A Bad Day, Or Not? CHAPTER 7 ADDED 30/8/07!!!
Written on March 5th, 2007 by Nicole_artistStory Details
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Artemis’s POV
It was incomprehensible. One minute I had been in my manor, plotting to hack into a wealthy business man’s portfolio, then the next, a strange schoolgirl appears. Who somehow managed to break into my study. Worse than that to be truthful, as she somehow knew the code to get in. Which was my birthday, and very few people knew it. She then displayed an uncanny knowledge for what had happened in the past few months.
A/N: I have changed it so he is 12 turning 13. Otherwise it’s not going to work, as he would probably already had his Arctic Incident. I’ve changed the first chapter a bit.
Then somehow she dragged me in to another dimension. Or something similar. We encountered some other students who she seemed to know, and they asked questions about my sudden appearance. Although I may not know exactly where I am, Nicole was intelligent enough to realise that dimension jumping was not exactly a common occurrence, and made up a plausible lie to present to these two boys. Which I, of course, was required to add to. In a teenager way nonetheless. Painful, but it was wonderful acting on my behalf. But for some reason Nicole seemed to urgently remove me from their presence. I found out why a few seconds later.
“You know that main character from the series you read in English? Artemis Fowl.”
A book series?? Just as I was about to demand an explanation I was unceremoniously pulled out of the door by Nicole. She picked up a book on the way, but it was out of my sight-line before I could see the title. If it was what I thought it was, this was going to be interesting.
My/Nicole’s POV
When we were safely outside I let go of Artemis and heaved my heavy bag on to my back. Stupid school bag.
“Ahem,” Artemis cleared his throat for attention.
“Yes Artemis, I know, but let’s get a few paces from the library before I show you. Those two nerds are still there, probably wondering why we left at the mention of your name.”
Artemis looked at me in a disgruntled sort of way, but saw the logic and followed me up a flight of stairs which lead to the path which connected to the carpark.
Once we were walking on that path he immediately turned on the questions.
“What did that student mean ‘book series?’ My name is a book series?”
I sighed, dropped my bag on the ground near a spot where presumably I could see Dad heading towards the library, and stop him.
“It’s a bit worse than that. You see…”
“I see what??”
I took a deep breath. “Your life is a fiction book series.”
Artemis’s POV
“Your life is a fiction book series.”
The words reverberated around my head. Fiction book series. My life was because of some member of society with a wild imagination? Impossible!
“Who is the author?” I asked sharply.
“An Irish man. Eoin Colfer.”
Eoin Colfer. Never heard of him. But I felt some familiarity. Intuition. And sometimes, when it’s not a life or death situation, it pays to rely on intuition.
“I don’t suppose you have a photo of him?” I asked.
She looked surprised. “Funnily enough, I do. It’s on the inside cover.”
Slowly she brought the book up from her side, where she had been holding it. I couldn’t see the cover or title for a moment, as it seemed that the cover was reflective. Then as it was out of the light, I saw it was more than reflective. It was sparkly. I would have laughed, had it not been my life on paper. At least it was a bronze colour, not some ludicrous neon colour which seems to attract book purchasers. Nicole handed it to me and muttered an apology that it was slightly crumpled.
“It has Gnommish on the front cover!” I exclaimed in surprise.
Nicole nodded. “I know, and I have been trying to become a fluent reader but just can’t find the time and-”
“What do you mean become fluent?” I asked. “How can you understand Gnommish at all? It took me long hours of research and matching up-”
“Hieroglyphs to the symbols. I know, because it tells us so on page twenty-four. I found that the symbol to each letter is at the start of each chapter it’s underneath in a box in Gnommish too. I tried to memorise it, but to no avail. I only know about six letters automatically. A, B, C M, N and E. And E’s easy, because it’s just a little squiggle above or below a letter.”
That book must have a very large amount of detail.
I opened the front cover and what I saw startled me. Not that I showed it. I had to keep up my customary lack of emotion.
