Spider
Written on December 7th, 2007 by BlackOpalA/N: I don’t know if you guys will find this weird or interesting. Well, here’s to hoping!
The itsy bitsy spider went up the water spout.
We’re scrambling, flitting upward. Spin webs as fast as you can, ensnare others, strangle them; suffocate them, clear the way to the top. We need to get up, we must go up!
Steal a fly’s wings, it’ll make us go faster, help us get up. We’re almost there, almost at the top!
Down came the rain and washed the spider out
Falling.
It’s an interesting sensation.
We have to grab hold!
You thought it was a fountain, but it was a flood, and now we’re going down, after so long of trying to get up.
Our webs are breaking, next time spin them tighter.
We’re falling.
Out came the sun and dried up all the rain.
We still have some traps in place. Reel them in.
We’ll shake ourselves off, dry ourselves off. What do we have to use?
Take the rain, none of it should remain.
Luckily we have the sun at our disposal.
And the itsy, bitsy spider went up the spout again.
We know the way now. This time we’ll get some butterfly wings.
Our traps will be more lethal.
You’ll just have to make sure that it never rains again and we’ll be at the top in no time.
A/N: I’m not sure if this is understandable to anyone else, or if it is just weird. It’s my first really odd piece I’ve put up, so constructive criticism is a must. If you’ve read through to here you can’t be too fed up with it, unless you want to flame me.
It’s about John Spiro and his climb and fall from glory.



December 7th, 2007 at 4:04 am
:FIRST COMMENT DANCE: that was coolieo!!!
Opal i like this story thingy!!!!!! plz do others like this!!!!
December 7th, 2007 at 6:31 am
I didn’t understand what it was about until you explained, but now i see it.
December 7th, 2007 at 9:18 pm
yeah , i didn’t get it… i thought it was artemis’s struggle or something , like for him to stop being bad , when he fell that meant when he got the mind wipe…. but oh well , that makes sense too.
December 8th, 2007 at 2:25 am
idk wht u r trying 2 say….
December 8th, 2007 at 2:56 am
At first I thought this was the weirdest thing on earth. Then you explained it. Thanks for clearing it up! Still a bit strange, though.
December 8th, 2007 at 3:27 am
I thought you had to have an Artemis Fowl character in the story.
December 8th, 2007 at 4:55 am
It’s like a song , and it relates to the artemis fowl charecters.
December 8th, 2007 at 6:02 am
I do, it’s about Jon Spiro.
Hence the author’s note where I say that it’s about Jon Spiro.
Thanks for the reviews, constructive crit is very valuable.