Reality Switch
Written on January 21st, 2008 by mayqueen17Story Details
(4 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Loading ...Hi-ness! I’m mayqueen17 and I’m new here on FG! :D Tell me if I should continue! Hope you like it! Enjoy! And don’t forget to R&R!
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The person that sighed to the still sleeping Luna was her brother, Jake Diosa. He had sandy blond hair with vivid sky blue eyes earned him the nickname Skye around his friends and little sister. His sister, Luna Diosa, had honey blond hair with electric blue eyes. They could rival Artemis’. Jake carefully grabbed a hold of Luna’s pillow and just yanked it. He got an immediate reaction.
Luna was startled, her eyes snapped open in fear but got over it and glared at her brother.
“Why did you wake me up?!” She whined. “I was having a nice dream!”
“Is it when you go out with Artemis Fowl? Believe me, that dream won’t come true.”
She scoffed, “You’re just jealous of him.”
“Why would I be jealous of him?”
“Whatever. Now why did you wake me up?”
“It’s time for school.”
“Okay, get out so I can change.”
He rolled his eyes, “Whatever, Luna.” And he strode out of the room.
Luna started mumbling to herself on how she would tell her best friends Maggie about her dream, since Maggie was a fellow AF lover. But Maggie doesn’t have all of these weird dreams about him. Even before the Graphic Novel came out, she somehow knew what all of the characters looked like, especailly Artemis.
She walked out of her room wearing a navy blue tank top with a silver crescent moon and stars on it along with faded black jeans and grey and black etnies. Luna looked at the time on the large abstract styled clock which read 8:45 am.
Oh my gosh! I better get to school!
“I know what you’re thinking sis and luckliy, I thought ahead. Here’s your breakfast along with your lunch.” Jake handed her a breakfast burrito stuffed with eggs, cheese, and bacon and a bag lunch. “Come on, I’ll drive you.”
The bro-sis duo took the elevator down to the outside where a Diamond Black Bentley Continental GTC was waiting for them. Jake got into the driver’s seat while Luna ate and talked with her big bro about her dream.
“I think you better lay off the books for a while there, Chica.”
She turned to Jake with horror written across her face, “What did you just say?”
Jake, of course, knew that it would be easy for either of them to give up Artemis Fowl, they just loved it too much. He kept silent the rest of the ride. When they arrived, he kissed Luna in the forehead saying that he’ll be back to pick her up after school. Then Luna went on to tell Maggie about her dream and to face her enemy, its name is School.
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Hope you like it! Should I continue? Any ideas for any of my stories? Don’t be afraid to R&R!
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43 Reviews for “Reality Switch”
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January 21st, 2008 at 1:18 am
I like it! You have a gr8 imagination! I’m actually quite thrilled to have some one who writes the same way I do! Welcome to the site, btw!!!!
January 21st, 2008 at 2:54 am
Welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy comming here. IN LOVE YOUR STORY IT’S AWESOME! I LOVE IT AND YOU REALLY REALLY REALLY NEED TO CONTINUE! I LOVE IT!
January 21st, 2008 at 2:56 am
Wow. mahi101 is excited… Yeah, it’s good. When is the second chapter coming out. Question - does she end up meeting AF somehow?
January 21st, 2008 at 3:05 am
hmmm… I can’t decide. It sounds good but it’s too short for me to pick. I think yes but one thing I maight add for it to be more realistic: not such a nice brother. I mean what is he 16? 17? brothers that are that old will probably not be willing to drive little sisters to school…
January 21st, 2008 at 4:35 am
yeah that would make a nice fit into the story.. how bought a big brother and little sister.. the brother always is kind of .. not mean.. but ignores sister… like just rude…. but when it comes to it the brother really does care more her.
Salali- Im ALWAYA excited , you should have noticed that by now.. whenever I rite reviews………. if I really am IN LOVE with the story my reaction usually stays excited but then it dies down ,
January 21st, 2008 at 2:37 pm
Thanks to everyone who welcomed me, and to clear up some things:
-Jake is a really nice and goofy guy, he just teases Luna like a normal big bro does.
-He’s 19 BTW
-The next chappie’s comin up!