The man there was not, as the caption said, “Eoin Colfer”, but a man named Ethan Coolidge, who was one of the many psychiatrists I had outsmarted about a year and a half ago. After a brief half hour session with me he had to be taken to his own hospital and sedated. I had no idea he had been released, let alone he was somehow putting almost every detail of my life in to a book. How he managed to transport that book into another dimension was another matter.
“I know that man,” I told Nicole, “And he’s not called Eoin Colfer either. His real name is Ethan Coolidge, a psychiatrist.”
Nicole groaned. “Let me guess. One of those counsellors you sent gibbering to their own medical hospital.”
“Yes. But that’s what they receive when they try to dissect my mind.”
Nicole rolled her eyes. “Just flick through the book.”
I flicked through quickly, stopping a few times to check details, then I stopped and started in indignation at page seventy-one.
“Something was troubling Artemis,” I read aloud in disbelief. “It was plain in the web of premature lines that spread from the corners of his deep blue eyes. Excuse me? I believe it is impossible to have ‘premature lines’ when you are 12. No matter how much you scowl, or worry. Coolidge is trying make me seem as unattractive and old as possible.”
“HA! I knew it!” Nicole said in triumph.
“Excuse me?” I asked.
Nicole looked slightly embarrassed. “That’s what I thought all along. I mean, I’ve had a lot of stress and can frown at people, mostly at school, a lot. Because they’re so idiotic. But I don’t have crow’s feet, which is what he’s implying you have. Which you don’t.”
“Exactly,” I agreed.
Why were we having a discussion about beauty? Wait a minute, I happened to start it. Oh well. If you are going to be criminal mastermind, you may as well be an attractive and well groomed one.
AN: That was a little OOC, but I had to put it in. It always bugs me…
My/Nicole’s POV
After our fun little chat about premature lines I decided it would be best if we worked out how Artemis was going to stay at my dad’s house.
When I mentioned this, all Artemis could say was:
“I thought you were simply telling a lie to deceive those two students!”
“I was. In the Irish exchange student part. But really Artemis, where else are you going to stay?”
“In a hotel,” Artemis retorted.
“Think Arty-boy,” I said, and Artemis threw me a dirty look. “You have just arrived from another dimension. A parallel universe. All of your finances and assets are there. I am probably the only person who can help you.”
He considered this for a few moments. After struggling against his pride he spoke up.
“As much as I hate to admit it, you are right. In this world I am a fantasy novel character, and I doubt anyone would believe that it’s actually a real biography. Coolidge is quite clever though. By telling the world he is “The Biographer” even less people would believe he really is. Oh, and don’t call me Arty-boy either.”
I grinned in a way to rival Artemis’s “vampire smile”. Except I grinned with my mouth closed. Actually, it was halfway between a smug smirk and a grin.
“Back to business,” he said. “How are we going to convince your father to let me stay with you? It’s not like he actually knows who I am, or if really am an innocent ‘exchange student’. For all he knows, I could be a thief trying to steal his finances.”
“Oh no you don’t,” I said. “No hacking in to the computer accounts. Besides, you don’t have an account to put them in anyway. And if I catch you trying any of those, I hand you into the authorities and tell them you’re a kleptomaniac juvenile, hence the expensive suits.”
“Oh all right, but just in case you have not noticed, the only things I possess are the things I am wearing.”
I smirked. “Oh don’t worry. We’re going shopping. And we’re not buying any more suits. If you want to blend in, it’s jeans and some kind of casual shirt. I hate to break it to you, but teenagers don’t normally wear suits. That’s what caused the ‘wedding or funeral’ comment.”
“All right. Point understood. But let’s discuss how I am going to stay with you and your father.”
I thought. And brainstormed. Finally I decided on a reasonably good plan. It was risky though.
“Artemis, my dad is always encouraging me to bring friends over. So I’m going to introduce you as my friend.”
“That’s it?” he asked incredulously. “That is your big plan?”
“No,” I admitted, “It’s a lot more complicated than that. I’ve mentioned my favourite book, your biography, many times, and even read out the prologue and some of the first chapter. I’ll still call you Artemis, otherwise things will get confusing, but we’ll have to change you last name. Any ideas?”
