The Golden Army
Written on June 16th, 2009 by Artemis Fowl IIIStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: Artemis Fowl III
- Word Count: 1354
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Chapter 1
Attempted Suicide
Ireland-fowl manor-2009
In a room almost full of computers a large screen showing a map of ireland began to show a flashing image. the teenage boy looked at the name icon, Holly ,and smiled as if he had been given a chance to get something back when he had turned it away with his deceitful lies. He turned in his speacialy moddeled swivel chair, faced his huge Eurasian bodyguard and said one word.
“Kidnap”
To any normal person this would seem to be a plot to try and capture a female by the name of Holly. But then again Artemis Fowl was not ordinary at all and neither was his closest friend and bodyguard, Domovoi Butler. together with their fairy friends they had stopped a rebellion and a sinister pixie twice. However in his last adventure he lied to Holly almost destroying her. The word kidnap refered to a place where, years ago, Artemis kidnapped Holly Short.
“Are you sure?” questioned butler.
“Well I could be wrong, i suspose.” came the reply.
“Yeah and I may be your mother,” laughed butler, “lets get going.”
Somewhere in Ireland-2009
The cham-foil covered lear jet landed as the young Fowl piloted it with ease. but they were not alone. Miss Short was already plucking an acorn from the great tree and burying it in the earth. she seemed to relax as the fresh magic refueled her system and her eyes glowed for a second and were hazel again. As she turned around Artemis came out of his hiding place and she averted her gaze.
” I’m sorry, I never meant to hurt you but I had to make sure you would come. I couldn’t bear losing mother and I can’t live without you. i made a stupid mistake and if i could turn back time i would.” cryed Artemis.
A tear flew from her eye as she replied, “but that is not true. I would have come any way and you know that. And you could have got no.1 to turn back time.”
“You know he wouldn’t do it and…”
“And I also know that you don’t make mistakes!”
“There is a first time for every thing. please. just give me another chance.”
“Why should I even be talking to you?”
“Because I… Because I…”
“You can’t think of a reason because there isn’t one. is there?”
For the first time since the begining of the talk Artemis looked away from her face and caught sight of her hand. It was not the shaking hand which un-nerved him nor the neutrino in it pointing at him but the person holding the weopan.
“Because I love you.” Blurted out Artemis a bit louder than he expected.
Holly’s face was a mess of tears and her hazel eye was blue with from her crying.
” I-I never want to-to see you again.”
Then her shaking hand shot the neutrino, she shielded, turned and flew away still weaping tears of sadness. Artemis shut his eyes preparing for the worst and then opened them again just in time to see the mis-aimed blast hit one of the rocks hiding the lear jet from view. Putting on a brave face he returned to Butler and whilst hiding back tears he gave butler the key to the lear jet.
“Now that, Artemis, Was attempted Suicide.”
June 16th, 2009 at 9:07 pm
I lurv the movie The Golden Army. Go Hellboy! Anyways, liking the story so far. Update pleez!
June 16th, 2009 at 9:38 pm
ooo, this is good, but i have to ask, what grad r u in? I used to be in 5th (going to 6th) and our teacher said and i quote : come on guys! You’re in fifth grade and you KNOW you are supposed to use Capital leters at the begginings of sentinces! ” I hope you get my point!
June 17th, 2009 at 10:20 pm
posf, he’s in grade 7. Yeah, I know, that’s a bit bad, and he can explain for himself why he’s making elementary mistakes like that.
Miss R T: *takes out neutrino* Can’t you, Artemis Fowl III?
Artemis Fowl III: Err…
June 17th, 2009 at 10:22 pm
Ooops, I forgot to say what I thought of the story. Sorry!
I think the plot so far is extremely original and interesting, but you definitly need to update soon otherwise nobody will know what the heck you’re going on about, as I don’t really. *wink*
posf: Hey, I saw you wink!
Miss R T: Yeah. I was… imitating Anne Robinson.
posf: Why?
*insert something sensible*
posf: Oh, that makes sense.
June 18th, 2009 at 3:06 am
PLZ UPD8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U LUV IT SOOOOOOO MUCH! U HVE 2 UPD8 SOON!!!!!!!
June 18th, 2009 at 1:42 pm
First off sorry about the punctuation I will correct it but I had to write it at a fast pace.
Artemis Fowll III: Please don’t shoot. I wouldn’t want to hurt you.
