Worlds Collide At Hogwarts
Written on June 17th, 2007 by AryaStory Details
(42 votes, average: 3.9 out of 5)
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“This place is huge,” said Holly in awe as they walked onto the pitch. She, Artemis, Hermione, Ron and Foaly were following Harry as he made his way to the centre of the pitch.
“I was the same way when I first saw this place,” said Harry as he walked in front carrying his firebolt over his sholder. Ron who was holding a cleansweep following just behind. Holly was trailing them. She was carrying one of the school’s brooms. Ron had warned her that they weren’t very good but she didn’t care. She wanted to master the basics before she went onto a broom like Harry’s or Ron’s The others weren’t going to fly. Artemis and Foaly had had enouph and Hermione didn’t like flying iether.
“I’ll show you how to do it the first time. From what you’ve said you haven’t had the chance yet. That’s weird, every magic school that I know of teaches it’s pupils how to fly.”
“Well where we went we didn’t learn how to fly on a broom,” replied Holly. She had been looking forward to this. She loved flying and this would be a new type of flying to master. She had been suprised to find out that she was getting attatched to Harry, Ron and Hermione. This was very strange because fairies didn’t usually bond with mudmen.
Harry suddenly stopped right in the middle of the pitch and placed his broom down on the ground. Ron did the same and Holly followed their lead so the brooms were in a straight row.
“Ok the first thing you do is to step up to the left side of your broom and put your right hand over the broom,” said Harry putting his hand over the broom. The other two did the same.
“Now you say up. Not everyone’s broom goes into their hand the first time so don’t worry if it dosn’t.”
“UP,” shouted Holly and the broom immediately went into her outstretched hand.
“Wow,” said Ron in awe. “That dosn’t happen for many people.”
Harry and Ron did the same and mounted their brooms Holly found that she knew what to do before Harry showed her.
“Now on the count of three we’ll take off,” said Harry. “Are you afraid of heights?” He turned to her as she shook her head.
“Are you mad?” asked Foaly from behind them. “She could go thousands of feet up in the air and wouldn’t even break a sweat.”
“Sounds like you mate,” said Ron grinning.
“Now on the count of three,” said Harry. “One….two….. THREE.”
All three of them kicked off from the ground hard. Holly felt the fimiliar feeling of the wind in her face and hair and felt she was at home again. It felt like flying using a pair of Foaly’s wings but much more natural. The broom leaned slightly to the left but Holly managed to ignore that and get to grips with the controls.
“Hay, Holly,” Harry called from somewhere above her. She looked up to see him hovering about six feel above her head. “What do you say to getting the quaffle out.’
Holly wasn’t sure what he was talking about so she just nodded and sped upwards to join him.
“Hermione,” Harry called to the three on the ground. “You mind tossing up the quaffle so we can have a game?”
Hermione walked over to a trunk that she had levitated all the way out here and opened it. Inside there were four balls. One was large and orange. Hermione took this one out of it’s holder. Holly noticed that two of the other balls were chained down and shaking a lot. Those balls were black and just slightly smaller then the quaffle. The last ball was very small. It was golden and had tiny little wings that fluttered out of the sides of it.
Hermione closed the lid of the trunk and walked forward. She threw the ball up for one of them to catch. On instinct Holly leaned forward, took one hand off of the broom and caught the quaffle as it sped upwards.
”Wow,” said Ron again who had flown up to hover beside his best friend. “You’re a natural. Just like Harry in his first year. He was the youngest quiddich player in a century according to Magonigal.”
Holly smiled and flew back to them. “So what now?” she asked the two boys.
“Ron, you go in goal and me and Holly will try and get the quaffle past you.” As Harry said this Ron sped off towards the goals.
Once he reached them he gave them the thumbs up and Holly sped off after him. Harry was by her side but she didn’t need him. As she approached she made to go to the left so Ron followed her movements but at the last moment she flung the quaffle to the right and it sailed through the middle goal.
Harry was next to have a go for a goal. Ron managed to catch it quite well but when it was Holly’s turn for a go again it once again sailed through a hoop. On and on it went for around half an hour. After Holly had just made a perticularly difficult shot they heard cheering from the stands. They looked round and saw that the Gryffindor team had been watching them. The people in the stands came onto the pitch and mounted their brooms There was four of them. Holly recognised Angelina, Fred and Gorge but the other one she did not. The three in the air zoomed down to meet the team.
”That was some spectacular flying you two,” said Angelina the second Holly, Harry and Ron landed beside them.
“Thanks,” replied the three of the together.
“I think we have just found our new keeper and chaser,” continued Angelina.
“What,” exclaimed the three of them speaking together for the second time in thrity seconds.