“Something that begins with an ‘F’. Perhaps Fletcher?”
“Artemis Fletcher. Sounds fine to me. If not a bit strange. Now, we need to have a note from a parent, telling him how you have permission to stay, etc etc. I understand you’re quite good at forgery.” I winked.
“Yes, I am quite good,” Artemis said with his usual arrogance. “But I need a pen and paper. I can’t exactly produce them from thin air, no matter how skilled I am.”
“Unless you have them up your jacket sleeve,” I said sarcastically.
I rummaged through my bag until I found my pencil-case and folder with all my books on it. I opened it and flicked through to find a barely used book to tear a page out of.
“Stop,” Artemis said, “What was that book?”
Uh oh. He was talking about my science book. And on my science book I had decorated with my sims of Artemis, and other pictures people had drawn of him. And I was in the middle of sketching a rough Artemis in a lab on the title page.
“My science book,” I muttered. “But what I’m learning is probably below you.”
“Not the content. The cover.”
“Um. It’s just a cover.”
“Even an amateur behaviour specialist could tell that you are hiding something. What is it?”
But I didn’t get a chance to answer, because in one smooth motion he had opened the clamps and swiped up the book.
“That was more graceful than described in the book,” I said in mild sarcasm. Actually I was wondering what he was going to say.
“That’s myself, I believe,” Artemis said pointing to one of my Sims pictures. “In three dimensions. Well, it looks slightly like me. The hair, It looks like black plastic.”
“That’s because it’s a game mesh,” I said irritably, swiping for my book, which Artemis moved quickly, then turned it over and studied it again.
“Did you draw the pictures on the back?” he asked. “They are quite good for amateur drawings.”
“No, I didn’t. Other artists did. But I can draw,” I said, giving up any attempt of rescuing my “Artemis Book”, as I had called it.
“Really? I can’t see anything to prove that,” Artemis said in an annoyingly smug way.
Now it was my turn to be smug. “Look at the first page then. The title page.”
He opened to the front page, and actually smiled. “How clever. Since you know I am very scientific you have me on your front page in what I can only presume is some kind of laboratory, with a Bunsen burner and some kind of solution in a beaker. I am even wearing a suit. The face isn’t finished yet, but the hair is closer than the plastic black hair from that three dimensional picture.”
I pretended to faint.
“Did I detect a compliment in there? Amazing. And you actually smiled, and not just in a self satisfied or threatening way. Call the media, this is a Kodak moment. Or maybe something worthy of the Guiness Book of Records.”
He handed back my book, which I placed back in the binder and found the middle of my Japanese book, which was the least used. I tore the page out, and trimmed it neatly with some scissors. Then I found a pen and handed it to Artemis.
“There you go,” I said, “Work your magic.”
“I need a place to rest it on.”
I handed him the folder.
“What is your father’s name?” he enquired.
“Ray.”
Artemis’s POV
This wasn’t going to be too difficult.
Dear Ray, I wrote, We haven’t met, but my son is friends with your daughter, Nicole. I’m sorry for the short notice, but tonight my husband and I are going out for dinner, and Artemis would like to stay over. Nicole has mentioned that you’re always encouraging her to bring friends home, and she has known Artemis for a while and they get on well from what I’ve seen. Artemis is very well behaved, and hopes that he will get on with you. If it’s not convenient tonight, you can send him back and we’ll just have a quiet night.
Yours sincerely
Angeline
Nicole looked over my shoulder and read it.
“Not bad,” she said. “Not bad at all.”
March 5th, 2007 at 2:52 pm
I thought it was great! I hope you got an ‘A+’ on your assignment. You should definitely write more…
Oh, and I wasn’t sure where to put this, because it doesn’t seem to fit anywhere. I put it in ‘other’, if you think it should go somewhere else just say so.
March 5th, 2007 at 6:36 pm
WOW!!! Even i could’nt write that well, adn i’m da best in my class!! I luv ur story!!!!
