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You Look Familiar

Summary: Who are the strange people who came flying(literally!) in to the Fowl's front room? And why do they look so familiar?

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11

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Chapter 1: My Wild Flying Rose

Artemis was composing an essay on an LEP website when a crash and a thud came from the front room. Thinking Holly might have dropped in, he ran to the front room.Β  He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw what was there. There was a boy and a girl with mechanical wings attached to their backs. The girl, her eyes blazing, turned to her companion. “Jack, didn’t I tell you racing would be a bad idea? Now Dad is going to have to pay for the damages.And anyways, you should have listened to me! I’m older.”

“You’re older by 2 minutes. And Dad can afford to pay for it, Rose! Don’t freak out.”

“I AM NOT FREAKING OUT! I AM PERFECTLY CALM! ”

“Excuse me,” Artemis interrupted. TheΒ  twins turned to him. It seemed strange that they were twins, but looked nothing alike. Rose had raven hair that was long and wavy and flashing hazel eyes. Jack had red hair that stuck up in every direction and brilliant blue eyes. They were both slender and very short. “You look familiar.” Artemis continued. “Do I know your father?” Rose, who apparently was the more impulsive one, answered. “I should hope you do! Dad, this imbecile almost broke my wings!” Artemis blinked. Did she just call him….Dad?

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11

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  1. in love with Arty 6302 September 8th, 2011 at 12:42 am 1

    FCD!!! that sounds really good so far. its kind of short but sounds like it’l make a good story. I want to find out who rose and jake are! I can definitely tell the resemblance without even seeing what they look like.

    4/s

    thx ten gazillion times!

  2. This is really good I can’t wait to see what is going on. Please update soon!!

    call me ignorant, but how do I make a chapter? I tried it, but it did not work.

  3. very good, please update i want to find out more.it looks very interesting.

    thx!

  4. http://artemisfowl.fangathering.com/fanfiction/help/adding-new-chapters
    There’s a link for how to insert chapters.

    This seems like it’ll turn into something cool, but right now, I just want to read more! You should probably write a bit more than this. I usually try to write about 1000 words each chapter, and this is only 414. I’m not saying you have to write that many, but I think more people would read this if it was longer. I don’t know.

    Okay, nice!

    Thanks, Trubs! I can’t chat on the Forum anymore- I got myself banned- so it’s great to see you!

  5. Banned? How’d that happen? O.o
    Anyways, I really liked this. I love how the twins are always arguing πŸ™‚ Nice job, update ! πŸ˜€

    I got banned cuz i made a mistake. Take my advice- NEVER EVER insult the Mods!

    Glad you like it!

  6. FantasyDevourer September 9th, 2011 at 3:17 am 6

    I really love when people come up with something where Arty’s in an awkward situation.

    There are some spelling/grammar issues, and it’s short, but it’s not that

    MERGED

    Sorry for the double post, (can you merge this??) but I need to finish my last comment (I accidentally clicked the button).

    Continued- bad.

    You’re not the only one with chapter issues- a few months ago whenever I did chapters it made my story black, and lately it just hasn’t worked.

    Dun’ worry, I got it for ya. ~WE

  7. now im hooked on this, update pls! :3

    MERGED

    Sorry for double post…but….WildeRose121
    please update! xD im really interested in yhur fanifc!

    thx! will update soon, I promise! (-:

  8. I like the ones like this. Its a little short but stll really good. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

    I’m workin on it! It’ll come soon! Glad you like it πŸ™‚

  9. I really love this story, you should really go on with it!!!!!

  10. Update update!!!!!! Five stars!

    You’ve got to include concrit in your comments. ~WE

  11. This was really good but A little short. I didn’t notice any mistakes and UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  12. Nice πŸ˜€ i love the update but its too short Dx haha I wanna read more :3 pwease update!

  13. The 6th chapter has a lot of action….poor Juliet. Well,I never thought of mulch and Juliet together, good job. Update.

    I like where your going here, and I just saw 1 mistake, good job!

    No doubleposts, please. ~WE

  14. Wow that was very interesting the seventh chapter. I wonder what happens next! :O

  15. This was very good and I didn’t notice any mistakes. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  16. I likey. Interesting…though I doubt Juliet and Mulch. Maybe one or two punctuation mistakes, otherwise no concrit! Can’t wait till next update!

  17. Yay Im in the story! πŸ˜€ lol xD

    Concrit. CON. CRIT. Please use it, guys ~WE

  18. LOVE IT!!!! im in the story!! please update!:)

    Hey dere. Could you try to add some crit to your comments? ^^ ~WE

    i love how you did me! i want to be more serious,thougth,but good! update! five stars! cheesecake!!! (wait,what?)

    No doubleposts, please ~WE

  19. Good update! Buttox was very funny XD lol

  20. This was really good as usual. I didn’t notice any mistakes and UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  21. artysgirl98fowlstar November 17th, 2011 at 1:37 am 21

    Hey can anyone please tell me how to upload new chapters and make it so that they are available by clicking the little squares at the top, instead of just uploading it onto the first chapter? I would really appreciate it! And also this story is awesome. update! I did not spot any mistakes.

    Type in an arrow facing out, the coding !–nextpage– and then another arrow facing out IN THE HTML tab. ~WE

  22. add this where tou want to insert a chapter
    and write in HTML view. Glad you like it!

  23. update, please!!! im getting inpatiant. soooorrrrryyyy.

    This is spam, Maribel. Try to include more in your comments. ~Fowlie

  24. -poke poke- Wilde are yhu still alive? o-o And if so where have yhu been?

  25. sorry Onyx! i gotta leave permanateley. I’ll miss you! πŸ™

  26. Awh okay Wilde u_u will miss yhu too!

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