Black Night
Written on December 7th, 2007 by arty_and_holly_4everStory Details
- Category: Other and What If?
- Author: arty_and_holly_4ever
- Word Count: 552
- Read 277 times
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(9 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
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“okay, so who is a fairy-human mix?” Artemis asked.
“Well, a few nights ago, a boy named Tomas was kidnapped, Fairy mother, human father. And last night, a girl named Kayla disappeared. She had a Fairy Father, and a human mother. We never found any bodys, so we know that they are still alive.” Holly said
“huh,” Artemis stated.
“Huh???? thats all you can say?????” Holly yelled. She was in one of her many moods.
“Holly, calm. I had a dream about Kayla, and tomas. And also about a girl named Abby. about them getting attacked.” Artemis said.
Holly sighed, “Cant you be normal? well, what did you see. Wait, did you say Abby?”
“Yea,”
“When did you see this?”
“yesterday,”
Holly looked down at her transmitter. On the screen there was a message, Holly, another kidnapping, A girl named Abby. Fill artemis is. Foaly
“Umm, artemis, you may have seen the future.”
December 7th, 2007 at 12:25 am
*fcd* *fcc* *fcj* *first comment backflip*
LOVE IT! please conitinue soon! I know you just posted it but you must conitnue NOW1 I NEED 2 noe wht happens nexT!!!!!
December 7th, 2007 at 12:53 am
LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!Its awesome
December 7th, 2007 at 6:30 am
This is a great story so far! Write more!
December 7th, 2007 at 3:16 pm
Good. Artemis and Holly are really in character. You also have a good story line to run your story on. Although, Foaly sending that kind of e-mail isn’t like him, and the grammar isn’t too good either. I would rate it 3 stars.
December 7th, 2007 at 3:34 pm
Nice name for the girl in the begining. :p hehehe thats my name!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 8:06 pm
I think u deserve an award for this when it is done!
December 21st, 2007 at 12:15 am
Waaaa you havent updated
January 15th, 2008 at 12:56 am
I think u left. no good-bye either. bye-bye.
March 24th, 2008 at 2:20 pm
AW Arty’s in love
July 6th, 2008 at 4:56 pm
hey, jelly, i didnt leave!!! i just couldnt remember my password! ha ha, now i’ll update!
July 8th, 2008 at 4:09 am
I like your story! 5 stars!
August 4th, 2008 at 10:17 pm
It’s prettygood. It’s just that Arty would never say Yea or huh, he would say yes or pardon me instead. But it’s really good and I think you should continue it.