Who is Jamie?
Written on April 28th, 2008 by Lydia TallStory Details
(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
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“My whole world is changing, I don’t know where to turn, I can leave you waiting, but I can’t stay and watch the city burn, watching it burn,” I’ll Try, Jesse McCartney, Disney Mania 4
Jamie’s POV
Yawning, I woke up and looked at the clock on the bedside table: 10:27. Time to get up and seize the day. Five more minutes. I thought, going to sleep again. Well, I was going to when I remembered where I was. Groaning I got out of bed, and grabbed my iPod. I changed, and headed downstairs. Before I got there however, I ran into a girl, this puzzled me. I thought that I was the only girl here.
“Hi Jamie, I’m Juilet, Butler’s little sister.” Juilet told me. “What’s New York City like?”
“Let’s see, it’s: smelly, loud, big, not that friendly, and it gives me a headache.” I responded truthfully. “But I love being so close to broadway. I love acting and writing, and I love watching and being in musicals. So New York City isn’t completely aweful.”
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Swearing Jessica jumped out of her chair. Maybe it wasn’t the best idea to put cell phone on vibrate in her back pocket. “Hello?” she answered.
“Hello Jessica, it’s me, Tamie. Are you in Ireland like I asked?”
“Yes, but why am I here?” Jessica asked calmly.
“That’s why I called, to give you more details about your mission. But first you have to promise me something.” Tamie told her, “Promise me that you won’t let your heart get in the way of your mission.”
“I promise,” Jessica replied, “Why would it?”
“Are you sure you want to know?” Tamie asked.
“Yes,” Jessica replied impatiently, she was cranky because she hadn’t fed in a while.
“It’s Jamie.” Tamie told her.
“What about Jamie?” Jessica asked, her already pale face getting paler, if that was even possible.
“She’s staying with your target, and knowing her, she’ll try to stop you. No matter what, you can’t let her stop you. No matter what.” Tamie said.
“You mean…”
“Yes Jessica, I mean that if it comes down to it, kill her.” Tamie took a deep breathe, “I really hope it doesn’t come down to it, for your and Sam’s sake.” She then went on to explain her mission.
Some other stories by Lydia Tall:
- Update on A Shadowy Assassin
- The South Star: Zatolia
- A Shadowy Assassin
- They Pushed Her
- When Things Fall Apart
May 14th, 2008 at 3:43 am
*FCD*WOW! GREAT VOICE!!! Jamie sounds awesome, and Artemis isn’t that OOC! Rare for a fic like this! I caught a few spelling mistakes, though. 5/5
May 17th, 2008 at 2:08 am
Thanks, I’m not too surprised about the spelling mistakes though, especially if I was writing while listen to music.
May 21st, 2008 at 4:14 am
Please keep in mind that I randomly made up this math problem and I don’t know how to solve it or if that’s even possible. My scientific calculator couldn’t, then again I might have entered the equation wrong…Anyway please don’t try solving, you’ll just get a headache.
May 21st, 2008 at 4:13 pm
Sorry, I did it anyway. It was easy. The answer is (I think) 596,732,313,600. Your story is very good. I saw a few errors, but you can’t be perfect.
May 21st, 2008 at 9:48 pm
Very good read. I didn’t notice the spelling errors so they can’t hav been that bad. I listen to music while I write to! lol, acctually i listen to music while i do everything lol
June 16th, 2008 at 9:31 pm
omg i absolutely loved ur story!! it doesnt ttly center around the artemis fowl books but thts good because it lets the reader focus more on the story your trying to tell instead of random details from the book.i luved how you wrote song lyrics at the begging of each chapter (especially after you revealed you listen to music wen u write) and tht they go with wat happens in the chapter. ur writing style is AMAZING as well as your ideas for the story. the style matches colfers wonderfully but still leaves room for your own, so i feel like im actually reading the af books!! the different point of views wer interesting 2. i also enjoy writing from different perspectives too but i NEVER thot of doing it like tht! the story was wonderful and suspensful. i couldnt stop reading if i wanted too! ther wer a few spelling mistakes but dont fret about them cuz they didnt distract the reader from the story.
anyway i absolutely LOVED ur story and i cant wait till the next chapter!!! keep up the good work!!!!!
June 22nd, 2008 at 4:29 pm
hey just read the new chapter!! great work, cant wait to see whats next!
–@m8!
July 12th, 2008 at 1:51 am
not the best of chapters and I didn’t get to end the chapter correctly cuz my parents were threatening to kick me off of the computer.