Twists and Turns
Written on March 2nd, 2008 by HunterStory Details
(4 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
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Minerva knocked on the door, and waited. A minute later, she saw a light turn green and the door open up. She walked in.
It was a small room, with a control panel on one side, and the security monitors on the other side. Amy and Sarah where sitting one side of a table for four. Minerva choose a seat and sat down.
“Was the distraction completed?”
“Yes.”
“Where is the room?”
“2nd floor, 10th room to the right.”
The Leader and Co-Leader turned around and started to whisper. Minerva couldn’t hear what they were saying. Finally, Sarah came to face Minerva.
“All right. Thank you. You may leave.’
“And the calculations?”
Sarah sighed. Scowling, she took a piece of paper out of her pocket. Minerva unfolded it and studied the piece of paper. After a minute, she smiled.
“Thank you.” She said, “Demon’s, you’re mine!”
“Yah, yah, yah, go crazy with it. Good bye.”
Minerva walked out of the room, hugging the calculations.
Amy sighed, “We’re going to regret giving her that.”
“It’s too late to change anything. We have to move on.”
“Yah, I know. Its just that… All right, what’s wrong now?”
Sarah was grimacing, and continually moving her jaw. She was obviously in pain or a state of annoyance.
“It’s just… These things are so annoying! Can I please take them off? I mean, no one’s watching…”
“All right, just put them back on when we land, I’m going to get a breath of fresh air.”
“Thanks a million.” Sarah reached up to her black hair and took it off. A wig. Then she grabbed her ears and face line and pulled, revealing a cute little face and sharp, pointed ears. Amy had always thought she had looked a bit like Cupid. Finally she reached into her mouth and spat out a voice changer. Meanwhile, Sarah had reached the control panel and pressed a big red button. The front hood of the ship rose up, showing the railing and the beautiful starry night. The two of them stood outside as they cruised through the night sky.
Hah! Hah! Hah! Who could this “Sarah” be? Hint: Look at what Amy thinks “Sarah” looks like. Remember to review!
March 2nd, 2008 at 3:32 am
Please reveiw!!! More chapters coming soon!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 3:33 am
*FCD* Nice! So is this…the Minerva that we know and hate?
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:26 am
Yep. And by the way, Minerva is still a genuis, she just have certain skills (shooting), and she was hired for her fortune, skills, and contacts by a certain someone who you will find out later on.
March 2nd, 2008 at 5:30 am
Oh, and are you new on this site?
March 2nd, 2008 at 7:02 am
I like it! I actually like the real Minerva… That’s what differs me from most of this site’s authors. My name’s Olive on here, welcome to the site. I don’t think I’ve seen a story by you before. You can call me Olive or Katherine, whatever works.
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:18 am
welcome to the site! i like where this is going….minerva’s ok ….nothing against her. plz continue
March 2nd, 2008 at 7:33 pm
I dont have anything against her either lol, but I love your writting , and Im glad we have another awesum writter here, Im Mahi101Af Fan but u can call me Mahi if you want,I love this story and cant wait to read more from you!, Now wait, so how old is arty? and does this mean that in this story Minerva and arty never met before (aka book five never happened?)
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:17 pm
It happens after the Opal Deception. Opal escapes form Jail… again. What kind of security does the LEP have. It must suck!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:33 pm
Actually, Opal was kept in a clinic, not a LEP cell. She’s also a genius so it didn’t surprise me that she outsmarted Grub and Argon…and Foaly…
March 2nd, 2008 at 9:52 pm
lol, I like the update.
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:29 am
Nice update. Welcome to the site! Hope you have fun, I’m Symojen. >:) jkjk
March 3rd, 2008 at 2:09 am
I like your story! And welcome! I’m Foalygenius! Please update!
March 8th, 2008 at 7:31 pm
Oh! I KNEW it was Holly when it mentioned cupid AND she had an inviatation. Also, you should have also given a motive. Why did they need to know the 10th room?
March 8th, 2008 at 8:44 pm
Is chapter six REALLY long? Whenever my computor tries to load it, it locks up and won’t do anything. I don’t have a problem with anything else loading! Please explain the sixth chapter? It still wont load!!
March 8th, 2008 at 8:50 pm
Oh NVM it just loaded and I just read it …
OMG!!! HOLLY!!!! BAD!!! GIRL!!!! NO!!!
March 9th, 2008 at 6:09 pm
This is to Star Jinin:
This story is called Twists and Turns for goddness sake!! You will find out what it means later on in the story!!!!!
March 18th, 2008 at 5:51 pm
I can’t wait until you update
March 23rd, 2008 at 7:29 am
Hellos, I am shanette, welcome (the usual, LOL) and I really like your story! Update soon!!
March 24th, 2008 at 9:41 pm
I like the story, but I think you should have added more to it. I also like to know who the girl is and why she’s trying to kill Artemis. Keep up the good work.
March 24th, 2008 at 9:43 pm
I like the old Minevera better. This Minevera is kind of scary.
March 24th, 2008 at 9:45 pm
I just skimmed over chapter 6, but compared to some of the other chapters, this is the best by far.