“Dosn’t this seem fimiliar Gorge?” asked Fred turning to his twin.
“Yes,” replied Fred rubbing his chin pretending to think
”Didn’t Harry get on the team on his first try on a broom?”
“Yes, I believe he did,” replied Gorge grinning. “And ickle Ronnie the prefect. Well I must say that I didn’t see this coming.”
“Oh shut up you two,” said the girl that Holly didn’t know. “Hi, Holly isn’t it? I’m Katey Bell. I’m a chaser too.”
“You’re on the team you two and I won’t take no for an answer. This saves time because now I don’t have to worry about holding trials to get new players.” This was said very fast by Angelina who was grinning from ear to ear.
”Join you two,” said Hermione from behind Harry, Holly and Ron making them jump. “From what I’ve seen you would be good to fill the positions of Chaser and keeper.”
“I agree,” added Foaly from behind her. “Come on Holly, You love to fly. This is a perfect opertunity so don’t miss out on it.”
“Ok, ok,” exclaimed Holly after Artemis had backed up Foaly and Hermione. “I’ll do it, I’ll do it. Would you three just stop baduring me already. Frond, it was bad enouph with just you two and now I have to deal with three know-it-alls. I don’t know if I can survive a year of this.”
Everyone laughed except for for the ‘Know-it-alls’ who clicked their tounges impatiently at the same time. This caused even more laughter.
“What about you Ron,” said Harry turnin to his best friend.
“I’ll do it,” Ron replied hesitently and then smiled.” Can’t let you two have all the fun can I?”
There was some more laughter at this and then Angelina took charge again.
“Right, I’ll go and tell Magonigal the good news. The six of you better practice with all the balls till I get back. Oh by the way Holly, I hope you heal fast because those bludgers hurt if they hit you.” With that she turned on her heal and strode back towards the castle with her broom over her shoulder.
“What a cheery fairwell,” commented Fred sarcasticly, looking after Angelina’s retreating form.
“Yes, A real insperation to us all,” agreed Gorge turning from Angelina to the three fifth year students.
“Ok, I supose we should get started. Me and Fred will go and let lose the bludgers and the rest of you get to your positions. Harry, you mind coming with us to get the snitch.?”
“Sure,” replied Harry. He followed Fred and Gorge over to the crate and opened it.
Suddenly Fred and Gorge turned to Harry and said together.
“What are Holly, Ronan and You planning on doing with the pictures that were taken of Umbridge this morning?”
“Honestly I don’t know what they plan to do but if you want to get involved-”
“Of course we do,” exclaimed Gorge looking indignant. “Do you really think we would pass up an opertunity like this.”
“Well anyway if you want to help then go and ask them yourselves. Holly seems to have soem very good ideas for pranking. Acording to Ronan once she was through with him he couldn’t show his face for a week.”
“Thanks mate,” said Fred grinning again. “We are going to help them if it’s the last thing we do.”
With that they signaled for the rest of the team to get into position and then they released the bludgers. Shortly after that Harry released the snitch and flew into the air after Fred and Gorge.
It was an amaz#ing practice. Holly and Katey worked very well together and when Angelina returned from speaking with Magonigal she goined in too. It was apparent that the three of them were almost unbeatable when in formation and Holly seemed to dodge the bludgers with incredible ease. This she suposed was due to her LEP training.
Overall it seemed that Gryffindor was in the running for the quiddiche cup and nothing was going to get in the way of it. Not even a toad that took great delight in making people cut open their own hand all night (You know who I’m talking about so don’t act dumb.)
June 19th, 2007 at 8:57 pm
Wasn’t Ronan the name of a centaur in Harry Potter?
Well, it was cute. Pre-TLC fanfictions are the best.
June 24th, 2007 at 11:39 am
THank You, I thought it was cute too. Hope I get some more coments soon. I’m glad you spotted the conection to Harry Potter. that’s going to be important later in the story. OOPS, I’ve given away too much. Oh well you’ll find out sooner of later. SEe yuh.
Love from Holls
June 27th, 2007 at 1:57 pm
Isn’t Garrowson the last name of Eragon’s adopted brother? Love this fic! Write more soon….Pwease!
June 28th, 2007 at 7:07 am
HAY”I am so glad you spotted that . Trust me this Fic is going to get a lot more interesting. Hope You enjoy the rest. Love from
Holls
July 3rd, 2007 at 4:22 am
I love this!!! It’s awesome!!! And I’m not just saying that!! The only thing is that there are a LOT of typos. (I don’t know if it’s just wordpress that’s doing that though) You could use a spell check thingee or send it to a very spell perfect friend before you put it on the website. that’s what me and my friend do. AND IT HELPS!!!!! keep writing!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
July 4th, 2007 at 1:07 pm
Great story! Love the idea of the People (and Artemis) discovering Hogwarts. Keep writing. There are a few minor spelling errors, but other than that great!
