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Written on September 2nd, 2008 by 017350Opal Koboi laughed. Holly Short too. They sat on what had moments before been the famous Leaning Tower of Pisa.
“What’s your name, Holly?” asked Opal, smiling cheerfully.
“Holly,” said Holly, grinning. “What’s your’s, Opal?”
“Opal,” she said, matter-of-factly.
“We should probably be getting out of here,” noted Holly.
“Why? This is fun!”
“Come with me if you want to live,” said Holly, suddenly becoming serious.
“Why? What wrong!?” asked Opal, quickly alert.
“Nothing! There’s Ice for sale for 50 cents per scoop in that building!” said Holly dramatically.
Opal cracked up laughing.
Holly sighed when Opal wasn’t looking. This was going to take forever.
How did Holly and Opal get into this situation? The next chapter will tell…

September 2nd, 2008 at 1:22 am
Yay, First to comment!
Please write the next chapter soon! I reeeeeaaaaaaaaalllllllllyyyyyyyy, want to read the rest!
September 2nd, 2008 at 2:43 am
*right eyebrow raises*
ehhhwot?
I second what Opal said
September 2nd, 2008 at 12:23 pm
That was kinda funny.Please keep writing!
September 2nd, 2008 at 4:02 pm
wtf??? cant wait 4 more! plzzzzz update!
September 14th, 2008 at 3:54 pm
Well? Are you going to have a story, or are you trying to “tease” me? I warn you, I never have much Patience. And you do NOT want to anger me. This is your first and last warning.
October 10th, 2008 at 3:29 pm
what the…? please update! It was kind of funny, but without the next chapter I will remain confuzzled.
October 10th, 2008 at 11:21 pm
No offense, but… the story made no sense whatsoever. Maybe you should give us a bit more information in the first chapter. Right now, it seems both of them have gone insane… which isn’t a bad thing!