“No you don’t!” I would scream at her.
“Heather! Go to your room!” Was all she ever responded.
Today started out normal, my sister was taking classes at the local college, and she went on trips to the surface a lot, while I stayed home. I wasnt going to college, since my parents could only afford 1 child to go to college, and guess who got to go. Now, holly was gone on a trip, and my mother was being a pain.
“Why can’t you be more like your sister?” she asked, because i just sat and watched tv for 21 hours straight.
“Fine, if you want me to do something, just ask!” I said as i left the house. I had a perfect plan. I was going to the surface.
Thats the reason why I am now in New York, flying invisible to the human eye. I pretended to be my sister, cause we look so much a like. I swooped down low, to look at a little girl. Humans look so wierd i thought.
“Hi farie!” The girl said to me.
“HUH!!!!!” I whispered loudly.
“Oh yea, i can see you, i have this thing, it’s a disease, and it helps me see things that are invisible. I see all sorts of things, people just think i am crazy!”She said, some one on the street looked at her like she was crazy, so she added quietly,” Come to my house, my name is Ally, dont worry, i am good, i wont hurt you!”
I followed her towards an apartment complex.
Thats all i am writing today.


December 10th, 2007 at 1:09 am
* FCD* Awesum , it sounds great!
December 10th, 2007 at 2:11 am
hmmm…. I am thinking Heather WANTS to get in trouble? she is a little to trusting for a OLDER sister, maybe younger. Maybe
December 10th, 2007 at 4:03 am
sounds good so far! much better than my first fic…
December 10th, 2007 at 6:27 am
it’s very origional and fun. keep writing!
December 19th, 2007 at 4:17 am
I wrote a story about Holly’s sister once,
but I think it is too personal to write. BUT
AWSOME STORY, so far.WRITE MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.I will stop now.
December 22nd, 2007 at 2:44 pm
deisel!!!!
May 2nd, 2008 at 1:20 pm
more! i luv this story! pleasseee add another chapter.