Reality Switch
Written on January 21st, 2008 by mayqueen17Story Details
(4 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Loading ...“So why are you telling us this now, Mud Girl?!” Root growled.
She glared at him, “First, it’s Luna, not Mud Girl and because I was too worried about you guys picking out the right clothes!”
Juliet then butted in, “But what names are we suposed to use so that she doesn’t know who we are, but we can still talk to each other without mixing up names?”
The other blonde human thought about that for a minute, “Use names similar to your own.”
“Luna! Come here!”
She looked towards her brother, “Coming!” She turned back to the others, “Don’t come out to the living room until you know yours and everybody else’s name.” And then she walk to her brother and best friend, who recently streaked her almond brown hair with hot pink highlights and was wearing a black Jolly Roger tank top with matching jean vest and skirt along with the purple friendship bracelet she and Luna had exchanged four years ago and black combat boots.
Maggie shifted from one foot to the other as Luna walked toward her, “I need your genius brain’s help!”
Luna rolled her eyes as she gave her best friend a hug, “What now? Did you dump your breakfast in Troy’s backpack again?”
“No!… I dumped my homework along with my bowl of chicken noodle soup in it and now Mr. Franseir’s giving me a week’s detention.”
Jake blinked a couple of times, “Then aren’t you supposed to be in detention?”
Maggie shrugged, “I didn’t feel like going today.”
“Mags, you are impossible!”
She beamed, “I know.” She towards the kitchen, “Hey, who’s that?”
All three of them looked at the kitchen doorway. Jake and Luna looked at each other.
The Irish youth stepped forward and spoke like a flawless American teenaged guy, “Hey, I’m Alex Gardiner.”
January 21st, 2008 at 1:18 am
I like it! You have a gr8 imagination! I’m actually quite thrilled to have some one who writes the same way I do! Welcome to the site, btw!!!!
January 21st, 2008 at 2:54 am
Welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy comming here. IN LOVE YOUR STORY IT’S AWESOME! I LOVE IT AND YOU REALLY REALLY REALLY NEED TO CONTINUE! I LOVE IT!
January 21st, 2008 at 2:56 am
Wow. mahi101 is excited… Yeah, it’s good. When is the second chapter coming out. Question - does she end up meeting AF somehow?
January 21st, 2008 at 3:05 am
hmmm… I can’t decide. It sounds good but it’s too short for me to pick. I think yes but one thing I maight add for it to be more realistic: not such a nice brother. I mean what is he 16? 17? brothers that are that old will probably not be willing to drive little sisters to school…
January 21st, 2008 at 4:35 am
yeah that would make a nice fit into the story.. how bought a big brother and little sister.. the brother always is kind of .. not mean.. but ignores sister… like just rude…. but when it comes to it the brother really does care more her.
Salali- Im ALWAYA excited , you should have noticed that by now.. whenever I rite reviews………. if I really am IN LOVE with the story my reaction usually stays excited but then it dies down ,
January 21st, 2008 at 2:37 pm
Thanks to everyone who welcomed me, and to clear up some things:
-Jake is a really nice and goofy guy, he just teases Luna like a normal big bro does.
-He’s 19 BTW
-The next chappie’s comin up!
January 21st, 2008 at 4:07 pm
OK let me get this straight, characters are coming out of Luna’s dreams and now Artemis wants something from Luna but hasn’t told her yet. right? Oh and what do u want help with? is it the comment thing? u can’t change that…
January 21st, 2008 at 4:42 pm
To Jelly:
Not exactly, now, I didn’t really tell you where or how Arty and Butler got into our world, never mind their house. And Arty does wants something from Luna, but it’s not an object… more of a… favor. And you can’t change the comment thing! Oh, no! T_T Now my story’s ruined! *starts to cry in hysterics*
January 21st, 2008 at 4:56 pm
I LOVE IT! its really intresting plllllzz continue quickly!
January 21st, 2008 at 5:13 pm
oh.. btw- didnt artemis’s memory get erased after the Jon Spiro incedent?
