Untimely meeting ;)

Written on February 14th, 2008 by Star Jinin

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BOOM. The door finally gave away as the steel crumbled. The faces of the triumphant LEPretrieval members could be seen by the occupants of Fowl Manor…if they were there, that is… if the four were there. Ark Sool stood there silently, dumbfounded while Foaly secretly breathed a sigh of relief.

Meanwhile, under the wine cellar, Artemis, Holly, Butler, and Mulch were currently tunneling their way out. It was lucky that the LEP had not brought time-stop satelites with them or the escape option would have been ruled out.

Mulch paused for a second.

“What is it, Mulch?” Holly asked.

“This soil has seawater mixed in it. At a guess, I’d say we’re above Dublin harbor” Mulch mumbled through a mouthful of earth. Artemis nodded and Mulch began eating up.

The ground rumbled for five seconds before the concrete was blasted apart by Mulch’s flatuence. Everyone crawled out as they gasped for air. Thankfully, Dublin Harbor was almost abandoned as everyone were all focused on the evening news. After all, mankind were going down to the center of the earth for the first time.

“Okay, we’re out, now what?” Holly coughed. Their situation was looking quite grim. They didn’t know where Opal was, what she was planning, and they were almost totally unarmed.

“Yeah. They’re sending in a probe to the center of the Earth. That Zito is a genius. Any other scientist would say that this project couldn’t be done for at least another century” A hippie man talking on the phone passed them and did not seem to notice the four mud-stained escapees. 

“I have a good idea…” Artemis and Holly growled simtaneously. Artemis looked bewildered.

“No, I meant what’s she’s up to”

“Oh. But I have a good plan

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9 Reviews for “Untimely meeting ;)”

  1. Olive Says:

    FCD OHH interesting! I like it! Please keep going!

  2. 017350 Says:

    OMG!! This is AWSOME!!!! You ARE going to enter this in the Elsworld-Contest, aren’t you? You have to! You would definitely win! This is so awsome. I could continue forever and ever about how wasome your story is. Good grammar and spelling. Plus a good storyline! Everything is perfect! You HAVE to continue! I’ll be sure to be back more! 5 stars! :D

  3. ARTY'SELFFRIEND Says:

    OMG!!!!!! I love this! It doesn’t SOUND or LOOK like you have writer’s block.

  4. Star Jinin Says:

    YES! This is for the contest! I am bad at this sort of Elseworld writing and I stayed up ALL night typing this! I’m glad you liked it! :D

  5. P5YCHIC Says:

    I’m entering this in the Elseworlds Contest for you, may I just ask what your “What If” Question is? It’ll help me judge it.

  6. Star Jinin Says:

    Oh! I know! What if the LEP didn’t think she was dead and was still after her! That’s a good idea because… well… it’s a good idea!

  7. Olive Says:

    I love the update! Well done!

  8. foalygenius Says:

    Good job! I love it!

  9. Olive Says:

    Love it once again! The only thing is, at the beginning of chapter 5 there’s the start of a sentence but it doesn’t finish. Just thought you should know that.

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