Who is Jamie?

Written on April 28th, 2008 by Lydia Tall

Story Details

“Because of you, I never stray too far from the sidewalk, because of you, I learn to play on the safe side so I don’t get hurt,” Because Of You, Kelly Clarkson, Breakaway.

Artemis’ POV

I walked down the hall toward Jamie’s room to ask her a question. I knocked on her door and called her name.

“Come in,” came her muffled reply.

Opening her door I was surprised by what I saw. Jamie was dress in some sort of silver costume, and was doing what looked like a type of routine.

“What are you doing?” I asked politely.

“What—?” She replied, fumbling and falling down. “Oh Artemis, I didn’t notice you there, guess I was lost in old memories.”

“What are you doing?” I repeated.

“Hmm? Oh, I was doing a routine.” She replied getting up and brushing dust of her costume.

“What is the routine for?”

“It’s a dance routine that I learned back in New York. This is the costume our group wore, we did competitions and I had a lot of fun with it.” She told me, a feeling of sadness coloring her tone.

“I was going to ask if you knew someone named Jessica Noland?” I asked her.

“Maybe, what is she like?”

“She is a shady character whom is a run away from New York who came to Ireland.” I told her, “Apparently the hotel room she was staying in was broken into.”

“I know her. Why do you want to know.” She replied quietly, looking at the floor.

“Just wondering.”

“Artemis, if you wouldn’t mind I’d like to go back to my routine.” She told me.

“Is it alright if I watch?” I inquired.

“No,” Jamie said.

Without a word I left her alone and closed the door to her room.

Jamie’s POV

Jessica. I knew it wouldn’t work. I knew that she wouldn’t leave me alone; my parents might be trying to get me to forget all about her. Which would mean living in a lie; they might have accepted that, but I won’t. The whole reason for me being here is to try and avoid Jessica, looks like that plan is out the window.

Turning to begin my cocodina routine again, I caught a glimpse of my reflection. I had left out the fact that it was the traditional dress of Enchantress’ skilled in the use of a cocodina. A cocodina in the first place was a very peculiar weapon, it looked like a plastic beaded necklace, but was enchanted so that with a quick incantation it lenghted; even though it looked fairly harmless, it wasn’t. Only about twenty percent of the  members of the Enchantment knew how to use them, and very few vampires did. Which made me unique in some ways, yet I knew that if it came down to it, in a fair fight I might not win. Hopefully it would never come to that.

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7 Reviews for “Who is Jamie?”

  1. Star Jinin Says:

    *FCD*WOW! GREAT VOICE!!! Jamie sounds awesome, and Artemis isn’t that OOC! Rare for a fic like this! I caught a few spelling mistakes, though. 5/5

  2. Lydia Tall Says:

    Thanks, I’m not too surprised about the spelling mistakes though, especially if I was writing while listen to music.

  3. Lydia Tall Says:

    Please keep in mind that I randomly made up this math problem and I don’t know how to solve it or if that’s even possible. My scientific calculator couldn’t, then again I might have entered the equation wrong…Anyway please don’t try solving, you’ll just get a headache.

  4. HS9 Says:

    Sorry, I did it anyway. It was easy. The answer is (I think) 596,732,313,600. Your story is very good. I saw a few errors, but you can’t be perfect.

  5. Kcool Says:

    Very good read. I didn’t notice the spelling errors so they can’t hav been that bad. I listen to music while I write to! lol, acctually i listen to music while i do everything lol

  6. ambi Says:

    omg i absolutely loved ur story!! it doesnt ttly center around the artemis fowl books but thts good because it lets the reader focus more on the story your trying to tell instead of random details from the book.i luved how you wrote song lyrics at the begging of each chapter (especially after you revealed you listen to music wen u write) and tht they go with wat happens in the chapter. ur writing style is AMAZING as well as your ideas for the story. the style matches colfers wonderfully but still leaves room for your own, so i feel like im actually reading the af books!! the different point of views wer interesting 2. i also enjoy writing from different perspectives too but i NEVER thot of doing it like tht! the story was wonderful and suspensful. i couldnt stop reading if i wanted too! ther wer a few spelling mistakes but dont fret about them cuz they didnt distract the reader from the story.
    anyway i absolutely LOVED ur story and i cant wait till the next chapter!!! keep up the good work!!!!!

  7. ambi Says:

    hey just read the new chapter!! great work, cant wait to see whats next!
    –@m8!

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