The Unknown Audience
Written on June 19th, 2008 by Star JininStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: Star Jinin
- Word Count: 475
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Note: Everyone is going to be really intentionally OOC. I’m not sure if that quallifies it as a crackfic, but…either way, enjoy!
“Hey Foaly!” Holly burst into the Operations booth and slapped him on the back, causing him to spill beetle juice on his new keyboard, causing him to curse so heavily that Holly was sorely tempted to slap him. Foaly could be such a drama queen at times.
“I’ve finished installing it” Holly smirked in satisfaction. Foaly’s eyes lit up.
“My new-?”
“Ewww! No! That’s gross, Foaly! You really should stop these sick, perverted hobbies of yours! If Callabine ever finds out-” Holly wrinkled her nose in disgust.
“What? What did Foaly ask you to install?”, asked Minerva, being the natural pry she was.
“Okay, we’re really getting off topic”
June 20th, 2008 at 2:02 am
So far, I’m intrigued. I can’t wait to read the next chapter, and find out why Minerva and Holly drugged Artemis…
The only part I disliked was, “He should have known something was up the second Holly and Minerva turned up at Fowl Manor and drugged Artemis and hid him in a closet.” It’s kind of rushed, and wouldn’t Butler stop the girls from drugging his principle unless they had a VERY good reason?
Please update soon, I can’t wait to see where this goes!
June 20th, 2008 at 10:57 pm
Same as songfic_freak. Butler wouldn’t let anyone come near Artemis with a glass of something he didn’t make.
June 21st, 2008 at 9:06 pm
Hmm…good point. But I had to add that in for comic relief, but I’ll try to think of that in future chapters. But this is my first humor fic, and characters are usually OOC in them…
June 22nd, 2008 at 2:55 pm
hmmm kinda confusing, but since its like the first chapter, i bet theres more to come and everything will make sense. pretty good job i liked it!! i really wasnt to hung up on the artemis getting drugged, because its not like holly hasnt outsmarted butler before, rite? and with crapnerva with her, it could only be to easy. i liked it but i really didnt see the humor in it. keep up the work it was really good!! cant wait to see the rest!
–@m8!
July 11th, 2008 at 3:31 am
NICE!
August 6th, 2008 at 3:46 am
I really want to see the next chapter. What did Foaly want installed????