Oh, Sorry. Is that the wrong question?
Written on July 10th, 2008 by computerzandbks4everStory Details
Loading ...Holly, Trouble, Artemis and Minerva were relaxing in a small restarant in the Lower Elements. Minerva wispered something in Artemis’s ear.
“Hey, are you two sharing secrets?” Holly asked.
“Oh, we just wondered if you two are in it for the long run, or if this is just a casual fling.” (meaning Holly and Trouble) answered Artemis with a straight face.
Both elves looked shocked.
“Oh. Is that the wrong question?” said Artemis innocently.
“Oh, no, no. I was wondering the answer to that myself in fact.” Holly turned to Trouble. He turned scarlet.Trouble quickly changed the subject.
“Eat up. The food’s getting cold.”
July 10th, 2008 at 7:40 pm
its not that bad, but i think it needs to be longer.
July 10th, 2008 at 7:46 pm
well its supposed to be short, because there’s not much else to tell
July 10th, 2008 at 7:48 pm
I concur. It’s not great but it’s not bad either.
July 10th, 2008 at 8:00 pm
funny, thats what i think 2
July 10th, 2008 at 8:15 pm
Not to bad. Maybe longer though.
July 10th, 2008 at 8:18 pm
you could have artemis walk in on holly and trouble “WINK WINK”
July 10th, 2008 at 9:36 pm
its supposed to be short!
on 2nd thought…
July 12th, 2008 at 7:04 pm
I like the idea, but i agree that it was too short. It was pretty much: “Marry holly trouble!” “ok, fine. ta-da!” “yay!”. You say there’s no more to tell, but there is. What exactly was Trouble thinking about after Artemis said that? What was Holly thinking? You can always add more depth, you just have to think from different angles of the story.
–ambi
July 14th, 2008 at 9:28 am
It would be GREAT as a full length fanfic so you could make it a bit longer
July 14th, 2008 at 10:12 pm
Awwww, what a cute story
July 14th, 2008 at 10:13 pm
Holly & Trouble always belonged together, IMO.
July 15th, 2008 at 4:00 am
you would be my absolute hero if you wrote a story about arty and minnie’s first fight/make up. A/M 4 evah!!
July 19th, 2008 at 10:55 pm
ok, i’ll make it longer,
and for FANCYTHAT, i’ll make a fight/make-up
i will update soon, but i’m going to be away from computers 4 a week, so it will take a while
July 26th, 2008 at 10:24 am
I love the new chapters but it’s a bit soppy… I LOVE IT!
August 4th, 2008 at 1:40 am
(fancythat) i’ve decided to make a different story about artemis/minerva’s first falling out/make up
(english-minerva)thanks!
August 11th, 2008 at 9:00 am
I hate you! Holly married Trouble! Waahh! You WILL write one about Artemis/Minerva’s first falling out, NOW!!! AND… Artemis will marry Holly! YAY!!!
October 14th, 2008 at 3:58 am
Holly and Trouble belong together! *puts hands on hips and mock glares at A/H shippers* no offense intended, but I am very strongly in favor of a Holly/Trouble relationship.
November 5th, 2008 at 1:30 am
You’re my kinda girl JHF! (or boy…?)
I don’t know what to write next, so I’m offering a challenge to anyone who wants to to enter a chapter can…
Or you can give me ideas.
November 14th, 2008 at 2:29 am
Thanks! And, yes, I am a girl.
Why don’t you write about Holly and Trouble going on a honeymoon, and things falling apart in Haven during their absense? But first write about their wedding. If you need more specific ideas about their wedding, just ask. And how about you write it as if Root never died? I think it would make the story even better than it already is, and that’s saying something! This is one of my favorite stories on this site! And how about you write a story that is the same basic plot, but is Julius/Vinyàya instead?
Keep up the WONDERFUL writing!