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Ravenheart

Summary: The essay never found it’s way to the ‘return’ basket. Artemis took the rest of the week off. He finaly came […]

Chapters: 1 2

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The essay never found it’s way to the ‘return’ basket. Artemis took the rest of the week off.

He finaly came to his senses and began checking the internet daily for information on his father’s death. He also gathered a considerable amount of information on UFO sightings, the ‘supernatural’, ect.

And so began the Artemis Fowl book series.

Chapters: 1 2

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  1. Yeah, i know, it’s a one-shot with 2 chapters. If you want me to change it, i will.

  2. Yeah, you should probably change that, since it’s two chapters and all. In the first chapter, by the way, Artemis asks a question before entering the room, and only THEN does he say that he’s home. I don’t think it usually works out that way.

    Also, its kindof weird that directly after he turns in that homework, would he become interested in the supernatural. Shouldn’t there be a reason for that?

    Sorry, just tryin to help. Nice plot, overall. 🙂

  3. But, Ann, he never turned in the homework, did he? Hmm? 😉

    Brilliant, Falcon. 😀 I give you five stars for a beautifully written piece of work. 🙂 The last paragraph of chapter one was amazing. Brilliant. 😀

    ~CC

  4. Aw, the last sentence of Chapter One was great. I loved this, but you might want to change the One-Shot-ness ’cause of the double chappies. But, anyway, I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing, and keep up the good work! 😉

    -Star

  5. I have edited and erased the One-shot tag. I kept it cuz it needed that extra chapter, but it really wasn’t part of the story.

  6. Beckett Simpleton June 27th, 2010 at 3:00 pm 6

    It’s awsome! Awsome awsome awsome! The first chapter’s… Well for lack of better words… Awsome! The second chapter is really more of a epilouge isn’t it? Maybe you could insert a line and then put the second chapter after it? Or five/six stars? But what the Hell? It still rox my sox. (I’m is a surprisingly slang mood today) 5* though. Even if your second chapter did make me over exited because I didn’t read the story profile and thought it was a chapter fic…

  7. You were right, the last chapter was an epilouge. Thank you for figuring that out.

  8. 😀 Brilliant. Like a Raven’s feather… *sigh*… beautiful!

  9. Wow. Wow. The only word for this story. FIVE STARS DUDE!

  10. The ending was rather anti-climatic, hope you can change that, but the first chapter was AWESOME.

  11. Well… the last chapter’s not really part of the story. It’s an epilouge. And I didn’t write it to be climatic.

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