Twists and Turns
Written on March 2nd, 2008 by HunterStory Details
(4 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
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Artemis Fowl the second was busy typing away at his computer. Butler was slicing tomatoes in the kitchen, Juliet was practicing a new wrestling move, and the twins were coursing through Artemis’s private files. Artemis found them, scolded them, closed that computer (one out of 82), then stormed back to his work. Mrs. and Mr. Fowl were away at a spa. Holly was shielded and secretly eating the (to her) giant cookies from a jar.
Artemis heard a sound at the window and turned around, where he was met with the most unpleasant surprise: At the window was a girl, maybe 15 or 16, in completely dark, black clothes, with a helmet enclosing her face. She was holding a gun. Artemis narrowed his eyes. No sudden movements.
“Who are you?”
“My name is not important.”
“Your business?”
“Your grave.”
She immediately shot three bullets. Artemis didn’t blink. The bullets went right through him, and hit the wall with three big thuds. The girl reeled back in surprise, then to her horror discovered the projection on the ceiling.
“Nice try, but far too slow.” said a cold voice behind her.
10 seconds later, Butler burst into the room, holding the now very visible and very red Holly by the armpits. “Artemis! I caught Holly eating…” His mouth dropped. Artemis was prodding a young girl with his toe, a dart gun his hand.
March 2nd, 2008 at 3:32 am
Please reveiw!!! More chapters coming soon!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 3:33 am
*FCD* Nice! So is this…the Minerva that we know and hate?
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:26 am
Yep. And by the way, Minerva is still a genuis, she just have certain skills (shooting), and she was hired for her fortune, skills, and contacts by a certain someone who you will find out later on.
March 2nd, 2008 at 5:30 am
Oh, and are you new on this site?
March 2nd, 2008 at 7:02 am
I like it! I actually like the real Minerva… That’s what differs me from most of this site’s authors. My name’s Olive on here, welcome to the site. I don’t think I’ve seen a story by you before. You can call me Olive or Katherine, whatever works.
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:18 am
welcome to the site! i like where this is going….minerva’s ok ….nothing against her. plz continue
March 2nd, 2008 at 7:33 pm
I dont have anything against her either lol, but I love your writting , and Im glad we have another awesum writter here, Im Mahi101Af Fan but u can call me Mahi if you want,I love this story and cant wait to read more from you!, Now wait, so how old is arty? and does this mean that in this story Minerva and arty never met before (aka book five never happened?)
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:17 pm
It happens after the Opal Deception. Opal escapes form Jail… again. What kind of security does the LEP have. It must suck!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:33 pm
Actually, Opal was kept in a clinic, not a LEP cell. She’s also a genius so it didn’t surprise me that she outsmarted Grub and Argon…and Foaly…
March 2nd, 2008 at 9:52 pm
lol, I like the update.
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:29 am
Nice update. Welcome to the site! Hope you have fun, I’m Symojen. >:) jkjk
March 3rd, 2008 at 2:09 am
I like your story! And welcome! I’m Foalygenius! Please update!
March 8th, 2008 at 7:31 pm
Oh! I KNEW it was Holly when it mentioned cupid AND she had an inviatation. Also, you should have also given a motive. Why did they need to know the 10th room?
March 8th, 2008 at 8:44 pm
Is chapter six REALLY long? Whenever my computor tries to load it, it locks up and won’t do anything. I don’t have a problem with anything else loading! Please explain the sixth chapter? It still wont load!!
March 8th, 2008 at 8:50 pm
Oh NVM it just loaded and I just read it …
OMG!!! HOLLY!!!! BAD!!! GIRL!!!! NO!!!
March 9th, 2008 at 6:09 pm
This is to Star Jinin:
This story is called Twists and Turns for goddness sake!! You will find out what it means later on in the story!!!!!
March 18th, 2008 at 5:51 pm
I can’t wait until you update
March 23rd, 2008 at 7:29 am
Hellos, I am shanette, welcome (the usual, LOL) and I really like your story! Update soon!!
March 24th, 2008 at 9:41 pm
I like the story, but I think you should have added more to it. I also like to know who the girl is and why she’s trying to kill Artemis. Keep up the good work.
March 24th, 2008 at 9:43 pm
I like the old Minevera better. This Minevera is kind of scary.
March 24th, 2008 at 9:45 pm
I just skimmed over chapter 6, but compared to some of the other chapters, this is the best by far.