The Last Race
Written on September 26th, 2007 by 1crazyhollyfanStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: 1crazyhollyfan
- Word Count: 1889
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I know this isn’t my best story. But I really felt that I should do something like this. Don’t give me flamers, but all reviews are welcome. R&R!
Artemis and Minerva sat on couch, sharing a drink. The out of nowhere Holly appeared in thin air. She shot Minerva in the arm, then said something about ‘finishing a race‘, strangely enough. The then there was another shot and Minerva died.
I’ll always dream
But never own you.
Making believe
Is all I can do.
Artemis awoke with a start. The dream had seemed so… real. There was so much detail, it was almost if he was watching real life, from the sidelines. But the dream embodied a real struggle.
Artemis was completely torn. He loved both Holly and Minerva equally, and knew they felt the same about him. He needed help, from someone who would know.
Artemis decided to ask his bodyguard. “Butler, I need your advice.”
Butler glanced up from the weapons manual he was reading. “Yes Artemis, what can I help you with?”
“I love both Holly Short and Minerva Paradizo. Who should I choose to release my affections?”
Butler snorted. “Damn, Artemis, you’re asking me? You know bodyguards aren’t allowed to have sexual relationships.”
“You know I would let you if you found someone.”
“That’s the problem. I haven’t found anyone.”
“Ah.”
Butler considered it. “Well, weigh the pros and cons. Holly is beautiful, loyal, strong, and street smart. But she is stubborn, not exactly a genius, and she is a fairy. Minerva is also beautiful, incredibly intelligent, strong, and human, but is weak in some areas.”
“That doesn’t help.”
“Or, you could just wait until the time comes. You will know then.”
Wait until the time comes, or in other words, wing it. Not exactly Artemis’s idea of advice, but better than nothing.
“Thank you, old friend.”
She’s everything you want.
She’s everything you need.
She’s everything in sight
That you wish that you could be.
She says all the right things
At exactly the right time.
And she means something to you
But you don’t know why.
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(11 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
September 26th, 2007 at 12:59 am
that’s deep i like it! * first comment dance*
September 26th, 2007 at 1:26 am
sad…again, but good.
September 26th, 2007 at 2:31 am
wow…that would really be a tough choice…seriously.
September 26th, 2007 at 2:48 am
I gave you 5 stars this is good
September 26th, 2007 at 3:05 am
thanks you!
September 26th, 2007 at 5:46 am
♣♣♣
really really good~~sad thou….but thats wat made it a great story, the drama!
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September 27th, 2007 at 8:28 pm
yeah i agree it is very good holz lol!
October 1st, 2007 at 9:53 pm
SORRY IM KIND LATE ON THISHOW ABOUT THIS*SECOND COMMENT DANCE*YEAH THAT FITS IT WAS SAD THAT WAS ODD WAS THE REAL HOLLY IN A MENTAL WARD OR SOMETHING? ISNT THAT WERE OPAL WAS SENT CAUSE SHE WAS CRAZY? NO MY 3 FAVE CHARAS(EXCLUDING MINERVIA)CANT DIE!! WHY IS THE WORLD SO CRUEL!!!???? ::CURLS INTO FETAL POSITION AND SOBS HER EYES OUT:: SCREW THAT CLONE HOW DID OPAL MAKE A CLONE IF SHES CRAZY??? HUH ANSWER ME THAT!!!! CANT CAN YOU?????OH WOE IS ME??POOR ARTY. POOR HOLLY…… OH WAIT I CANT SAY POOR MINERVA CAUSE I HATE HER GREAT STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
October 4th, 2007 at 12:29 am
ummmm… thanks?
November 19th, 2007 at 1:41 am
I REALLY liked the story1 It was awesome! I I can’t think of the word? … Anyway. it was nice , short and great!