Twists and Turns
Written on March 2nd, 2008 by HunterStory Details
(4 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
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The girl woke up, and snapped her eyes open. She seemed to be in a white room, with only one door, and that had a thumbprint scanner on it. She seemed to have been strapped to a cold table by the belly, wrists, and ankles. Her helmet had been removed, and her clothes felt like they had been searched quite expertly. She tested her movable muscles, they seemed fine.
Twenty seconds later, three people filed into the room, a huge muscleman, a pale, vampire-like, boy, and a extremely short… thing that had adult like features. The pale one spoke.
“What is your name?”
The girl did not answer, and bit her lip.
Artemis sighed, and gestured to his bodyguard. “Butler?”
Butler walked over to a control panel, set a dial, and pressed a green button. An electric shock zapped through her body, shaking her to the bone.
The girl spat out the word before she could stop herself. “Minerva.”
“Where do you come from?” This was accompanied by another shock.
“No Name.”
Artemis frowned. Groups with no names were usually harder to find and more advanced then regular gangs.
“Leader and Co-leader?”
Artemis noticed that Minerva was staring at something behind him. He followed her gaze to see Holly staring back. But her eyes seemed to give something away. What was it? Hate? Despise? Maybe even directions? Artemis shrugged off the feeling and turned back to hear Minerva’s answer.
“Leader: Amy Genforsh. Co-Leader: Sarah Flen.”
Artemis Fowl the Second looked at her for a long time. Then he turned around and walked out of the room.
March 2nd, 2008 at 3:32 am
Please reveiw!!! More chapters coming soon!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 3:33 am
*FCD* Nice! So is this…the Minerva that we know and hate?
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:26 am
Yep. And by the way, Minerva is still a genuis, she just have certain skills (shooting), and she was hired for her fortune, skills, and contacts by a certain someone who you will find out later on.
March 2nd, 2008 at 5:30 am
Oh, and are you new on this site?
March 2nd, 2008 at 7:02 am
I like it! I actually like the real Minerva… That’s what differs me from most of this site’s authors. My name’s Olive on here, welcome to the site. I don’t think I’ve seen a story by you before. You can call me Olive or Katherine, whatever works.
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:18 am
welcome to the site! i like where this is going….minerva’s ok ….nothing against her. plz continue
March 2nd, 2008 at 7:33 pm
I dont have anything against her either lol, but I love your writting , and Im glad we have another awesum writter here, Im Mahi101Af Fan but u can call me Mahi if you want,I love this story and cant wait to read more from you!, Now wait, so how old is arty? and does this mean that in this story Minerva and arty never met before (aka book five never happened?)
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:17 pm
It happens after the Opal Deception. Opal escapes form Jail… again. What kind of security does the LEP have. It must suck!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:33 pm
Actually, Opal was kept in a clinic, not a LEP cell. She’s also a genius so it didn’t surprise me that she outsmarted Grub and Argon…and Foaly…
March 2nd, 2008 at 9:52 pm
lol, I like the update.
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:29 am
Nice update. Welcome to the site! Hope you have fun, I’m Symojen. >:) jkjk
March 3rd, 2008 at 2:09 am
I like your story! And welcome! I’m Foalygenius! Please update!
March 8th, 2008 at 7:31 pm
Oh! I KNEW it was Holly when it mentioned cupid AND she had an inviatation. Also, you should have also given a motive. Why did they need to know the 10th room?
March 8th, 2008 at 8:44 pm
Is chapter six REALLY long? Whenever my computor tries to load it, it locks up and won’t do anything. I don’t have a problem with anything else loading! Please explain the sixth chapter? It still wont load!!
March 8th, 2008 at 8:50 pm
Oh NVM it just loaded and I just read it …
OMG!!! HOLLY!!!! BAD!!! GIRL!!!! NO!!!
March 9th, 2008 at 6:09 pm
This is to Star Jinin:
This story is called Twists and Turns for goddness sake!! You will find out what it means later on in the story!!!!!
March 18th, 2008 at 5:51 pm
I can’t wait until you update
March 23rd, 2008 at 7:29 am
Hellos, I am shanette, welcome (the usual, LOL) and I really like your story! Update soon!!
March 24th, 2008 at 9:41 pm
I like the story, but I think you should have added more to it. I also like to know who the girl is and why she’s trying to kill Artemis. Keep up the good work.
March 24th, 2008 at 9:43 pm
I like the old Minevera better. This Minevera is kind of scary.
March 24th, 2008 at 9:45 pm
I just skimmed over chapter 6, but compared to some of the other chapters, this is the best by far.