January 21st, 2008 at 4:07 pm
OK let me get this straight, characters are coming out of Luna’s dreams and now Artemis wants something from Luna but hasn’t told her yet. right? Oh and what do u want help with? is it the comment thing? u can’t change that…
January 21st, 2008 at 4:42 pm
To Jelly:
Not exactly, now, I didn’t really tell you where or how Arty and Butler got into our world, never mind their house. And Arty does wants something from Luna, but it’s not an object… more of a… favor. And you can’t change the comment thing! Oh, no! T_T Now my story’s ruined! *starts to cry in hysterics*
January 21st, 2008 at 4:56 pm
I LOVE IT! its really intresting plllllzz continue quickly!
January 21st, 2008 at 5:13 pm
oh.. btw- didnt artemis’s memory get erased after the Jon Spiro incedent?
January 21st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
Holly, is she the one one the floor? Or perhaps Spiro? Update soon!! I am now a loyal reader!!!!
January 21st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
Bathroom I ment
January 21st, 2008 at 9:13 pm
It could be a great romance. You have wonderful potential. I love it so far.
By the way, welcome to the site! I’m Olive. Nice to meet you.
January 21st, 2008 at 9:16 pm
I feel bad for u mayqueen17.
Hope u continue soon!
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January 21st, 2008 at 10:39 pm
*tilts head* why do u feel bad 4 me?
January 21st, 2008 at 10:58 pm
LOVE THE UPD8
January 21st, 2008 at 11:45 pm
no prob and glad u like it! ^^
January 22nd, 2008 at 12:03 am
oh i loe it contunie ! hurrry i love it! up d8 soon!
January 22nd, 2008 at 12:08 am
I feel bad for you bcuz u missed Vinyaya, the winter contest, The epic journy of getting Vinyaya to finally complete Aphrodite, and abunch of other stuff. most of the excitment is over.
But great update!
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:16 am
thank you?
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:25 am
nvm disregard that, Welcome queeny!
January 22nd, 2008 at 1:35 am
DONT WORRY LOTS OF MORE FUN THINGS WILL OCCUR!
January 23rd, 2008 at 9:30 pm
yes mahi101 AF Fan, a LOT MORE fun things will happen! ^^ Cuz I will post a new chappie, like, right now! ^^
January 23rd, 2008 at 10:11 pm
funny.plz continue.
January 23rd, 2008 at 11:27 pm
Nice upd8! very funny.
January 27th, 2008 at 8:48 pm
hey hurry and update!~ i stil love it!
January 28th, 2008 at 3:51 am
I LOVE IT! I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THEY ACT! pllz add more!
January 29th, 2008 at 5:43 am
excellento! and welcome!
February 4th, 2008 at 1:23 am
I got an idea for the story!Maggie puts 2 and 2 together and trys to spill the beans.Then they go to try and stop her. This could also work with Rico.
February 5th, 2008 at 12:38 am
I never thought of that! That could work… especially with the twist I will add! ^^
February 10th, 2008 at 9:55 pm
Its been 5 days and no update!Hurry it up!
February 11th, 2008 at 1:24 am
Sorry! Here’s one in two minutes! Did you read “Assassin’s Game” update?
February 13th, 2008 at 2:40 am
Huh? Arty’s supposed to be in a book and they are just calm after finding out their lives are fictional? It’s like they are just normal house guests instead of people from a book. Everyone is really OCC. I LOVE the %50 idea though!
February 13th, 2008 at 2:55 am
I know……….. but what ’til you see what Foaly did to Luna’s room! ^-^
February 15th, 2008 at 12:39 am
I just got on(Valentines day) and theres a Assasin’s Game update? I never hear anything!
February 15th, 2008 at 1:21 pm
Didja read it yer AFIII?
February 18th, 2008 at 3:20 pm
Yeah, I did. Now, I’m waiting even more!!!!
Oh yeah but I caught my twin(Peanut Butter) putting something…..that I’m not to proud of….on I Love You
February 19th, 2008 at 12:57 am
I saw… it’s okay! ^^
February 19th, 2008 at 2:18 pm
my friend writes in the same style as you…except she puts arty falling in love with herself all the time, never fail. please write more!
February 19th, 2008 at 11:22 pm
Don’t worry, I will! And… have you anything else of mine?
March 1st, 2008 at 5:23 pm
ehmygosh…finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!finish!
as you can see, I’m close to having a major meltdown…
Plz finish it fast! you wouldn’t want to cause my DEATH,would you?!? How would you live with yourself?!?
March 15th, 2008 at 9:30 pm
Update
This is BlackOpal, I edited your comment so it wouldn’t stretch the page. Please don’t spam like that. Thanks.
March 16th, 2008 at 11:59 pm
Sorry but…”update” just dosn’t sound like me.But now that you mention it it was pretty long.