July 6th, 2007 at 1:06 pm
This is one of my fav fics. I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
July 19th, 2007 at 7:48 am
Hay sorry guys but I’m not going to be able to do more unless I get my Harry Potter book back from my cousin. So you’ll have to wait for a few weeks. Thanks for the complements ‘Holly S’ and hope your own fan fics turn out good. Love from who wlse but
your neighbourhood LEP officer.
Captain Holly Short
July 25th, 2007 at 1:37 am
very nice. right somne more=]
August 25th, 2007 at 7:29 am
OY YOU LOT!!!!!
Is there something wrong with your keyboards cause if not then you have no excuse for not typing up some revies ans some constructive crits.
Just thought you auta know.
Is it too much to ask for to get a little hepl now and again?
Well See yay
August 27th, 2007 at 2:36 am
Excellent. Write more! A lot more!
August 27th, 2007 at 2:37 am
Here’s an idea: ad in Eragon and Saphira into the story.
August 27th, 2007 at 6:21 pm
Ok one question.
How the heck did you know what I was going to include in the next story
Are you psycic or something like that
Well anywat thanks for the rewiews. At lesat someone did. Well see you when the next stuff goes up.
Your’s senserely
Captain Holly Short
August 31st, 2007 at 3:02 am
Centaurs don’t have any magic at all. They rely on their brains and hooves. If centaurs don’t have magic, how can Foaly shield? I hate Commander Sool too.
August 31st, 2007 at 6:15 pm
Foaly can shield because I made him invent something that would help him shield. The same thing that Artemis used to shield you know Does that answer your question?
September 2nd, 2007 at 5:49 pm
Yea.
September 3rd, 2007 at 7:20 pm
What do you think of my prank of Umbridge. Tell me if you want me to tourture the old bat more and I would be glad of Ideas. It would be better to get others involved with this story. I hope you like the rest of it and keep up reading and REVIEWING.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
signed
Captain Holly Short
September 5th, 2007 at 4:57 pm
i got an idia! why don dey get a plastic headband with devil horns,turn the handles invisible and use a hover charm on it and den it will make her look like devil………
MUHAHAHAHAHA!
September 5th, 2007 at 5:40 pm
I like that Idea and I might use it. Maybe I should use a permenent sticking charm so that she can’t get them off. Love the idea and enjoy the rest of the Fic
September 9th, 2007 at 11:57 am
wiked! holly in a short skirt, omg
September 9th, 2007 at 11:59 am
im elfredas little sister,bethany!
September 10th, 2007 at 4:33 am
I like it, a little bit of spelling, but at least it’s readble and has a realy cool storyline. I love what you did to Umbridge she reminds of my old math teacher only doesn’t have a syrupy voice.
September 10th, 2007 at 4:17 pm
Thank you very much. As I have said above I would love some sugestions about what I could do to Umbridge. There is only so much a LEP officer like myself can do (Giggles) Thank you so much.
September 13th, 2007 at 1:39 pm
great plz update soon
September 16th, 2007 at 1:22 pm
I am updating and I am glad that so many people have read and reviewed. I would like to thank all of you but that would take waaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy too long.
Good bye untill next I review.
September 22nd, 2007 at 11:08 am
Oy, Would you lot hurry up and help me out here. I could really use some ideas here. I can’t do this all by myself. I’m not mental, Unlike my little sister.
pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeee HELP ME OUT ALREADY. i NEED IT A LLLOOOTTTT.
See you later.
September 25th, 2007 at 2:39 pm
update plz and you wrote a great story
September 26th, 2007 at 4:36 pm
Thank You Artemis Fowl and don’t worry. I’m planning to undate very soon.
September 29th, 2007 at 9:20 pm
I do not mean to sound rude but it is really long and i had to stop in the middle of it but otherwise it is good!
September 29th, 2007 at 9:21 pm
You should calm down and let the reviews come in without being a bit rude to everyone. Infact if i didn’t want to metion this to you then your rudness would actually stop me reviewing.
Try writing instead of ranting.
September 29th, 2007 at 9:22 pm
And this is your story. you really should come up with the ideas yourself.
September 30th, 2007 at 9:15 am
Thanks Vinyaya. I think I really needed that.
I gues I was just getting a little over excited and I’m sorry I was ranting on like an idiot. I really didn’t mean to be so rude.
Well sorry again.
October 14th, 2007 at 8:26 am
If no ones commenting because I was so rude then I’m sorry but would you lot please tell me if it’s good or bad.
PLEASE!