March 5th, 2007 at 10:18 pm
Thanks!
MMK, I haven’t got my assignment back yet. Lazy teacher… XD
It should be in Other for now, but it may lean towards another category when I update.
I’m thinking about involving two geeks from my classes in the next chapter.
Should someone else appear? From the AF world that is…
March 6th, 2007 at 1:01 am
I loved it, adorable!
I wanna be in it! (just kidding)
Adding Holly would be cool though, if you really want to know who would be cool in it. Or Mulch.
March 6th, 2007 at 1:17 am
I think just Artemis is good, for now at least… after all, he’s the one you touched in the dream, right?
Anyway, I think you should just take him around school with you. He can make sarcastic comments, and do your homework. Or something. And he’ll have to disguise himself from everybody who’s read the books.
You should write Opal in as a fangirl.
March 6th, 2007 at 9:56 am
Perhaps… XD
Spoiler! (Kinda…)
I was going to make him run somewhere to get away from the nerds (cause one of them reads Artemis Fowl) and then tell him how his life is a fiction book. It’s the end of the school day so I was going to have to bring him home or somewhere. 0.o
Then somehow I could make Mulch appear. I like him, he’s funny! Maybe Artemis could work out how he got here and work out how to get others here. Coolness! I already have a plan… but it must wait, as I have homework and a test tomorrow.
Spoiler Over.
BlackOpal, do you want to have a cameo appearance as a fangirl? Or something else? Waitress? I’m thinking (Spoiler!) that I can take Artemis to a restaurant/club that my dad takes me to. And the place called KidSpace in there. That would be VERY funny… XD (Un-Spoiler)
Kay, must study for math test. Bbfn!
March 6th, 2007 at 3:46 pm
I think all of that sounds brilliant, I can’t wait!
Good luck on your test
March 11th, 2007 at 12:24 am
I liked it and i dont know if this was a real dream but if it was it whould be the BEST DREAM EVER!!!
March 12th, 2007 at 8:51 am
Where have my other chapters gone? Ahhh!!!!!
March 28th, 2007 at 12:53 am
ah my gosh I can’t wait to read more on it. It’s exciting and funny. That is a great dream.
March 28th, 2007 at 9:51 am
I did continue, but the chapters are missing. Rrgh, MM!
April 14th, 2007 at 8:10 pm
suweat nicople please write more!!! so ur 12 then ha u told me ur age indirectly so know I know
April 17th, 2007 at 11:57 pm
KEEP WRITING!!!!!! I THINK THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY, I ALSO THINK THAT MINERVA AND HOLLY APPEARING WOULD BE AWESOME!!
HOLLY COULD HAVE BEEN DRAGGED OUT OF THE DREAM BY THEIR SWAPPED EYES, YA’ KNOW, AS FOR MINERVA…………SHE COULD HAVE BEEN SUCKED OUT OF THE DREAM REALM BY A RIFT THAT WAS CREATED WHEN YOU DRAGGED ARTEMIS WITH YOU INTO REALITY.
April 18th, 2007 at 9:27 am
Katya, someone FINALLY noticed. *rollseyes* But I’m almost 13.
I’ll go find the missing chapters Foaly. I don’t think Minerva or Holly are going to appear for a while yet, but I might switch to their point of view (or Butler’s).
April 18th, 2007 at 1:58 pm
OKAY, BUT YOU WILL INCLUDE MINERVA, RIGHT?, RIGHT?, RIGHT??????????????????????????????????
April 18th, 2007 at 10:49 pm
I just read ur new chapters I is suweat so these are the chapters u kept yelling at mm about right ? foaly this artemis is BEFOR minerva time soo hopefuly nothing good will happen to her or she won,t even be meantioned ! but its realy good so write more!!!!!!k?
