Written on June 17th, 2007 by Arya
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- Category: General
- Author: Arya
- Word Count: 35258
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June 19th, 2007 at 8:57 pm
Wasn’t Ronan the name of a centaur in Harry Potter?
Well, it was cute. Pre-TLC fanfictions are the best.
June 24th, 2007 at 11:39 am
THank You, I thought it was cute too. Hope I get some more coments soon. I’m glad you spotted the conection to Harry Potter. that’s going to be important later in the story. OOPS, I’ve given away too much. Oh well you’ll find out sooner of later. SEe yuh.
Love from Holls
June 27th, 2007 at 1:57 pm
Isn’t Garrowson the last name of Eragon’s adopted brother? Love this fic! Write more soon….Pwease!
June 28th, 2007 at 7:07 am
HAY”I am so glad you spotted that . Trust me this Fic is going to get a lot more interesting. Hope You enjoy the rest. Love from
Holls
July 3rd, 2007 at 4:22 am
I love this!!! It’s awesome!!! And I’m not just saying that!! The only thing is that there are a LOT of typos. (I don’t know if it’s just wordpress that’s doing that though) You could use a spell check thingee or send it to a very spell perfect friend before you put it on the website. that’s what me and my friend do. AND IT HELPS!!!!! keep writing!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
July 4th, 2007 at 1:07 pm
Great story! Love the idea of the People (and Artemis) discovering Hogwarts. Keep writing. There are a few minor spelling errors, but other than that great!
July 6th, 2007 at 1:06 pm
This is one of my fav fics. I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
July 19th, 2007 at 7:48 am
Hay sorry guys but I’m not going to be able to do more unless I get my Harry Potter book back from my cousin. So you’ll have to wait for a few weeks. Thanks for the complements ‘Holly S’ and hope your own fan fics turn out good. Love from who wlse but
your neighbourhood LEP officer.
Captain Holly Short
July 25th, 2007 at 1:37 am
very nice. right somne more=]
August 25th, 2007 at 7:29 am
OY YOU LOT!!!!!
Is there something wrong with your keyboards cause if not then you have no excuse for not typing up some revies ans some constructive crits.
Just thought you auta know.
Is it too much to ask for to get a little hepl now and again?
Well See yay
August 27th, 2007 at 2:36 am
Excellent. Write more! A lot more!
August 27th, 2007 at 2:37 am
Here’s an idea: ad in Eragon and Saphira into the story.
August 27th, 2007 at 6:21 pm
Ok one question.
How the heck did you know what I was going to include in the next story
Are you psycic or something like that
Well anywat thanks for the rewiews. At lesat someone did. Well see you when the next stuff goes up.
Your’s senserely
Captain Holly Short
August 31st, 2007 at 3:02 am
Centaurs don’t have any magic at all. They rely on their brains and hooves. If centaurs don’t have magic, how can Foaly shield? I hate Commander Sool too.
August 31st, 2007 at 6:15 pm
Foaly can shield because I made him invent something that would help him shield. The same thing that Artemis used to shield you know Does that answer your question?
September 2nd, 2007 at 5:49 pm
Yea.
September 3rd, 2007 at 7:20 pm
What do you think of my prank of Umbridge. Tell me if you want me to tourture the old bat more and I would be glad of Ideas. It would be better to get others involved with this story. I hope you like the rest of it and keep up reading and REVIEWING.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
signed
Captain Holly Short
September 5th, 2007 at 4:57 pm
i got an idia! why don dey get a plastic headband with devil horns,turn the handles invisible and use a hover charm on it and den it will make her look like devil………
MUHAHAHAHAHA!
September 5th, 2007 at 5:40 pm
I like that Idea and I might use it. Maybe I should use a permenent sticking charm so that she can’t get them off. Love the idea and enjoy the rest of the Fic
September 9th, 2007 at 11:57 am
wiked! holly in a short skirt, omg
September 9th, 2007 at 11:59 am
im elfredas little sister,bethany!