Love From Arya
October 16th, 2007 at 8:32 pm
Will soneone please review about what they think of my plot twist. I need to know what you lot are thinking before I an continue with this. I’m really sorry for the way that I acted and I am begging you lot to revies. Please tell me if you like it or not!!!!
October 16th, 2007 at 9:50 pm
i do like it arya! xx good chapter lol!
October 19th, 2007 at 7:50 pm
Thanks a lot ‘V’
November 16th, 2007 at 2:34 am
GREAT STORY!!!! I just finished reading it! oh wethb *spits on screen* where r u Vinyaya DON’T LEAVE ME!!!
Meova here. Try not to stretch the page. I left one letter of each you typed.
November 16th, 2007 at 2:36 am
XD XD beep
November 16th, 2007 at 9:30 pm
I FINIALLY FINISHED ( FINALLY) I we… I LOVED IT! AWESOME STORY , YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER! PLLZZZZ PLLLZZZZ CONTINUE! PLZ! It was reallly awesome , i odn’t really read harry potter , but i do know a little about it , and your story is like perfect!
November 26th, 2007 at 12:13 pm
Thanks a lot for the support yiou guys. I have been busy reading the fanfiction on fanfiction.net and I lost track of time. My little sister made the computer crash so I’ve had to do without it for a while but now that I’m back and better then ever you can expect taht chapter 17 will finally be finished.
November 27th, 2007 at 1:58 pm
HI!!!!
I love it, it’s brilliant
although there are a lot of typos.
Please write more.BTW is the story finished??
:)
December 6th, 2007 at 2:41 pm
The story is not finished and will not be finished for a long time. I just have a lot of things to do so I can’t update as often as I want. I will do my best to update ASAP but hold on my readers until then plaese. I can safely say that you’ll like what I have planned.
December 13th, 2007 at 1:56 am
I love it! Aside from a few spelling errors, the plot is quite creative, too.
December 17th, 2007 at 2:17 pm
Thanks for the comments. I know about the seplling mistakes but I really cant’ be bothered going through the whole thing again. I will be more careful in later chapters but for now please stop telling me about my misktaes. There will be a lot more of this story but I have exams on soon so I have to revise a lot. Keep a look out for the update but it might be a while comming just to warn you. Hope you all are well.
Love
Arya
January 20th, 2008 at 2:34 pm
COOL!!!!!!!
Meova here, don’t stretch the page.
February 4th, 2008 at 2:36 pm
I have some ideas for the other animagus forms put I wanted to ask my readers what they thought. If you have any ideas just tell me. You never know, you might end up sugesting a really good one.
February 28th, 2008 at 6:23 pm
How long has it been since you updated?
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:09 pm
I don’t know. I’ve been busy with tests. I hate some of my teachers. They kept me busy revising for ages. I only had time to pop in and review a few things. Not to mention my lil sis has been hogging the computer so I didn’t bet much time.
I promise to update a little more often ok.
Love Arya.
June 21st, 2008 at 3:31 pm
Have you read the Warriors series? Because there’s a character in it named Lionheart. You probably haven’t, I’m just wondering. Your story is really, really good.
June 21st, 2008 at 5:37 pm
Okay, I know I just wrote a review, but now I finished the story. It is so unbelievably good!!!!! When can you update again? I can’y wait!
June 28th, 2008 at 9:20 am
I’m sorry I haven’t been on the site for ages. I’ve been having writers block. I’ve been reading some fics on fanfiction.net to try and get some ideas.
I have no idea how much longer it’ll be till I update again but I’m planning to do it soon. I got an idea from a HarryPotter/StarWar crossover I read so I’ll try and get the next chapter up ASAP.
May the force be with you
Arya.
July 30th, 2008 at 4:40 pm
Oh my gosh I can’t wait for you to update!! This is one of my favorite stories EVER!!! Later on in the story, are Artemis, Foaly, and Holly going to be in Dumbledore’s Army.
August 16th, 2008 at 9:34 pm
I just finished reading the story and all the other reviews and I loved it!(the story that is) As for the Animagus form ideas, how about a dragon or a griffin? loved the story, bye
September 4th, 2008 at 4:33 pm
Yeah, the AF characters are going to be part of the DA but I might rename it. In that case I’m open to sugestions. They can’t have a dragon form, sorry but it’s important to the sequel.(If I ever manage to finish this one anyway) I’m really sorry for not updating but I have sirius(get it) writers block so can’t really come up with anything for the enxt chapter. Feel free to tell me what you think should happen and I’ll do my best olay.
See you next time.
Arya
October 3rd, 2008 at 11:09 pm
It’s kind of weird that nobody has said this before,
UPDATE!
(please update)
Meova here. No need to stretch the page with repeating letters over and over again, to form a really long word.