The i-cant-think-of-a-name Story!
Written on October 31st, 2007 by Unappreciated geniusStory Details
- Category: General and Romance
- Author: Unappreciated genius
- Word Count: 270
- Read 187 times
Im sorry this is REALLY bad. But i thought of it and decided to write it down.
Its REALLY cheesy and REALLY…. stupid but- you know. thats the way i do things.
The moon looked down on me one night and said whilst shining ever so
bright, ” stop loving her, if she makes you cry” I looked up at it and said
“dear moon, would you stop loving your sky?”
I saw him with her the very next day and muttered the only thing I dared
to say
” you to are the perfect couple ” and keeping to myself with a little trouble, I thought
” I love him, how can I take it, this will rip apart my soul… I wont
make it”
then on her face a saw a smile I sat down and pondered this for a while
I thought, and could it be? You were both happy without me?
Every moment I’m with you my heart skips a beat
yet now the feeling isn’t as sweet,
please understand this is the reason that I cry.
Because you broke my heart I will die.
With out you I’m gone forever, lost and dead,
that is why so many tears I have shed.
Yet still I love you more each day
but this is my secret and so it shall stay.
I hope your happy with her when I die,
so to you my love I say goodbye.
Now from your life I shall fade away
no more to be heard
no more to say.
Just a small note. This is NOT about Minerva/arty II/ holly.



October 31st, 2007 at 9:23 am
Sorry for the cheesed-up-ness of the poem.
October 31st, 2007 at 9:29 am
uh oh, i just realised something… in the part that it says
” I love him, how can I take it, this will rip apart my soul… I wont
make it”
Its ment to say i love HER.
October 31st, 2007 at 9:45 pm
a name for your story: If you want cheesey here it is! I am not all that sure what you mean by cheesy but I thought it was fairly good for a poem!
November 1st, 2007 at 7:07 am
good poemnot cheesy at all
November 3rd, 2007 at 10:29 pm
Pretty goos. It is a bit cheesy, but better than I could do.
November 3rd, 2007 at 11:00 pm
I got to go potty1
November 26th, 2007 at 8:48 am
haha, i love it how jelly randomly had to put that last comment there…