Who is Jamie?

Written on April 28th, 2008 by Lydia Tall

Story Details

“They taped over your mouth, scribbled out the truth, with their lies, your little spies,” Crushcrushcrush, Paramore, Riot!

Ayunli’s POV

“Hey, doesn’t that girl in front of the bulletin board look like that vampire?” Andrea asked me.

Eyes narrowing, I answered “Yes, she does. Her aura is really strange; I don’t know how to place it.” And it was true, I couldn’t tell what it was, almost like an enchantress and a weak vampire. Weird. “Let’s go ask.” I smirked. And they all laughed at the thought of ‘asking’ her. As we got closer her shoulders stiffened and she whirled to face us. Smart little vampire.

Jamie’s POV

At the feeling of several magical auras, a.k.a. the auras of members of The Enchantment, I whirled.

“What are you doing her vampire?” The girl who looked like the leader of the group, asked as another girl grabbed me.

“I am not a vampire!” I protested, and in response the grip on my arm tightened.

“Your aura doesn’t exactly say that. It feels like a combination of a vampire’s and an enchantress’.” She taunted.

“I’m an enchantress dumbo.” I said in response.

“I don’t believe you.”

“I don’t have time for this, look I have the marks of The Enchantment. Does that satisfy you?” I asked, exposing the ones on my forearm.

“Hmm…you’re right, sorry. My name is Ayunli, also known as Li. These are my friends Jenna, Andrea, Ellen, and Erin.” Ayunli replied, pointing to everyone in turn.

“Jamie Marceto,” I said, and turned back to what I was looking at on the bulletin board. It was a poster advertising the auditions for the school musical: Fallen. Yes, I had always wanted to be in it, but they always said I was too young. I’ll show them! Though personally, I don’t really care what part I get, as long as I don’t get Joy. She’s too innocent and nice and ugh! For some reason most parts like that aren’t too fun.

“You’re thinking of auditioning?” Jenna asked.

“Ya, every other time I tried auditioning I was always told that I was too young and that they wouldn’t let anyone under sixteen in.

“Cool, I’m auditioning too. It should be really good. I really want the part of Lily.” Jenna said.

“I don’t really care what part I get as long as I don’t get Joy.” I told her.

“I know! She’s…almost like a Mary Sue, I hate her.”

“I’ll leave you two drama geeks to talk to each other.” Ayunli rolled her eyes.

~~~~~~*~~~~~~

Ayunli’s POV

“I still could have sworn that she was that vampire…whatshername—Jessica.” Andrea said.

“Did you google her like I asked?” I asked her.

“Don’t go Sharpay on me. Yes I did, and what I found is interesting…really interesting.” Andrea replied.

“As in?” I prompted.

“See for yourself.”

“Holy crap, you’re right. This is really interesting.” I said, gripping the print-outs.

“And this is a picture Michael found in her hotel room. The picture confirms what the print out says, it’s hard to believe…but, well, you can see for yourself.”

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8 Reviews for “Who is Jamie?”

  1. Star Jinin Says:

    *FCD*WOW! GREAT VOICE!!! Jamie sounds awesome, and Artemis isn’t that OOC! Rare for a fic like this! I caught a few spelling mistakes, though. 5/5

  2. Lydia Tall Says:

    Thanks, I’m not too surprised about the spelling mistakes though, especially if I was writing while listen to music.

  3. Lydia Tall Says:

    Please keep in mind that I randomly made up this math problem and I don’t know how to solve it or if that’s even possible. My scientific calculator couldn’t, then again I might have entered the equation wrong…Anyway please don’t try solving, you’ll just get a headache.

  4. HS9 Says:

    Sorry, I did it anyway. It was easy. The answer is (I think) 596,732,313,600. Your story is very good. I saw a few errors, but you can’t be perfect.

  5. Kcool Says:

    Very good read. I didn’t notice the spelling errors so they can’t hav been that bad. I listen to music while I write to! lol, acctually i listen to music while i do everything lol

  6. ambi Says:

    omg i absolutely loved ur story!! it doesnt ttly center around the artemis fowl books but thts good because it lets the reader focus more on the story your trying to tell instead of random details from the book.i luved how you wrote song lyrics at the begging of each chapter (especially after you revealed you listen to music wen u write) and tht they go with wat happens in the chapter. ur writing style is AMAZING as well as your ideas for the story. the style matches colfers wonderfully but still leaves room for your own, so i feel like im actually reading the af books!! the different point of views wer interesting 2. i also enjoy writing from different perspectives too but i NEVER thot of doing it like tht! the story was wonderful and suspensful. i couldnt stop reading if i wanted too! ther wer a few spelling mistakes but dont fret about them cuz they didnt distract the reader from the story.
    anyway i absolutely LOVED ur story and i cant wait till the next chapter!!! keep up the good work!!!!!

  7. ambi Says:

    hey just read the new chapter!! great work, cant wait to see whats next!
    –@m8!

  8. Lydia Tall Says:

    not the best of chapters and I didn’t get to end the chapter correctly cuz my parents were threatening to kick me off of the computer.

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