September 10th, 2007 at 4:33 am
I like it, a little bit of spelling, but at least it’s readble and has a realy cool storyline. I love what you did to Umbridge she reminds of my old math teacher only doesn’t have a syrupy voice.
September 10th, 2007 at 4:17 pm
Thank you very much. As I have said above I would love some sugestions about what I could do to Umbridge. There is only so much a LEP officer like myself can do (Giggles) Thank you so much.
September 13th, 2007 at 1:39 pm
great plz update soon
September 16th, 2007 at 1:22 pm
I am updating and I am glad that so many people have read and reviewed. I would like to thank all of you but that would take waaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy too long.
Good bye untill next I review.
September 22nd, 2007 at 11:08 am
Oy, Would you lot hurry up and help me out here. I could really use some ideas here. I can’t do this all by myself. I’m not mental, Unlike my little sister.
pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeee HELP ME OUT ALREADY. i NEED IT A LLLOOOTTTT.
See you later.
September 25th, 2007 at 2:39 pm
update plz and you wrote a great story
September 26th, 2007 at 4:36 pm
Thank You Artemis Fowl and don’t worry. I’m planning to undate very soon.
September 29th, 2007 at 9:20 pm
I do not mean to sound rude but it is really long and i had to stop in the middle of it but otherwise it is good!
September 29th, 2007 at 9:21 pm
You should calm down and let the reviews come in without being a bit rude to everyone. Infact if i didn’t want to metion this to you then your rudness would actually stop me reviewing.
Try writing instead of ranting.
September 29th, 2007 at 9:22 pm
And this is your story. you really should come up with the ideas yourself.
September 30th, 2007 at 9:15 am
Thanks Vinyaya. I think I really needed that.
I gues I was just getting a little over excited and I’m sorry I was ranting on like an idiot. I really didn’t mean to be so rude.
Well sorry again.
October 14th, 2007 at 8:26 am
If no ones commenting because I was so rude then I’m sorry but would you lot please tell me if it’s good or bad.
PLEASE!
Love From Arya
October 16th, 2007 at 8:32 pm
Will soneone please review about what they think of my plot twist. I need to know what you lot are thinking before I an continue with this. I’m really sorry for the way that I acted and I am begging you lot to revies. Please tell me if you like it or not!!!!
October 16th, 2007 at 9:50 pm
i do like it arya! xx good chapter lol!
October 19th, 2007 at 7:50 pm
Thanks a lot ‘V’
November 16th, 2007 at 2:34 am
GREAT STORY!!!! I just finished reading it! oh wethb *spits on screen* where r u Vinyaya DON’T LEAVE ME!!!
Meova here. Try not to stretch the page. I left one letter of each you typed.
November 16th, 2007 at 2:36 am
XD XD beep
November 16th, 2007 at 9:30 pm
I FINIALLY FINISHED ( FINALLY) I we… I LOVED IT! AWESOME STORY , YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER! PLLZZZZ PLLLZZZZ CONTINUE! PLZ! It was reallly awesome , i odn’t really read harry potter , but i do know a little about it , and your story is like perfect!
November 26th, 2007 at 12:13 pm
Thanks a lot for the support yiou guys. I have been busy reading the fanfiction on fanfiction.net and I lost track of time. My little sister made the computer crash so I’ve had to do without it for a while but now that I’m back and better then ever you can expect taht chapter 17 will finally be finished.
November 27th, 2007 at 1:58 pm
HI!!!!
I love it, it’s brilliant
although there are a lot of typos.
Please write more.BTW is the story finished??
:)
December 6th, 2007 at 2:41 pm
The story is not finished and will not be finished for a long time. I just have a lot of things to do so I can’t update as often as I want. I will do my best to update ASAP but hold on my readers until then plaese. I can safely say that you’ll like what I have planned.
December 13th, 2007 at 1:56 am
I love it! Aside from a few spelling errors, the plot is quite creative, too.
December 17th, 2007 at 2:17 pm
Thanks for the comments. I know about the seplling mistakes but I really cant’ be bothered going through the whole thing again. I will be more careful in later chapters but for now please stop telling me about my misktaes. There will be a lot more of this story but I have exams on soon so I have to revise a lot. Keep a look out for the update but it might be a while comming just to warn you. Hope you all are well.
