Teardrops
Written on August 29th, 2007 by VinyayaStory Details
(8 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Loading ...This is dedicated to artyrox lol thanx 4 bein patient while i re-type who stole the christmas cake parts 2,4,6,8… and all my other supporters such as holly and jade and lil.arty and others… luv all of u lots lol!!!!!!!
Holly sat there staring at the letter.
He looks at me, I fake a smile so he won’t see.
That I want, and I’m needing everything that we should be.
I know she’s beautiful, that girl he talks about,
And she’s got everything that I have to live without!
A singal tear ran down her cheek. It wasn’t fair.
He talks, to me, I laugh cos he’s so funny.
And I can’t even see anyone else when he’s with me,
He says he is so in love,
He’s finally got it right,
I wonder if he knows he’s all I think about at night?
How could he choose her? The girl who had nearly killed all of them?
He’s the reason for the teardrops on my guitar!
The only thing that keeps me wishing on a wishing star.
He’s the song in the car I keep singing, and I don’t know why I do.
Stupid girl, she knew nothing. She was so unwise and she thought she knew it all.
He walks by me can he tell that I can’t breathe?
And there he goes, so perfectly,
The kind of flawless I wish I could be.
She had thought they were meant to be together. After the kiss when they returned from Hybras.
She’d better hold him tight and give him all her love,
Look in those beautiful eyes and know she’s lucky cos!
Then that fateful day. She remembered it perfectly.
He’s the reason for the teardrops on my guitar!
The only thing that keeps me wishing on a wishing star,
He’s the song, in the car, I keep singing and I don’t know why I do.
He had come to see her. He told her about the wedding. And he was marrying the wrong person.
So I drive home alone, as I turn out the light,
I’ll put his picture down and maybe get some sleep tonight!
She had been invited. But she wan’t sure she could trust herself to go.
‘Cos he’s the reason for the teardrops on my guitar,
The only one who’s got enough of me to break my heart.
She flew of into the night. They were still best friends. He would want her there.
He looks at me,
I fake a smile so he won’t see.
August 29th, 2007 at 9:49 pm
i know since when has holly played that guitar? oh well i love this it’s heartbreaking u should listen to the song i have changed it slightly though…
August 29th, 2007 at 9:50 pm
oh and btw i have been unable to publish the fourth part of who stole the christmas cake because i acidently deleted the rest of it. i have to re type it all.
August 29th, 2007 at 10:45 pm
oh my gosh. That was really good. It gets confusing though who is who? I’m all confuzzled.
August 30th, 2007 at 12:59 am
This is the country song by Taylor Swift.
August 30th, 2007 at 5:08 am
wow…that’s pretty good. I didn’t cry tho, probably because i’m just not an emotional person. (If i was my mom, i’d be sobbing on the floor). I’m also a A/M shipper so…(please don’t kill me A/H fans!!!)
August 30th, 2007 at 5:10 am
PS. Good fic, but…MINERVA DIDN’T TRY TO KILL THEM!!!!!! she was actually trying to get a Nobel Prize but she gave that up, remember?? that was before she knew some demons were intelligent beings and not just animals like dogs and cats and horses.
August 30th, 2007 at 7:40 am
that is so…….wats the word,….lovely.
its a fresh thing and has meanin>…..
♥ it
August 30th, 2007 at 12:09 pm
its so pretty, is it about HOlly wanting Artemis but stupid minerva is in the way.. grr lets allget tazors and tazor minerva!
August 30th, 2007 at 4:19 pm
yes this is a a/m ship except i obviously don’t support it lol and actually i don’t think the story should make u cry but the song ‘teardrops on my guitar’ by Taylor Swift should
August 30th, 2007 at 9:32 pm
Aaw, so sweet, and I totally agree!
August 30th, 2007 at 9:32 pm
I’m just the A/H shipper I am!
August 30th, 2007 at 9:38 pm
OMG that was so moving altho im not an emotional type so i wasnt cryin but if i was id defintly cry cos i was watching click 4 my b’day and in the middle all my frends started crying but i didnt and they all thought i was kinda weird actually one of them shouted at me 4 picking the movie (actually i didnt really pick the movie at all they did). great job vinyaya! lol
August 30th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
ugg i am still working on who stole the chrstmas cake lol i will publish tomoz and then can get onto chappie 4 lol xx
September 1st, 2007 at 2:43 pm
oh and btw artyfowl3 i didn’t say she tried to kill them just that she nearly did. and also when dshe goes over to kong and try’s (and fails) to beat him up butler has to go save her leaving artemis and holly to be injured and have a bomb strapped to holly! they escaped bearly no thanx 2 her.
September 6th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
grrrr minerva.
September 29th, 2007 at 10:58 am
heyy that was fantastico lol its a great story
September 29th, 2007 at 11:04 am
yay! sian u finally left a comment lol
November 8th, 2007 at 6:55 pm
OOOOO I OWN A TAZER LETS GO GET MINERVA!!!!YEAH TAZER!!