Untimely meeting ;)
Written on February 14th, 2008 by Star JininStory Details
(14 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
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Artemis, Butler, Holly, and Mulch were confined in a room, watching Root’s recycling ceremony on a screen. Holly didn’t bother hiding the silent tears that poured from her face.
“Root would’ve been proud, Holly. Haven is here today because of what you did” Artemis mused.
“Maybe. If I was a bit smarter, maybe Root would be here too”
“I’ve been thinking. There was no way out of that chute. Not without prior knowledge”
“Thanks, Artemis, that’s a nice thing to say. You’re not going soft, are you?”
“I’m not sure. Half of me wants to be a crimminal, and half of me wants to be a normal teenager”
“Well, don’t worry, mud boy. I’ll watch you to make sure you stay on the straight and narrow”
Artemis stayed silent for the rest of the day.
“Over here!” Several LEPrecon members rushed over to the vaults. There was a break-in, and not even Foaly’s defensive measures were activated. The intruder was incredibly smart to fool Foaly. The problem was: Who could it be?
Artemis smiled through the layers of sweat on his face. He picked up a golden object, and smirked as the letters on it came into view.
Property of the LEP
The gold was in a equivelent of fifty million Irish pounds. Butler came in through the doorway.
“Was the deception really necessary?”
“It was no deception, old friend. We were just taking advantage of our situation”
Foaly’s sensors were a piece of cake to surpass. An evil grin leaked through his features. Old habits die hard.
February 14th, 2008 at 5:58 am
FCD OHH interesting! I like it! Please keep going!
February 14th, 2008 at 2:53 pm
OMG!! This is AWSOME!!!! You ARE going to enter this in the Elsworld-Contest, aren’t you? You have to! You would definitely win! This is so awsome. I could continue forever and ever about how wasome your story is. Good grammar and spelling. Plus a good storyline! Everything is perfect! You HAVE to continue! I’ll be sure to be back more! 5 stars!
February 14th, 2008 at 9:29 pm
OMG!!!!!! I love this! It doesn’t SOUND or LOOK like you have writer’s block.
February 14th, 2008 at 11:40 pm
YES! This is for the contest! I am bad at this sort of Elseworld writing and I stayed up ALL night typing this! I’m glad you liked it!
February 18th, 2008 at 3:49 am
I’m entering this in the Elseworlds Contest for you, may I just ask what your “What If” Question is? It’ll help me judge it.
February 18th, 2008 at 8:25 pm
Oh! I know! What if the LEP didn’t think she was dead and was still after her! That’s a good idea because… well… it’s a good idea!
February 20th, 2008 at 5:16 am
I love the update! Well done!
February 20th, 2008 at 10:36 pm
Good job! I love it!
March 6th, 2008 at 10:32 pm
Love it once again! The only thing is, at the beginning of chapter 5 there’s the start of a sentence but it doesn’t finish. Just thought you should know that.