Reality Switch
Written on January 21st, 2008 by mayqueen17Story Details
(4 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Loading ...I got a great idea for this! I’m so happy! Enjoy!
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As their new friends came from their spying spot, the phone rang from the side table that Luna was next to.
She picked it up, “Hello?… Oh, hi, Maggie. What’s up… Uh-huh… Uhhh…… Hold on a sec.” She placed her hand over the receiver and looked at her big brother. “Jake?”
“Hmm?”
“Can… Maggie come over?”
“I dunno, sis, how are we going to explain the fictional characters who are now going to be living with us?” He stated as he looked at them.
Luna mulled that thought over for a bit and had a… what could be explained as a mini-vampire smile as she started to talk over the phone once more. “Maggie? You still there?… Good. Listen, you wouldn’t mind some extra company will you?… Awesome Can you be over in an hour and a half?… You’re a wonder Mags. See you then.”
As she placed down the receiver, her brother walked over to her, “Um… okay, now… if can please explain why you told her to come here?”
“Since Maggie reads the books as much as we do, it shouldn’t be hard to recongize them right?”
Root stepped forward, “Where exactly are you going with this, Mud Girl?”
She threw a smirk that would make any guy in town faint, “What if you weren’t yourselves?”
“So you want us to put on Mud Man clothes and pretend that we’re humans?”
“Not all of you. Just the ones that can’t stand being cooped up for 5-6… hours or so.” She smiled again, “So, who needs a costume?”
Artemis, Butler, Holly, Juliet, Trouble, and surprisingly the Commander’s hand shot up. Which only left Chix, Foaly, and Grub.
Jake whistled, “I see why you told Maggie an hour and a half. But where are we going to get clothes for them?”
Luna placed a hand on her brother’s shoulder as she stood up, “Just leave it to me.” She picked up the phone once more and a dialed number.
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A lot happened in 60 of the 90 minutes, showing where the guests would stay, the rules, and what they could and could not touch. As Jake headed down the stairs with them, there was one thing different in the cool living room. There were two very long clothing racks full of designer labeling clothes. Luna appeared from behind one of the racks.
Jake walked torwards her, “Mind telling me where you got these clothes?”
“The store.”
“I know that.” He snapped, “Why are they here?”
“Because our friends need to get them on in 30 minutes.” She looked toward the amazed people, “Well don’t just stand there! Take something and try it on!”
All of the ones who were going to stay in the foyer sped to the racks looking for things to wear– well, maybe just Juliet and Holly. Artemis was looking around for a suit or something else business-like.
“Luna, I noticed that–”
“–there isn’t anything to your liking?” Artemis not so reluctanly nodded. “Exactly.”
“Excuse me?”
She wagged a finger at him, “Honsetly! You haven’t figured it out yet?!” She placed a slightly sun-kissed hand on her forehead dramatically, “And I thought you were a genius.”
A look of realization was in his eyes, “Since everyone has read our so-called “series”, we need to dress the opposite of our personality?”
She winked at him still with her hand on her forehead, “That’s the plan. Just don’t screw it up.” She took her hand off and winked at him again, “And just so you know, boy genius, designer labels are way more better than designer clothes.”
Everybody, including Artemis, found something to wear. He found a navy Abercrombie tee that says “It’s Not That I Wasn’t Listening” in a bright white and “I Just Don’t Care.” in a faded gray paired with white washed Levi jeans and gray etnies. Butler found a gray shirt that says, “50% Single.” with faded jeans and white Sketchers. Trouble found a red t-shirt that says, “I Don’t Even Have To Try.” in white with dark blue Levi’s and black etnies. The Commander got a camo shirt that says, “Save a Cherry and Pop The Collar.” wiith gray sweats and white with navy stripes Sketchers.
Holly got a red tee and in big white letters read, “If You Want a Job Done Right, Ask a Brunette.” with faded jeans and light green etnies and Juliet found a dark blue tee that said in big white letters, “Life Is Short, Spend It Blonde.” paired with dark blue faded jeans and black etnies dazzled with her own design of pink stripes down the side.
Once Jake and Bulter got the racks and the three that weren’t gonna be there out of the room, Luna grinned at them, “You guys look fantabulous!”
“Is that even a word, Luna?” I think you can guess who said that.
“It is in my dictionary.”
The doorbell rang along with a chime from the intercom. Jake went to answer the door and mumbled, “And not a moment too soon.”
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43 Reviews for “Reality Switch”
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January 21st, 2008 at 1:18 am
I like it! You have a gr8 imagination! I’m actually quite thrilled to have some one who writes the same way I do! Welcome to the site, btw!!!!
January 21st, 2008 at 2:54 am
Welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy comming here. IN LOVE YOUR STORY IT’S AWESOME! I LOVE IT AND YOU REALLY REALLY REALLY NEED TO CONTINUE! I LOVE IT!
January 21st, 2008 at 2:56 am
Wow. mahi101 is excited… Yeah, it’s good. When is the second chapter coming out. Question - does she end up meeting AF somehow?
January 21st, 2008 at 3:05 am
hmmm… I can’t decide. It sounds good but it’s too short for me to pick. I think yes but one thing I maight add for it to be more realistic: not such a nice brother. I mean what is he 16? 17? brothers that are that old will probably not be willing to drive little sisters to school…
January 21st, 2008 at 4:35 am
yeah that would make a nice fit into the story.. how bought a big brother and little sister.. the brother always is kind of .. not mean.. but ignores sister… like just rude…. but when it comes to it the brother really does care more her.
