Who is Jamie?
Written on April 28th, 2008 by Lydia TallStory Details
(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loading ...“Won’t close my eyes and hide the truth inside, If I don’t make it, someone else will, Stand my ground,” Stand My Ground, Within Temptation, The Heart Of Everything (Bonus Track Version)
Jessica’s POV
I closed my phone, my hand trembling. I haven’t felt such a strong sense of unease since…well; since a time I don’t want to dwell on. Lacking something to do I got up and went to get my book. Next to it on the nightstand was a framed photograph.
“My former life,” I muttered bitterly, grabbing the picture and throwing it across the room. “Why did my life have to change so much after I became a vampire? I mean really, our parents didn’t know, but I thought she’d understand my decision. And I guessed wrong. I should have known, she being light and airy and artistic as she was, I should have known she wouldn’t have completely accepted me. Not like Sam, Tamie, Brent, Trevor, Chad, or Kyle.”
I stalked out of my room and left the house, looking for someone to feed off of. And that’s when the unfortunate soul passed; I grabbed him and knocked him unconscious. I fed off him and hid the body. Vampire bites always fade away shortly after someone has been bitten, but I’m not taking any chances. Anyone can figure it out, something Sam learned the hard way when her brother killed the person who had changed her. Now for some supplies.
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Jamie’s POV
After breakfast I asked Mr. and Mrs. Fowl if I could paint my room. Not knowing me very well, they said yes. Which means I can paint it like I painted my room back in NYC, not that I’m going to. I have something else in mind for the walls. Whether I’ll actually be able to paint it, I don’t know, but I can always try.
“What color do you plan on painting your room?” Juliet asked me. “I know it would probably be really bright and colorful.”
“You’ll see,” I replied, and she would; when I was done.
“Very descriptive, could you be a bit more specific?” She asked.
“Hmm…nope.” I told her, grinning.
“Ah, come on. Don’t be all mysterious and secretive.” She pouted.
“You haven’t seen mysterious or secretive until you’ve met…my friend.” I said, quietly. I continued a bit louder, “I’m going to go unpack.” I turned and walked away before she could see the tears brimming in my eyes. Damn it, why can’t I keep better control of my emotions like my friend? She wouldn’t have shown any emotion if she were in my place.
After ducking into my room and locking the door I grabbed my iPod. Putting my headphones on, I played the My December playlist.
May 14th, 2008 at 3:43 am
*FCD*WOW! GREAT VOICE!!! Jamie sounds awesome, and Artemis isn’t that OOC! Rare for a fic like this! I caught a few spelling mistakes, though. 5/5
May 17th, 2008 at 2:08 am
Thanks, I’m not too surprised about the spelling mistakes though, especially if I was writing while listen to music.
May 21st, 2008 at 4:14 am
Please keep in mind that I randomly made up this math problem and I don’t know how to solve it or if that’s even possible. My scientific calculator couldn’t, then again I might have entered the equation wrong…Anyway please don’t try solving, you’ll just get a headache.
May 21st, 2008 at 4:13 pm
Sorry, I did it anyway. It was easy. The answer is (I think) 596,732,313,600. Your story is very good. I saw a few errors, but you can’t be perfect.
May 21st, 2008 at 9:48 pm
Very good read. I didn’t notice the spelling errors so they can’t hav been that bad. I listen to music while I write to! lol, acctually i listen to music while i do everything lol
June 16th, 2008 at 9:31 pm
omg i absolutely loved ur story!! it doesnt ttly center around the artemis fowl books but thts good because it lets the reader focus more on the story your trying to tell instead of random details from the book.i luved how you wrote song lyrics at the begging of each chapter (especially after you revealed you listen to music wen u write) and tht they go with wat happens in the chapter. ur writing style is AMAZING as well as your ideas for the story. the style matches colfers wonderfully but still leaves room for your own, so i feel like im actually reading the af books!! the different point of views wer interesting 2. i also enjoy writing from different perspectives too but i NEVER thot of doing it like tht! the story was wonderful and suspensful. i couldnt stop reading if i wanted too! ther wer a few spelling mistakes but dont fret about them cuz they didnt distract the reader from the story.
anyway i absolutely LOVED ur story and i cant wait till the next chapter!!! keep up the good work!!!!!
June 22nd, 2008 at 4:29 pm
hey just read the new chapter!! great work, cant wait to see whats next!
–@m8!
July 12th, 2008 at 1:51 am
not the best of chapters and I didn’t get to end the chapter correctly cuz my parents were threatening to kick me off of the computer.