Secondly, It has nothing to do with hellboy at all.
*although there’s an idea*
Also would anyone like to be a part in Paralell Fowl?
June 18th, 2009 at 2:56 pm
Sure I’ll be in Papalell Fowl. Oh and mind if I give you some info on my character? Just a few deets you might want to know.
Name: Allison but likes to be called Ally
Age:12 1/2
Gender:Just guess and you get it wrong
Hair color:Dirty blond
Eye color:Dark brown with a hint of hazel
Personality:Nice, caring, loves Pokemon, can be a tad insane, and has a temper
Other:Knows Hapkido and Tae Kwon Doe.
There you go. That’s the character you can put in. Thanks! Oh and update.
June 18th, 2009 at 4:13 pm
ooo, me to
Name: Nikki
Age: 13
Gender: Doesn’t the name make it obvious? Girl
Hair Color: Midnight black
Eye color: The darkest eye color there could
eva be
Personality: Insane at times, anger issues, very nice to the few friends she has
Other: Loves talking to her friend Ally (is that okay AK?) knows karate (Taught by Mickey 5595) and can easily blend in!
June 18th, 2009 at 4:19 pm
OK, I’ll be in it too!
Name: Sapphire Featherstone (yeah, it’s not my real one, but I like this one)
Age: Erm… 15.
Gender: See if you can guess.
Hair colour: Light brownie (I invented that colour)
Eye colour: Hazel, or one green, one brown.
Personality: Just put down what you think I’m like and I’ll annoy you at school if you put it down wrong.
Other: I LOVE ARTY!!!!!! And I can fight with a sword pretty well (I’m not lying! I use a lightsaber for practise at home, but outside…).
June 18th, 2009 at 4:21 pm
HEY I LUV THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT’S GR8!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW!!
ALLY….A TAD INSANE???? ISN’T THAT JUS A BIT UNDERSTATIN??
CAN I B INNIT?? I WANNA B THE CRAZY 1….YES ATLEAST I ADMIT IT…I’M CRAZY ND I’M PROUD…….
NAME:SAM BUT MA SCREEN NAME IS HITSUGAYATOUSHIRO
AGE: 14
GENDER: WELL GUESS WAT I’M A GIRL!!!
HAIR: NATURALLY STRAIGHT BLACK…YEAH IT DOESN’T FRIZZ EVEN AFTER A BATH….I H8 IT…
EYECOLOUR: BROWN
PERSONALITY: SOM TIMES SANE, FRIENDLY, LUVS JAPANESE ANIMES, TWILIGHT, HARRY POTTER, ARTY FOWL AND LOADS OF OTHA BOOKS…..ND ROBERT PATTINSON!!!!
OTHER: H8′S ALLY 4 HATIN TWILIGHT ND HP!!!!
YOSHI’S MA PARTNER IN CRIME WEN IT COMZ 2 BURNIN ALLY’S HOUSE ND KIDNAPPIN HER DOG!!
I LUV BLEACH(THE ANIME)!!! ND MA FAVE CHARACTER IS KUCHIKI, BYAKUYA AND HITSUGAYA, TOUSHIRO!!! (SUPRISE, SUPRISE!)
June 23rd, 2009 at 11:10 am
its great that you all want to be in paralell fowl and I will soon begin writing it
Miss R T, hitsugayatoushiro,Ally Cat and partyonsoccerfan: Horay!!!!!
June 26th, 2009 at 1:43 am
Kat! Not Cat, Kat! And I’m glad you updated!
June 26th, 2009 at 11:10 am
Bout time I think! Who am I gonna be in Parallel Fowl? And what bout the others?
June 27th, 2009 at 3:28 am
of and thanks for the update!
June 30th, 2009 at 1:45 pm
Sorry Ally Kat.
I will put up the names soon. I am still deciding on who is who so keep an eye out.
July 9th, 2009 at 1:29 pm
Hi. I’ll be whoever. I can already guess who, but here we go. Just so
See you tomorrow,
Froggie
July 9th, 2009 at 5:34 pm
Who’s the caller? Anyway, I know you’re not going to tell me, so I have something to say. I can’t remember what it was, but something was spelt wrong on the first chapter.
July 15th, 2009 at 4:20 pm
You know my character. I won’t bother typing it. My half-hour is nearly up, and I have a billion other things that are only half done.