Salali- Im ALWAYA excited , you should have noticed that by now.. whenever I rite reviews………. if I really am IN LOVE with the story my reaction usually stays excited but then it dies down ,
January 21st, 2008 at 2:37 pm
Thanks to everyone who welcomed me, and to clear up some things:
-Jake is a really nice and goofy guy, he just teases Luna like a normal big bro does.
-He’s 19 BTW
-The next chappie’s comin up!
January 21st, 2008 at 4:07 pm
OK let me get this straight, characters are coming out of Luna’s dreams and now Artemis wants something from Luna but hasn’t told her yet. right? Oh and what do u want help with? is it the comment thing? u can’t change that…
January 21st, 2008 at 4:42 pm
To Jelly:
Not exactly, now, I didn’t really tell you where or how Arty and Butler got into our world, never mind their house. And Arty does wants something from Luna, but it’s not an object… more of a… favor. And you can’t change the comment thing! Oh, no! T_T Now my story’s ruined! *starts to cry in hysterics*
January 21st, 2008 at 4:56 pm
I LOVE IT! its really intresting plllllzz continue quickly!
January 21st, 2008 at 5:13 pm
oh.. btw- didnt artemis’s memory get erased after the Jon Spiro incedent?
January 21st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
Holly, is she the one one the floor? Or perhaps Spiro? Update soon!! I am now a loyal reader!!!!
January 21st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
Bathroom I ment
January 21st, 2008 at 9:13 pm
It could be a great romance. You have wonderful potential. I love it so far.
By the way, welcome to the site! I’m Olive. Nice to meet you.
January 21st, 2008 at 9:16 pm
I feel bad for u mayqueen17.
Hope u continue soon!
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January 21st, 2008 at 10:39 pm
*tilts head* why do u feel bad 4 me?
January 21st, 2008 at 10:58 pm
LOVE THE UPD8
January 21st, 2008 at 11:45 pm
no prob and glad u like it! ^^
January 22nd, 2008 at 12:03 am
oh i loe it contunie ! hurrry i love it! up d8 soon!
January 22nd, 2008 at 12:08 am
I feel bad for you bcuz u missed Vinyaya, the winter contest, The epic journy of getting Vinyaya to finally complete Aphrodite, and abunch of other stuff. most of the excitment is over.
But great update!
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:16 am
thank you?
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:25 am
nvm disregard that, Welcome queeny!
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:35 am
DONT WORRY LOTS OF MORE FUN THINGS WILL OCCUR!
January 23rd, 2008 at 9:30 pm
yes mahi101 AF Fan, a LOT MORE fun things will happen! ^^ Cuz I will post a new chappie, like, right now! ^^
January 23rd, 2008 at 10:11 pm
funny.plz continue.
January 23rd, 2008 at 11:27 pm
Nice upd8! very funny.
January 27th, 2008 at 8:48 pm
hey hurry and update!~ i stil love it!
January 28th, 2008 at 3:51 am
I LOVE IT! I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THEY ACT! pllz add more!
January 29th, 2008 at 5:43 am
excellento! and welcome!
February 4th, 2008 at 1:23 am
I got an idea for the story!Maggie puts 2 and 2 together and trys to spill the beans.Then they go to try and stop her. This could also work with Rico.
February 5th, 2008 at 12:38 am
I never thought of that! That could work… especially with the twist I will add! ^^
February 10th, 2008 at 9:55 pm
Its been 5 days and no update!Hurry it up!
February 11th, 2008 at 1:24 am
Sorry! Here’s one in two minutes! Did you read “Assassin’s Game” update?
February 13th, 2008 at 2:40 am
Huh? Arty’s supposed to be in a book and they are just calm after finding out their lives are fictional? It’s like they are just normal house guests instead of people from a book. Everyone is really OCC. I LOVE the %50 idea though!
February 13th, 2008 at 2:55 am
I know……….. but what ’til you see what Foaly did to Luna’s room! ^-^
February 15th, 2008 at 12:39 am
I just got on(Valentines day) and theres a Assasin’s Game update? I never hear anything!
February 15th, 2008 at 1:21 pm
Didja read it yer AFIII?
February 18th, 2008 at 3:20 pm
Yeah, I did. Now, I’m waiting even more!!!!
Oh yeah but I caught my twin(Peanut Butter) putting something…..that I’m not to proud of….on I Love You
February 19th, 2008 at 12:57 am
I saw… it’s okay! ^^
February 19th, 2008 at 2:18 pm
my friend writes in the same style as you…except she puts arty falling in love with herself all the time, never fail. please write more!
February 19th, 2008 at 11:22 pm
Don’t worry, I will! And… have you anything else of mine?
March 1st, 2008 at 5:23 pm
ehmygosh…finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!
as you can see, I’m close to having a major meltdown…
Plz finish it fast! you wouldn’t want to cause my DEATH,would you?!? How would you live with yourself?!?
March 15th, 2008 at 9:30 pm
Update
This is BlackOpal, I edited your comment so it wouldn’t stretch the page. Please don’t spam like that. Thanks.
March 16th, 2008 at 11:59 pm
Sorry but…”update” just dosn’t sound like me.But now that you mention it it was pretty long.