B Is For Betrayal
Written on August 24th, 2008 by Lydia TallStory Details
(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loading ...A/N: This is the second installment of the Is For series. Let’s see what happens now.
“I don’t believe, in the smile that you leave, when you walk away, and say good bye, well I don’t expect, the world to move underneth me,” Where Is Your Heart, Kelly Clarkson, Breakaway.
Holly’s POV
“I wouldn’t do that; I’d never betray the people. That’s not me; it’s someone else named Holly.” I protested.
“I really doubt it.” Trouble said. It hurt to see his emotionless expression; he’s my boyfriend and yet he immediatly believes that I’m a criminal.
“I think Holly’s right; she would never do that. It’s just like when Opal murdered Commander Root.” Foaly said.
“And how is that?”
“Well—”
“Holly’s innocent.” Vinyaya yelled, seriously ticked-off. “Just because it looks like Holly, and sounds like her, doesn’t mean that it is her. Remember Eleanor, Alysa, Quentin, and Dot? They are proof of that; it’s too bad that they were killed.”
“They were a treat, especially Alysa, Quentin, and their daughter Dot. Eleanor was also dangerous, even if she was 100% shadow. Anyone who says otherwise is the enemy.” Captain Shera said brazenly.
“So does that mean you consider Section 8 an enemy?” Vinyaya asked voice deceptively calm.
“I think that Section 8 should come clean about what you’re doing. Especially if you would let her,” —he pointed a quivering finger at me— “Be part of Section 8.”
“I will not tolerate you discrediting my officers. Holly is probably a better officer then you’ll ever be.”
“Ark Sool knew what he was doing when—”
“Ark Sool is a pompous idiot who does everything for his own gain and knows nothing about emotions and people. Despite Holly’s occasional slip-ups, Commander Root trusted her with his life. Opal fabricated a video of Holly murdering her Commander years ago. Could this not be the same?”
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Somewhere On The Surface.
Perfect. Everything’s going as planned, she smirked as she watched the feed from the conference room in Police Plaza.
August 25th, 2008 at 2:43 pm
AWESOME!!!!
August 26th, 2008 at 12:29 am
Wow! You really used good words. Or as I say, “juicy”. Most people on here don’t use interesting words. The writing is really good.
Instead of making all different stories, you could make one big story, with all of the alphabet titles as the chapter titles instead. That way, people don’t have to skip from story to story.
Will this go all the way to z? It’ll be interesting to see what you would use for Z.
-computerzandbks4ver
August 26th, 2008 at 2:07 am
Yes I’m going all the way to z.
I didn’t do one story with chapters like that because I write alot; which would mean that th chapters would be very long.
I really dislike really long chapters, occasionally they give me headaches, so I didn’t do that with this.