April 19th, 2007 at 12:40 am
I’m glad the chapters are back up
Anyway, the story is still very good, but I already complimented it to death, so here’s some constructive criticism-
Artemis is OOC in Chapter 3. I know you made a little note about it, but the part that seemed most unlike him to me wasn’t where you put the note, it was the discussion about your art. I mean, it’s good and all, but that conversation wasn’t like Artemis and didn’t help the story any.
April 20th, 2007 at 9:46 am
I kind of realise that, but I wanted to indulge my ego… XD Should I change it? Or delete it completely? (I would be willing… *gasp*)
Sorry, Minerva won’t appear unless I keep writinf for a loooong, loooong time. We’re just after book 1. Well, kinda.
I shall try to update Chapter 4. And trust me, Artemis will be very in-character now.
I AM Artemis… 0.o
April 23rd, 2007 at 9:47 pm
This is soooooooo cute,keep writing!!!!
April 24th, 2007 at 3:00 am
PUHLEAZE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS THE PERFECT STORY, I, THE KING OF FINDING FLAWS IN EVERY THING IN THE WORLD, COULDN’T FIND A SINGLE FLAW IN THIS(EXCEPT THAT MINERVA AND I ARE NOT INCLUDED) STORY, PLEASE UPDATE A.S.A.P.!
P.S. DON’T FORGET MY IDEAS (I COULD HAVE WRITEN A STORY WITH SIMILAR STUFF, BUT I CAN’T STRECH MY THOUGHTS AS MUCH AS I WANT) THEY ARE PERFECT FOR ADDING A TOUCH OF ACTION TO STORIES WITH RIPS IN THE FABRIC OF ALL REALITY!!!!
April 24th, 2007 at 4:49 pm
*gasp* sorry dont mind me just got home.Me thinks it good.
April 25th, 2007 at 10:12 am
Thankyou for reviews! I love reviews! I only update when I get reviews! ^_^
Now I will go twiddle/update.
May 3rd, 2007 at 2:56 am
nicole its awsom so hurry up cause I wan,t to read the rest k?!!!!!!!! its a matter of life or death!!!!(sounds more dramatic dosen’t it?) hey hoow come I don’t have smilies(place mad smilie here) thats not faire(place another mad smilie )
May 4th, 2007 at 11:02 am
You mean this one? :-X
Hehe, I’ll only tell you how to get smilies if you promise to keep reviewing…
May 4th, 2007 at 11:03 am
Oops, I didn’t get the mad smilie. Ehm, pretend it isn’t there…
May 7th, 2007 at 1:29 am
It was so good please, please, please,update soon!!!!!!
May 13th, 2007 at 9:58 pm
‘There was only one remedy for a day as horrible as this: a book. The ability to detach yourself from the real world is one that you should use. But not just any book would suffice; it had to be an Artemis Fowl book, my favourite series on the entire planet, and below it as well.’
I feel exactly the same way, every time that i have a horrible day, I read one of the Artemis Fowl books and one hour later, I come out of my book smiling, i also use them to help with anger management.
May 14th, 2007 at 10:35 pm
Please update very soon!!!!!!!!
May 16th, 2007 at 2:16 pm
cant wait to hear the rest
May 20th, 2007 at 6:27 am
Finally, some more reviews!
Okay, I’ll start. 
May 23rd, 2007 at 11:18 am
KOOLIEZ GR8 STORY
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!
May 23rd, 2007 at 11:05 pm
You must write more!!!!!!!!! *using mesmer to make Nicole write more* BWAHAHAHAHAHA………… (realizes that he is still writing).
May 25th, 2007 at 5:51 pm
your weird(giggles madly)
May 25th, 2007 at 8:55 pm
Who, me?
May 26th, 2007 at 4:44 pm
This story is so good please write more!!!!
May 30th, 2007 at 11:29 am
Eureka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’ve found the pun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dontré P. Renure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Entrepreneur!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Do I get a cameo appearance?
If I do my name is Zac K KOOL!!!!!!!!!!
May 30th, 2007 at 11:30 am
I’m a GENIUSSSSS!!!!!!
May 30th, 2007 at 12:32 pm
Lol, someone FINALLY got it.
