The Daughter of a Legend
Written on January 17th, 2008 by SalaliStory Details
(8 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Loading ...*Note: I don’t own any characters that appear in this chapter who have been previously copyrighted. I just get Di and An.
The next two days were amazing. We listened to a rock concers (Di picked that one), went to a science museum (it took mom two hours to get us to go, and we only went because she bought us ice cream afterwards), and about 15 different stores. I didn’t buy anything. What’s the point in buying souveniers when you’re going to be living here for the next few years?
Around 2:30 on Sunday, Mom started pulling us towards the park she had wanted to visit. I tried to slow us down, looking in shops and walking slowly, but she just grabbed my wrist and walked faster. We arrived around 2:55. Mom headed unerringly for a gravel path that twisted through the forest. She slowed abruptly, and Di almost ran into her. “Girls, there’s… there’s something I need to tell you.”
I sighed. “It’s okay, Mom. We listened to your phone call with that Dom guy. We know.”
“And we’re ready.” Di said sadly, for once.
We rounded a corner, and Artemis Fowl the Second came into view. He was sitting on a park bench, and there was a giant man at his shoulder.
But something was wrong.
His eyes…
One was hazel yes. Like mine. But the other was an ice blue, the same color as…
A movement next to him attracted my attention. A woman was sitting next to him, leaning forward in the anticipation of finally meeting her daughter. Blonde curly hair cascaded down her back, and she was… bouncing… ever so slightly…
The bells atop the church tolled out the hour, each ring pounding into my soul as I realized the truth
Dong…
Dong…
Dong…
Maria embraced the daughter she had fostered for fourteen years, the child of Artemis Fowl the Second and his wife. “Goodbye, Diana.”
January 17th, 2008 at 5:26 am
FCD OMG I love it! Update!
January 17th, 2008 at 8:38 am
ooooooooooommmmmmmmmgggggggggg!!! i beg of u to update! this is so interesting!!
January 17th, 2008 at 11:04 pm
Oh. I didn’t think everybody would like it THIS much…
Ooookay… I’m going to have a lot of spare time this weekend, so hopefully I’ll get the next chapter or so up.
January 19th, 2008 at 8:23 am
oh i like chapter two
plz continue!!!!
January 21st, 2008 at 3:43 am
coolieo! I really like it! escpesially coldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcold lol!
January 21st, 2008 at 4:45 am
THIS IS REALLY GOOOD!!!!!!! that reminds me of…well, me! coldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcoldcold.
January 21st, 2008 at 5:05 am
I LOVE IT! its really amazing.. I never payed attention to this and always skipped it because i thought it was another story i had already read bUT THIS IS intresting and you NEED to continue!
January 21st, 2008 at 8:48 am
marvolouse….u must continue
plz?
January 21st, 2008 at 3:55 pm
*squeal of happiness* I feel so loved! And yes, “coldcoldcoldcoldcold” was a line that I have been wanting to use for a very, very long time. Chapter four is up now, so… yay! MAJOR PLOT TWISTS HAVE BEEN REVEALED!
January 21st, 2008 at 4:11 pm
OMG!!! it was DI!!! I am so confused! Di was 14! I thought she was like, 8!
January 21st, 2008 at 4:49 pm
I KNEW IT! I WAS GOING TO SUGGEST YOU DO THAT! THATS WUT I WAS THINKING FROM THE BEGGINIG!
I WAS RITE DANCE- IWASRITEIWASRITEIWASRITEIWASRITE!YAY!
I LOve it! plz continue quickly!
January 21st, 2008 at 6:26 pm
*12 comment dance* upd8 soon!
January 21st, 2008 at 9:20 pm
The ending of chapter 4 is so sad! I want to see what happens next so update!
January 22nd, 2008 at 10:18 pm
Pllllz update quickly, I’m dying to noe wut happens.
January 23rd, 2008 at 12:50 am
Yeehee! I am so happy that everyone is okay with the plot twist. I hope to add the next chapter soon, but it might be a couple days, cause I have a lot of homework.
January 23rd, 2008 at 1:18 am
OMG! I LOVE THIS ! IM GIVING ITN A 5, ITS SOOO AWESUM! PLLZ ADD MORE AS QUICK AS YOU CAN!
January 25th, 2008 at 10:25 pm
OMG a twist! I love it!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:10 pm
BEST STORY EVER!!!!
January 27th, 2008 at 4:35 am
BEST STORY EVER! DO A SEQUEL! PLz!
January 27th, 2008 at 4:57 am
OMG I love the end! Sequal!
January 27th, 2008 at 6:20 am
I can’t believe I’ve never read this B4… It got a bit confusing in the middle…. great tho….PLZ WRITE A SEQUEL!!
January 27th, 2008 at 7:03 am
omg luv the ending…SEQUAL!!!!!
January 27th, 2008 at 6:27 pm
in the sequel u should make holly steal her!!!
January 27th, 2008 at 7:20 pm
Well, I had a different idea for the plot in the next one… something about an old criminal coming back, cause I didn’t think any criminal I made up would be anything except depressed… Je ne sais pas.
January 28th, 2008 at 4:08 am
good idea! DO A SEQUEL QUICKLY!
January 28th, 2008 at 6:26 pm
r u going 2 upd8 soon?
July 27th, 2008 at 3:28 am
Sorry, but it’s done for now. I’ve got two sequels out - it’s not a series, it’s two different versions of the same sequel. “Enemies of Old” (which has died but is the sort of humor you seem to find on these sites) and “Life Of A Teenage Heiress” which is slightly more angsty and serious, but also has some funny parts.
July 27th, 2008 at 4:02 pm
I liked “Enemies of Old”! Could you please try and continue it?
July 27th, 2008 at 4:07 pm
Sorry, forget my other comment above this. I did like it, though.