Love
Arya
January 20th, 2008 at 2:34 pm
COOL!!!!!!!
Meova here, don’t stretch the page.
February 4th, 2008 at 2:36 pm
I have some ideas for the other animagus forms put I wanted to ask my readers what they thought. If you have any ideas just tell me. You never know, you might end up sugesting a really good one.
February 28th, 2008 at 6:23 pm
How long has it been since you updated?
March 3rd, 2008 at 12:09 pm
I don’t know. I’ve been busy with tests. I hate some of my teachers. They kept me busy revising for ages. I only had time to pop in and review a few things. Not to mention my lil sis has been hogging the computer so I didn’t bet much time.
I promise to update a little more often ok.
Love Arya.
June 21st, 2008 at 3:31 pm
Have you read the Warriors series? Because there’s a character in it named Lionheart. You probably haven’t, I’m just wondering. Your story is really, really good.
June 21st, 2008 at 5:37 pm
Okay, I know I just wrote a review, but now I finished the story. It is so unbelievably good!!!!! When can you update again? I can’y wait!
June 28th, 2008 at 9:20 am
I’m sorry I haven’t been on the site for ages. I’ve been having writers block. I’ve been reading some fics on fanfiction.net to try and get some ideas.
I have no idea how much longer it’ll be till I update again but I’m planning to do it soon. I got an idea from a HarryPotter/StarWar crossover I read so I’ll try and get the next chapter up ASAP.
May the force be with you
Arya.
July 30th, 2008 at 4:40 pm
Oh my gosh I can’t wait for you to update!! This is one of my favorite stories EVER!!! Later on in the story, are Artemis, Foaly, and Holly going to be in Dumbledore’s Army.
August 16th, 2008 at 9:34 pm
I just finished reading the story and all the other reviews and I loved it!(the story that is) As for the Animagus form ideas, how about a dragon or a griffin? loved the story, bye
September 4th, 2008 at 4:33 pm
Yeah, the AF characters are going to be part of the DA but I might rename it. In that case I’m open to sugestions. They can’t have a dragon form, sorry but it’s important to the sequel.(If I ever manage to finish this one anyway) I’m really sorry for not updating but I have sirius(get it) writers block so can’t really come up with anything for the enxt chapter. Feel free to tell me what you think should happen and I’ll do my best olay.
See you next time.
Arya
October 3rd, 2008 at 11:09 pm
It’s kind of weird that nobody has said this before,
UPDATE!
(please update)
Meova here. No need to stretch the page with repeating letters over and over again, to form a really long word.
October 20th, 2008 at 10:01 pm
Again I say,
UPDATE! (please)
Are you even listening to me? I said please!
November 2nd, 2008 at 12:25 am
Wonderful!
If I was editing this story, I would change these things:
1. Make that #%$% excuse of a Commander be humiliated even more than he was (I think we all know who I’m talking about)
2. Have Trouble ask to stay at Hogwarts too (but than again, that’s probably just a matter of preference, since I’m a VERY stubborn H/T shipper)
And then there’s the matter of grammar, but I think you’ve heard enough about that.
~Ju
November 10th, 2008 at 2:32 pm
Hiya! I’m sooo sorry that I haven’t updated. My computer is busted right now so I’m using an old school computer to answer you guy’s questions so here I go.
I am planning on updating soon but I’m having writers block right now. I’m working on the next few chapters so I can put then up all at once.
I am planning on humiliating that £$%$%^$ excuse of a comander a little more before the story is out so no need to worry.
I don’t think I’ll have trouble stay at Hogwarts. Someone has to keep an eye on the idiot and I’m not really a fan of H/T. The parings have already been decided and it won’t be a HP character. After this I’m planning on bringing another story into the mix. I just can’t decide wether to use lord of the rings, star wars or Eragon! Decissions, decissions.
Goodbye untill my brain decides to work again.
Your ever annoying friendly neibourhood writer
Arya