You can have a cameo appearance. Would you like to be a cashier at one of the stores? We can only have Zac though, because it will be on the employee badge.
May 31st, 2007 at 7:17 am
Yes I can be a cashier
June 1st, 2007 at 9:08 am
When are you going to write the chapter that has me in it?
June 1st, 2007 at 9:34 am
Jeez, I have homework. It’s been what, one day? Patience, my friend, is a virtue.
June 1st, 2007 at 9:37 am
comme ci comme ca
mais l’hâte calme j’augmente ne soigne pas de cette vertu
Ive been learning french in school
it says:
OK
but still hurry up i don’t care about that virtue
June 1st, 2007 at 9:59 pm
VIRTUE RULEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You might want to get a beta, that’s all that I can think of, and, I think what Foaly meant was that there was a tear in the fabric of space and time in the real and DREAM worlds, and he has dreams about what would happen after the fifth book after falling asleep while reading, due to sleep deprivation, of course, that’s how good it is.
June 2nd, 2007 at 8:38 am
Huh? I already have how it’s possible planned, and it involves alternate universes. That’s all I’m saying.
Because of all the nagging, I will start the next chappie. So be happy.
Why would I need a beta? I practically AM a beta.
June 4th, 2007 at 8:01 am
Hello just thought i’d say hello so HELLO PPLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And Gr8 job wif da story it’s really Kool
I LURVE it!!!!!!!!!
Do yas get da picta that i LURVE IT!
June 12th, 2007 at 1:12 am
Um, the reason I said that was becuase I couldn’t think of any constructive criticism, but, mabey, you could, um……………….OH! Mabey you could make Artemis act like more of a smart-aleky-braniac with a know-it-all-attitude.
June 12th, 2007 at 10:37 am
Hehe, don’t worry, I will… (I’m feeling sorry for the me in my story…
)
Sorry it’s taking so long, I’ve got exams, and homework, and art to finish. *sigh* Real life, if only it wouldn’t interfere.
June 14th, 2007 at 10:08 pm
Don’t worry! Take your time, the same thing happens to me.
June 15th, 2007 at 12:15 am
That was excellent, and did ur lazy teacher give u ur grade yet
June 15th, 2007 at 3:36 pm
I LOVE IT!!!!!! KEEP WRITING!!! IT’S AWSOME. PLEASE INCLUDE HOLLY SOON.SHE COULD BE WORRING ABOUT HOW MUCH EVERYONE KNOWS ABOUT FAIRYS!!!
June 16th, 2007 at 3:08 am
great me loves but continu or else I vill have to strangle u
is that the mad smilie?
June 16th, 2007 at 3:08 am
*cheques smilie* yes it is go me
June 16th, 2007 at 5:43 am
HURRY UP! PLZ! IM BEGGING YOU! PLZ!
June 17th, 2007 at 10:11 am
It’s soon, it’s soon! And trust me, it’s REALLY long. 0.o
June 17th, 2007 at 8:49 pm
Great story, Could you please hurry up and type more. I can’t wait. Can you PLEASE include Holly. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE or I won’t rewiew again for a long time
June 19th, 2007 at 9:03 am
:| Well that’s not good, but I still can’t include her. Yet. She’s not in the universe.
June 19th, 2007 at 9:51 am
>:(
:O
June 19th, 2007 at 10:19 am
: | New chapter is up! Celebrate!
June 20th, 2007 at 12:41 am
It’s really good. And funny. And it makes me feel bad for theyou in the sory, because Artemis is going to maul you. Which is part of why it’s good. Not because I want you mauled, but because Artemis’s indignation is amusing.
June 24th, 2007 at 8:49 am
Ah well, that’s good. I think. I was trying to be funny.
)
And where/when is he going to maul me? And what do you mean by maul? (How sad, I’m the author and I don’t even get what you’re talking about in my story
June 25th, 2007 at 12:49 am
I wasn’t really clear- I wrote that when I was really doing something else. Anyway, I meant that… well… I don’t know, Artemis seemed not to be very happy with you. I don’t really think that he was about to hurt you, but people on the other end of his plans ususally end up even unhappier than he is.
