Sorrowful Narrative Poetry
Written on November 28th, 2007 by bluehazelStory Details
(6 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
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He didn’t know it when he took
The magical and sacred book
He didn’t know it at first sight
Stealing her in the dim light
No, it was later that he learned
It was she whom he eternally yearned
Placing her tiny palm in his
Brought out the truth for Artemis
And so together they would be
Brain and Daring roaming free
Fighting trolls, goblins and sprites
Enjoying a couple’s loving delights
But alas, good come to an end
Even the daring could not defend
Someone leaped out with a gun
To kill the senior Fowl’s son
With no Butlers near Artemis to save
Holly blocked a shot that took her to the grave
It took Artemis a moment to realize
He was looking at Short’s untimely demise
November 28th, 2007 at 3:06 am
:( this is sad!!!!!!!!!
November 28th, 2007 at 3:15 am
Woew…sooo sad , it’s great? How did u make it?
November 28th, 2007 at 5:14 am
I normally don’t like poetry, but that was excellent!
November 28th, 2007 at 1:55 pm
me either
November 28th, 2007 at 7:55 pm
Totally agree with Olive
November 28th, 2007 at 9:29 pm
me to….NO ONE IS ON!!
November 28th, 2007 at 11:06 pm
I don’t really care for poetry either but this was good too! but it was A/H…..
November 29th, 2007 at 12:22 am
thanks! im not really an A/H shipper…or any shipper at all, but those two characters seemed like they would make for a dramatic romance/tragedy
November 29th, 2007 at 12:25 am
ya i guess so!
November 29th, 2007 at 12:33 am
UR RIGHT…… Well , I never said u were wrong, it’s a great poem bluehazel , is this your first ? B-cuz if it is , we now know the rest of ur stories are ganna b awesoem too!
December 2nd, 2007 at 4:41 am
*sobs* waaaa holly can’t die! she can’t*bursting tears apear like a waqter fall*
December 18th, 2007 at 12:59 am
December 20th, 2007 at 2:33 am
4 stars!
December 21st, 2007 at 12:20 am
I agree with HoLlYiSsOcOoL, she can’t die! It’s awesome!!
December 27th, 2007 at 9:04 am
even thou im not a H/A shipper i still found it a great piece of poetry.
March 25th, 2008 at 3:05 pm
Thought you might like to review a set of contemporary narrative poems. Enjoyed yours very much.