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Scream

Summary: A murdered celebrity, a set of cryptic clues, a homicide detective and a new target. Let the screaming begin.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5

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A/N: An idea that came rather suddenly. So, what do I do? Well, write it down, of course!

I’ve been reading waaaaaay too many of those detective thrillers… you know, like Scream for Me, 9th Judgement, etc.

I plan to add some gore and A LOT of cliffhangers. Just so you know.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5

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6 responses to “Scream.” Join in!

  1. Cool! i like it. I especially like the way you describe the area. (I’m horrible at describing scenery) I’m guessing she murdered the actress? so darn cool…. PLEASE UDPATE!!!!

  2. I LOVE the prologue! It really absorbed me into the story. I also liked the description and how nicely the story flows together, and especially the hooks. I’m a horrible writer and love reading so I saw no mistakes. The last thing I have to say is UPDATE!

  3. Wonderful as always, Icey. :3 Your spelling and grammar were perfect, except for those unnecessary commas.

    Ex, Hiding a smile, she slunk across the room, and opened the wardrobe.

    would be…

    Hiding a smile, she slunk across the room and opened the wardrobe.

    The phrase after the “and” isn’t a complete sentence, so there isn’t a comma before the “and”.

    Fantastic imagery, and it’s very interesting. Nice job, 5/s. :3

    ~Sara

    I_C: Thank’s for pointing out the extra commas! I need to work on that. I really appreciate it, Sar 🙂

  4. Hello! When you said that Holly ignored the compliment, you didn’t say it. I guess that was a typo 😀 good job I_C!

  5. No, please don’t kill Artemis.

  6. An eternal eclipse would be when the moon is destroyed… Foal could be Fowl misunderstood… Why are you going to kill Arty?

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