The Stress of Dating

Written on December 30th, 2007 by lbutler

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  • Category: General
  • Author: lbutler
  • Word Count: 1055
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  • 12 votes, average: 3.92 out of 512 votes, average: 3.92 out of 512 votes, average: 3.92 out of 512 votes, average: 3.92 out of 512 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5 (12 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
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The 8th grade Butler stepped out of his shower. He checked his watch. o.k. 15 minuets the he’d go pick her up and they would go to the drive in. He had a date with her finally . She said yes. Just thinking about her made him sweat again.

” All right . Don’t sweat. You’ll be fine!” He told himself trying not to worry. ” I’ve got my game on I’ll be fine!” he heard a small giggle.Spinning around he saw Juliet standing in the door smiling. He jumped and shut the door.

” Dom do you want some help picking out something to wear?” She asked through the oak door. He rolled his eyes.

” No! I want you to leave the room and stop coming in my room when I’m not wearing anything!” He said back through the oak door.

” I wasn’t looking! I just wanted to see if you wanted any help?” She said giggling again.Again he rolled his eyes and told her to leave so she did. He walked into his room and thought open the closet.

” Suit . Suit . Jacket. School rags. Were are my pants?” He spoke out loud to himself. finding his closes he got dressed and looked at himself in the mirror. He picked the things his Mom least approved of , Faded Blue jeans with holes in the legs around the knees , and a black silk shirt with a cut down his chest. He picked that one because it showed his chest muscles . He wanted to impress !

(and if i were there I would be impressed but some aren’t as easily impressed as i.)

He heard another small giggle and smiled.

” Well at least I’m wearing something. What do you think ? ” he asked his sister Juliet who was , once again , in his room.

” I think you look like a Dork! ” She said smartly. He fanned sobs . Then got fake anger .

” Juliet you will pay for your rudeness .” Juliet gasped and had a look of horror on her face. ” Yes you are going to be tickled!” With that he stepped closer picked her up then through her on his bed tickling her without mercy. He stopped and checked her watch. ” No I’m almost late!” He jumped of the bed and ran to the car .

Once he was there, at her house, he parked the car , he wasn’t supposed to be driving, three blocks away. Almost there. what are her parents names again? Fredrick and Emily? whatever I just wouldn’t say their names!

knock knock . She came to the door.

” Hi!” she said. He nodded to her . She giggled . First date nerves. After meeting her parents , they left she was on his arm he had offered her after the door shut .

” So is your Dad always that scary?” He asked. she smiled and punched him playfully. He pretended he felt it .

” So were did you park?” She asked looking for his Bentley.

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After the movie they drove back to her house. He parked. He looked over at her.

” Hey Butler can I ask you a question?” She whispered into his ear.

He shivered at her sudden closeness.Then nodded.

She half closed her eyes.” What is your name?” He closed his eyes he wasn’t aloud to tell anyone outside his family. He would be breaking his own fathers rule because of a crush but…….

” it’s a secret so you can call me Dom but I really can’t tell you!” He whispered. She smiled. He turned his head to look at her . She leaned in . He kissed her!

She got out of the car and walked home. He drove home his grin split his face Ear to Ear. She pulled out a cellphone . The number was on speed dial.

” Hello?” A Voice asked.

” Got it ! I learned some more about him ! And he’s a good kisser!” She said then flipped her phone shut.

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The next day at school her saw her . The water fountain? that’s weird no one drinks from the water fountain that water is crap! man she’s pretty! The school bell rang she ignored it looking around once . She didn’t see me ! He frowned. She leaned in like she was going to drink and spoke .

” The Butler Agency Agent Carly.” and to his amazement a door slid down covering the girls bathroom door that had a picture or him on it. Carly straightened up and  pulled a id looking card and pinned it on her shirt. WOW! I have an agency and more than one agent by the looks of it and a well funded agency at that! In a girls bathroom!

Butler stood there freaking out. In that room was something cool. Beyond that  door was something really cool. the Butler faced door slid back up . Not wanting to wait for to long and really wondering what was back there . He walked forward and pushed open the door and walked in.

A scream erupted down the hall and teachers and students a like were all crowed around the girls bathroom. Choirs of gasps and laughs and head shakers stood in a semi circle around a boy , and 8th grader, being beat up on by a bunch of girls.

” you” a 6th grader hit him ” Perv!” another blow . ” Walking ” Another ” into” another” a girls bathroom” one last one.

Butler was going to be suspened and brused before lunch!

and the whole time he was thinking I have to get into that HQ! This is to weird! But really cool! 

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15 Reviews for “The Stress of Dating”

  1. Olive Says:

    Wow, I’ve never imagined Butler as a teenager before! Now that’s quite an image! Please please please update this! Other then a grammer mistake, I loved this story!

  2. lil.arty Says:

    i dont think i have ever even considered wat butler may be like as a teenager…this is a great way to picture him as one thou..i beg of u lbutler plz add more…oh and i luv the story so far

  3. lbutler Says:

    i updated!
    glad you like !

  4. ARTY'SELFFRIEND Says:

    Butler could take that group of dorkey kids!
    Well it is is good so far!!
    Please continue!!!

  5. lil.arty Says:

    omg…butler bein beatin up by girlz? a HQ in a girls bathroom….and a bad drinkin tap/////awsome lol

  6. Pampered.Pixie Says:

    Brilliant! Awesome story. Interesting I never thought of Butler as a teenager. Please please write more!

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    hm… i think that butkler , durring his teenage years was with ma`dam ko , and has been training with her snce then , but this iss very interesting as well , continue!

  8. lbutler Says:

    well they only trained for 6 months of the year and He got beat up cuz you can’t hit girls a man’s courtousy I get or how ever you spell it! what do you think he is goign to find behind that door? how did it go from an hq to a bathroom and back with out that 6thgrader noticeing? why is it the Butler agency? do you have any awnsers I do!!!!!!!!!

  9. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    well.. i think that its an agency of girls who have crushes on butler….

  10. lbutler Says:

    smart but there is one girl who FUNDED all this ! Guess who?

  11. lil.arty Says:

    ummm is it…..ANGELINE!..thats just a reallu random guess

  12. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    really … mhh… the girl who was dating butler.. no , ….. i guess we….. wait! is it JULIET? SHE WANTS TO GET BACK AT HER BRO.. or angeline,.

  13. bluesparks Says:

    whoa,butler, a tennybopper! (Thank you, a random book for that word!)

  14. MMK Says:

    Wouldn’t Butler already have been in Madam Ko’s by that age? The whole thing is extremely far fetched anyway…

    It’s cute, though. And you’re a good writer, despite a few major spelling mistakes.

    Overall, I think it’s a nice story, but not really my type, I suppose.

  15. Steven Says:

    Hmmm…

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