Untimely meeting ;)
Written on February 14th, 2008 by Star JininStory Details
(14 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Loading ...Foaly’s eyes blinked thrice nervoulsly as a proximity alarm flashed. One word came to his mind. Holly. He tried to press the “OK” button before…
“Oh, what do we have here?” Sool stepped silently to the computer screen, making Foaly jump two feet into the air. He spotted Foaly’s finger slowly hovering over the delete button and smirked.
“Send Retrieval One to…Sicilly”
Foaly was about to protest before he’d realized his place but was determined to help Holly and find out the truth. There was no way that Holly had killed Julius. And now with the news of the core probe… things were getting more and more complicated…
Foaly trodded into the Argon Clinic. He had a sudden suspicion about the whole ordeal.
Artemis glanced at his watch. The Retrieval should be there in two minutes.
Bzzz…
Screw that. Make that right now. Artemis turned to find a dozen Neutrino 3000s pointed at his back.
“Fowl, is it? Are you surrendering?” The booming voice of Sool came from behind the Retrieval.
“Not exactly…we have something…no…someone you might want to see” Artemis stepped forward calmly. Opal’s struggling figure could be seen clearly be Sool.
“Ah ha!” Sool pointed a finger at them. “You’ve clearly helped Opal Koboi escape from the Argon clinic! That thing in there right now must have been a clone!” Sool clearly wasn’t as stupid as he looked.
“Actually, I have found sufficient proof that this whole scheme just may have been completely orchestrated by Opal herself.” Foaly stuck his head out of the shuttle.
“Centaur! I warned you not to come! Your budget has just been slashed by five weeks worth!”
“I took Rectimager scans from the ‘Opal’ in Argon’s clinic.You might want to see them” Foaly went on coolly.
Sool took the images from Foaly, and blanched. He snarled.
“Fine. We shall take them all back to the underground while the council decides over this”
February 14th, 2008 at 5:58 am
FCD OHH interesting! I like it! Please keep going!
February 14th, 2008 at 2:53 pm
OMG!! This is AWSOME!!!! You ARE going to enter this in the Elsworld-Contest, aren’t you? You have to! You would definitely win! This is so awsome. I could continue forever and ever about how wasome your story is. Good grammar and spelling. Plus a good storyline! Everything is perfect! You HAVE to continue! I’ll be sure to be back more! 5 stars!
February 14th, 2008 at 9:29 pm
OMG!!!!!! I love this! It doesn’t SOUND or LOOK like you have writer’s block.
February 14th, 2008 at 11:40 pm
YES! This is for the contest! I am bad at this sort of Elseworld writing and I stayed up ALL night typing this! I’m glad you liked it!
February 18th, 2008 at 3:49 am
I’m entering this in the Elseworlds Contest for you, may I just ask what your “What If” Question is? It’ll help me judge it.
February 18th, 2008 at 8:25 pm
Oh! I know! What if the LEP didn’t think she was dead and was still after her! That’s a good idea because… well… it’s a good idea!
February 20th, 2008 at 5:16 am
I love the update! Well done!
February 20th, 2008 at 10:36 pm
Good job! I love it!
March 6th, 2008 at 10:32 pm
Love it once again! The only thing is, at the beginning of chapter 5 there’s the start of a sentence but it doesn’t finish. Just thought you should know that.