That doesn’t seem any clearer. I hope you understood it…
June 25th, 2007 at 8:46 am
Well, that made a bit more sense I guess…
Now, if you’re eating something right now, stop eating it. If you’re precariously balancing something breakable, put it down. For here is a sneak preview of the Artemis who shall star in a sim-story of this (AKA this story with pretty sim pictures to look at) fanfiction along with me and any other characters/people who worm their way into my fanfic. Okay, enough blabbering. Heeeeeeeeeeere’s Artemis!
[IMG]http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s97/Nicole_artist/Snapshot-1.jpg[/IMG]
Or if that doesn’t work, go to…
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s97/Nicole_artist/Snapshot-1.jpg
:-D
June 25th, 2007 at 9:12 pm
OH MY GOD!!! THis is the best story that You’ve done ever. I could really use your help on my story. Lot’s of Luck and Love from
Holly
PS You can call me Holls
June 29th, 2007 at 2:10 am
just vone sing; I vant more zu must rite more!!! so hurry up and get to vork!!!!
jk hey its great really
hehe its great and u have about a few thousand errors in there (ya like u trust my editing skills
July 2nd, 2007 at 1:59 am
;-) And it’s not like I’m beta-ing your story either… *cough*stone…gods…Shivin…*cough*
July 7th, 2007 at 9:18 am
omg this story rox
i can’t wait for the next chapter.
ur a fab writer
:-)
July 20th, 2007 at 1:19 am
noww nicole now u hurry up and write us a nother chapter now theres a good girl yes very good *says as if I were an old grannie*
August 10th, 2007 at 12:44 am
Please update soon it is driving me crazy trying to think of what will happen next! This story is so good!
August 11th, 2007 at 10:18 pm
OMFG THAT WAS AWESOME!! ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS EVR!!!!!!!
August 30th, 2007 at 8:16 pm
u shall be forgivien for the “shortness” and “unextingness” of this chapter if u hurry up to write the next one
September 2nd, 2007 at 7:20 pm
OMG cant wait til its updated and done its soo awesome!!!:)
September 3rd, 2007 at 5:40 pm
*stares at the Sim picture of Artemis*
…
His hair is messed up.
September 4th, 2007 at 11:01 am
I blame the dimensional travel.
September 13th, 2007 at 10:01 pm
it made me smile.
September 15th, 2007 at 1:29 am
OMG nicloe your soo funny please write more!!!!please!!!
September 23rd, 2007 at 4:07 am
This is so good but how will Artems get back she dreams agin and pulls artemis with her kinda lame ending right? oh well your funeral i just want to finish the story!
September 24th, 2007 at 11:50 pm
Sorry about the last message i m just so very annoyed that this has been going on for about a year! You need to finish I shall give you 4 stars now but this should be placed in alternate unervese
October 8th, 2007 at 3:51 am
this isn’t good one star
October 8th, 2007 at 3:58 am
Hey, the least you could do is tell Nicole why you didn’t like it. How else is she supposed to improve?
I wonder what happened to Nicole, though. I know she went on vacation a while ago, but wouldn’t she be back by now? I don’t know. Anyway, I hope she comes back soon- among other things, I’d love to see this story updated.
October 23rd, 2007 at 8:24 pm
Yeah, I havn’t talked to her in ages or had any reviews…
October 30th, 2007 at 1:16 am
sorry I didn’t read the whole thing. 4 stars! once again sorry I hope my one star hasn’t affected your ratings…
November 3rd, 2007 at 11:25 pm
it hasn’t because this is still in the top tens! WOW NICOLE I LOVED UIT ! TOTALLY ABSORBED ME! WOW , THIS IS AWESOMNE!!!!!!!
November 6th, 2007 at 8:36 am
NICOLE WHERE ARE YOU!!!!