January 21st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
Holly, is she the one one the floor? Or perhaps Spiro? Update soon!! I am now a loyal reader!!!!
January 21st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
Bathroom I ment
January 21st, 2008 at 9:13 pm
It could be a great romance. You have wonderful potential. I love it so far.
By the way, welcome to the site! I’m Olive. Nice to meet you.
January 21st, 2008 at 9:16 pm
I feel bad for u mayqueen17.
Hope u continue soon!
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January 21st, 2008 at 10:39 pm
*tilts head* why do u feel bad 4 me?
January 21st, 2008 at 10:58 pm
LOVE THE UPD8
January 21st, 2008 at 11:45 pm
no prob and glad u like it! ^^
January 22nd, 2008 at 12:03 am
oh i loe it contunie ! hurrry i love it! up d8 soon!
January 22nd, 2008 at 12:08 am
I feel bad for you bcuz u missed Vinyaya, the winter contest, The epic journy of getting Vinyaya to finally complete Aphrodite, and abunch of other stuff. most of the excitment is over.
But great update!
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:16 am
thank you?
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:25 am
nvm disregard that, Welcome queeny!
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:35 am
DONT WORRY LOTS OF MORE FUN THINGS WILL OCCUR!
January 23rd, 2008 at 9:30 pm
yes mahi101 AF Fan, a LOT MORE fun things will happen! ^^ Cuz I will post a new chappie, like, right now! ^^
January 23rd, 2008 at 10:11 pm
funny.plz continue.
January 23rd, 2008 at 11:27 pm
Nice upd8! very funny.
January 27th, 2008 at 8:48 pm
hey hurry and update!~ i stil love it!
January 28th, 2008 at 3:51 am
I LOVE IT! I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THEY ACT! pllz add more!
January 29th, 2008 at 5:43 am
excellento! and welcome!
February 4th, 2008 at 1:23 am
I got an idea for the story!Maggie puts 2 and 2 together and trys to spill the beans.Then they go to try and stop her. This could also work with Rico.
February 5th, 2008 at 12:38 am
I never thought of that! That could work… especially with the twist I will add! ^^
February 10th, 2008 at 9:55 pm
Its been 5 days and no update!Hurry it up!
February 11th, 2008 at 1:24 am
Sorry! Here’s one in two minutes! Did you read “Assassin’s Game” update?
February 13th, 2008 at 2:40 am
Huh? Arty’s supposed to be in a book and they are just calm after finding out their lives are fictional? It’s like they are just normal house guests instead of people from a book. Everyone is really OCC. I LOVE the %50 idea though!
February 13th, 2008 at 2:55 am
I know……….. but what ’til you see what Foaly did to Luna’s room! ^-^
February 15th, 2008 at 12:39 am
I just got on(Valentines day) and theres a Assasin’s Game update? I never hear anything!
February 15th, 2008 at 1:21 pm
Didja read it yer AFIII?
February 18th, 2008 at 3:20 pm
Yeah, I did. Now, I’m waiting even more!!!!
Oh yeah but I caught my twin(Peanut Butter) putting something…..that I’m not to proud of….on I Love You
February 19th, 2008 at 12:57 am
I saw… it’s okay! ^^
February 19th, 2008 at 2:18 pm
my friend writes in the same style as you…except she puts arty falling in love with herself all the time, never fail. please write more!
February 19th, 2008 at 11:22 pm
Don’t worry, I will! And… have you anything else of mine?
March 1st, 2008 at 5:23 pm
ehmygosh…finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!
as you can see, I’m close to having a major meltdown…
Plz finish it fast! you wouldn’t want to cause my DEATH,would you?!? How would you live with yourself?!?
March 15th, 2008 at 9:30 pm
Update
This is BlackOpal, I edited your comment so it wouldn’t stretch the page. Please don’t spam like that. Thanks.
March 16th, 2008 at 11:59 pm
Sorry but…”update” just dosn’t sound like me.But now that you mention it it was pretty long.