Twists and Turns

Written on March 2nd, 2008 by Hunter

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  • Category: General
  • Author: Hunter
  • Word Count: 2204
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                 Minerva waited until they were gone, then spat at the video camera. This gave her enough time to slide a laser from underneath her teeth and melting her bonds. Then she sent a small laser fan, which instantly sank into the camera’s working, hacking into the feed. To anyone watching, Minerva was now, and always would be held back by her bonds.
          She quickly melted her chains and got off the table. Then, smirking, she cut a hole in the wall that was shaped like Fowl Manor (talk about insult to injury!!) She looked back. The laser fan had ran out of juice. The camera was back to normal. She smiled broadly, waved, and ran away.
          Artemis suddenly noticed that Minerva wasn’t in her bonds. He noticed the Fowl Manor shaped hole in the wall. He noticed Minerva waving at him.
          “BUTLER!! GET OVER HERE!!”

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21 Reviews for “Twists and Turns”

  1. Hunter Says:

    Please reveiw!!! More chapters coming soon!!!

  2. Star Jinin Says:

    *FCD* Nice! So is this…the Minerva that we know and hate? :P

  3. Hunter Says:

    Yep. And by the way, Minerva is still a genuis, she just have certain skills (shooting), and she was hired for her fortune, skills, and contacts by a certain someone who you will find out later on.

  4. Star Jinin Says:

    Oh, and are you new on this site?

  5. Olive Says:

    I like it! I actually like the real Minerva… That’s what differs me from most of this site’s authors. My name’s Olive on here, welcome to the site. I don’t think I’ve seen a story by you before. You can call me Olive or Katherine, whatever works.

  6. lil.arty Says:

    welcome to the site! i like where this is going….minerva’s ok ….nothing against her. plz continue

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    I dont have anything against her either lol, but I love your writting , and Im glad we have another awesum writter here, Im Mahi101Af Fan but u can call me Mahi if you want,I love this story and cant wait to read more from you!, Now wait, so how old is arty? and does this mean that in this story Minerva and arty never met before (aka book five never happened?)

  8. Hunter Says:

    It happens after the Opal Deception. Opal escapes form Jail… again. What kind of security does the LEP have. It must suck!!!

  9. Star Jinin Says:

    Actually, Opal was kept in a clinic, not a LEP cell. She’s also a genius so it didn’t surprise me that she outsmarted Grub and Argon…and Foaly…

  10. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    lol, I like the update.

  11. symojen Says:

    Nice update. Welcome to the site! Hope you have fun, I’m Symojen. >:) jkjk

  12. foalygenius Says:

    I like your story! And welcome! I’m Foalygenius! Please update!

  13. Star Jinin Says:

    Oh! I KNEW it was Holly when it mentioned cupid AND she had an inviatation. Also, you should have also given a motive. Why did they need to know the 10th room?

  14. Simetra16 Says:

    Is chapter six REALLY long? Whenever my computor tries to load it, it locks up and won’t do anything. I don’t have a problem with anything else loading! Please explain the sixth chapter? It still wont load!!

  15. Simetra16 Says:

    Oh NVM it just loaded and I just read it …

    OMG!!! HOLLY!!!! BAD!!! GIRL!!!! NO!!!

  16. Hunter Says:

    This is to Star Jinin:
    This story is called Twists and Turns for goddness sake!! You will find out what it means later on in the story!!!!!

  17. ArtemistheHunter Says:

    I can’t wait until you update

  18. Shanette Says:

    Hellos, I am shanette, welcome (the usual, LOL) and I really like your story! Update soon!!

  19. Opal Koboi Twin Says:

    I like the story, but I think you should have added more to it. I also like to know who the girl is and why she’s trying to kill Artemis. Keep up the good work.

  20. Opal Koboi Twin Says:

    I like the old Minevera better. This Minevera is kind of scary.

  21. Opal Koboi Twin Says:

    I just skimmed over chapter 6, but compared to some of the other chapters, this is the best by far.

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