MISSING
Nicole_artist
REWARD IF FOUND: $0
hee hee
November 6th, 2007 at 11:01 pm
Missing:
Brothers brain
reward:
you keep it
if you can acctually find it:
GOOD JOB!
if u do find it:
u r a liar ( it doesn’t exist)
November 11th, 2007 at 6:32 pm
lol ,
thats the same with my brother …..
December 2nd, 2007 at 8:52 am
OMG! I am so sorry that I haven’t been here to update, for pretty much ever. I have been weighed down with school so much. Think 12 pm bedtime every night, if I’m lucky. It was worth it though. I got dux of my year. But now that it is nearly Christmas holidays I will have time to finish everything, and hopefully no one hates me. You can hate my story though. I just read it and realised how crap it is. I’ve gotten better in six months. I hope. XD
Does anyone reeeeeaaaaaaallly want me to continue, or would you all rather I start a better, new story, involving everyone in the AF world and maybe me? Because this story isn’t going anywhere real fast, and I could do much better now. So, what do you think?
December 2nd, 2007 at 9:59 am
i reallly badly dadly madly want u to contiune plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
December 3rd, 2007 at 12:38 am
I’m so glad you’re back, Nicole!
If you really feel this story isn’t going anywhere, then by all means, start a new one. You shouldn’t keep writing something you don’t enjoy. I do like this one a lot though, so it’s really up to you.
Oh, and somebody else commented and told you to continue, but I deleted it accidentally.
December 3rd, 2007 at 1:09 am
That would be me.
December 5th, 2007 at 5:26 am
finaly u update
I say if u want start a new story but pleeeeeeeeeze continu this one
December 5th, 2007 at 1:50 pm
HI!!! Yes I would like you to continnue , but then again this is all up to you…….. i do wish u would though.
May 11th, 2008 at 12:07 am
Please continue.I really want to know what happens next.Please please please.
June 30th, 2008 at 8:54 pm
Well, I think this story is awesome and really really really want you to continue, but it’s up to you: if you want, you can continue and make us all happy or if you don’t want, you can start a new one.
I found one flaw: Artemis was a little OOC in some parts but it doesn’t affect the story so go on! Still, it’s your decision.
August 4th, 2008 at 8:16 am
Woah!!!
Hey, I love it!
Maybe M and H could appear cause they were worried about Artemis. H could be there because of the eyes… hang on, that didn’t happen yet! So then maybe they could appear because they foud the dimension rift that was created when you pulled Artemis away. Butler was unsure of the thing, so he called them both. Then they accidentally get sucked in or something and appear… somewhere. So now you gotta go and find the dimension rift so they can all go back. *cry, sob* Cause you don’t know where the rift is in this world, but it it somwhere in Australia, your city. Something like.
I absolutely loved it, or what you’ve written so far. Just one thing. Maybe you should try and add more paragraghs, shorter too. I’m getting a headache reading the words.
Waiting, waiting, and waiting,
Helen
September 17th, 2008 at 3:46 pm
THIS IS FANTAZICAL!!
ONE OF THE BEST!!
PPLLLLEEEAAAASEEEEEEE WRITE MORE ASAP!!!
DON’T DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 26th, 2008 at 3:00 pm
I think nicloe_artist has officially disappeared. She… she… DIDN’T UPDATE FOR A H*** OF A LONG TIME!!!
I am majorly disappointed in you.
October 27th, 2008 at 10:20 pm
Helen, I just want to inform you that there is a city in Michigan whose name is ‘Hell’ so, yeah, in the context of that, you could safely use the word ‘Hell’.
Nicole, that first chapter was soooooooooo me, I was very depressed and bored after I had read The Time Paradox. I dunno if you’re till around; I’m new, but if you are,well I can understand you not wanting to finish something you don’t want to do. If that’s the case: please tell us how it would end, as in just a summary. Perhaps we can hire a ghost writer finish it, hmm?
Again, the H word is also a city in MI.
PLEASE.
November 28th, 2008 at 1:20 pm
Ya know, the last time she reviewed this was LAST YEAR. Which is like…
WHERE HAS SHE GONE???