Walkin’ in a winter wonderland…
Written on December 10th, 2007 by captain_artys_girlxxStory Details
Loading ...Fowl manor. Dublin , Ireland. 5:40pm
Artemis had just finished his twentieth victorious game of solitaire when he closed the power book. Butler knocked on the door.
” Artemis, sir, I’m heading out to the airport to pick up Livia and her brothers now.” He told Artemis.
” All right then, thank-you Butler” He answered. Artemis’s heart sped up. Any minute now and he would have Livia in his arms again. There was another knock on the door.
” Arty dear are you in here?” came a feminine voice. It was his mother, Angeline.
” Yes mother, I’m here” he replied.
His mother walked in wearing a cream coloured silk dress and a caramel brown jacket over the top. His father walked in behind her wearing, just like Artemis, an Armani suit.
” Artemis dear how are you” asked Angeline sitting down next to him.
” I’m fine mother, why do ask” he said to her.
” we just wanted to make sure you weren’t going insane Arty” his father joked. Artemis smiled up at them.
“No father, I am still sane, but I won’t manage much longer” he joked back. They all laughed.
Angeline stoked her sons hair and looked at him.
” Artemis, you’re father and I will be going Christmas shopping soon all right? we’ll wait here until our guests come though okay? She informed him.
” Yes Mother that’s fine” He answered. His parents smiled at him. Angeline gave him a kiss on the forehead and Artemis Senior gave his son a hug.
” Not much longer eh?” he said.
“yes, I’m dying to see her again” Artemis said to his father.
“True Love is a wondrous thing. You meet the woman of your dreams and you could spend the rest of your life. You’ve made a good choice Arty. She’s smart, caring, kind. You two are so happy together.” He said giving his son a smile. Artemis smiled back. His father had a point. Livia and him never seemed to disagree on much.
” Father, may I ask you, how did you know mother was the one? How did you know she was your dream woman?” Artemis asked his father, loosing his smile. Artemis senior still smiled.
” Trust me Artemis, if you think she’s the one, you can feel it” He said smiling at him. he gave him a hug, a pat on the shoulder, then started walking to the door. He turned around.
” You’ll just know” he smiled. Artemis was left thinking about his fathers advice. He grinned to himself. It seemed to confirm his thoughts. Livia was the one. He went back up stairs to his room, and got himself ready for her arrival.
Some other stories by captain_artys_girlxx:
- The Lost Treasures of Tenochtitlan.
- Dreams and the Truth
- Keep Holding On (songfic)
- If Artemis came to my school......
- Artemis's first love (part 2)
December 10th, 2007 at 6:54 am
(i’m the first comment yay!!!)OMG I LOVED IT!!! Write more!
December 10th, 2007 at 12:02 pm
sooooooooo sweet ,, hurry up with chapter two!
December 10th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
I am a little confused in the first part of the first chappy but I only got to read 2 chapter 2.
Good from wht I read so far! 
December 14th, 2007 at 2:47 am
AAAWWWW!*Puppydog eyes*
I love that. I CANT WAIT TILL CHAPTER 2
December 14th, 2007 at 12:00 pm
well here is chapter 2. I still have to finish chapter 3 though. I hope it’ll be done by comp due day. Peace out y’all!
love you guys!!
xoxox
December 14th, 2007 at 10:40 pm
oh yeah make arty’s life more dramatic then ever by killing livia!!! continue!!!
December 15th, 2007 at 7:09 am
well saying that livia’s going to die is a pretty big giveaway… is livia short for something, like olivia?
December 15th, 2007 at 5:08 pm
I think so….
December 16th, 2007 at 1:21 am
WHAT! Livia is going to die!:0
December 17th, 2007 at 3:03 am
Well actually, Livia isn’t short for anything, Livia is her name…actually it’s…..AHHHH!! Not gonna tell!!…But yeah, Livia may or may not die, You’ll have to let the suspence for chapter 3 kill you. Lol, I’m trying to finish it as quick as possible. Enjoy!!
xox
December 23rd, 2007 at 10:46 pm
Wow!!!!!!! How awesome!!!! the part were Livia died made me cry!!!! then she was saved and I laughed and laughed!! very good!
December 24th, 2007 at 12:30 am
Awwww, thanx luv :blush: i just want everyone to enjoy the story as much as i enjoyed writing it for you…Merry christmas, happy hanakuh or whatever you celebrate! Wish you all the best and a joyful new year!!
xox
January 13th, 2008 at 5:15 am
I only spent ten seconds reading this and I already spotted a serious cussword! Also, I think the text is too buched up together and hard to read. Not that I’m the grammar police, but I do see some grammar errors.
January 19th, 2008 at 8:14 pm
Well, I haven’t read much yet, but I promise I’ll read more soon. So I’ll be able to comment more then. But so far, it’s pretty good.
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:04 am
WOW! it’s fantastic! i love this story!! It’s adorable, romantic, actiony and mysterious as well! It is totally FAB!!!
poor Livia, she didn’t deserve to die! and then she got healed that was awesome….totally genius!
February 12th, 2008 at 8:30 am
Ok thanks for the comments. Umm, is there anything else? Not being ungrateful for all the awesome coments, but how can I improve this story? (we need a school report on stories we wrote. *groan*)
April 24th, 2008 at 2:33 pm
that was sooo gud! haha i stayed up nearly al night reading al the chapters lol XD
by the way, wth is rong with star jinin? gosh, just learn 2 read a story and like it, not criticize every little mistake.
This is BlackOpal- I edited your comment, please do not double post. Also: this site encourages constructive criticism. Star Jinin is just helping the writer grow, and those reviews are much more valuable than ones that just say “great” or “update”.
April 24th, 2008 at 9:06 pm
HOW IN THE H*** DO YOU THINK OF ALL THIS?!?! 5/5!!!!!
April 29th, 2008 at 8:40 am
wow, thanks karnivool and simetra, those are great comments, and sorry to Opal who had to edit something, anyway, it’s great that u like it
sorry it kept u up and I just think of it as an idea and it just comes out lol
Keep On Rockin’
Livy xx
May 10th, 2008 at 7:13 am
OMFG! So good! More about Livia & Arty!
May 25th, 2008 at 5:43 pm
Alright. Could use a little proof reading may be necessary. Can’t rate it yet. Please continue!
May 27th, 2008 at 9:02 am
Continue? Girl, this story is done, and done O.o