Of gremlins and insanity.
Written on December 30th, 2007 by Unappreciated geniusStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: Unappreciated genius
- Word Count: 625
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Artemis noticed Jim was very twitchy. He must be a nervous flyer… Which gave Artemis an idea.
”Do not be alarmed,Alex, But i have been watching you for a while.”
”Err… well um… You see- thats odd, because my name is Jim..” Said Jim, looking at Artemis’s Mouth, as if he was about to spring fangs and try to suck his blood.
“Ah, you confirm it. I knew your name was Jim. But needed that confirmation that you had just so kindly delivered.” Said Artemis, Noticing where Jim was looking.
“w- w- who are you?” Said Jim, his nerves clearly going into over drive.
Artemis was re-thinking his original plan. Could This mental patient possibly think he was… a vampire? He had been told his resembled one before. This was just TOO easy.
“I have had many names.” Said artemis, licking over his eye tooth, which made Jim shiver. ” But i’m mostly known as… Dracula.” Said Artemis whispering the last part.
Jims eyes widened. “But you… no thats not- How could it be?.. i mean to say…. Dont kill me!” He said, sweat acctually dripping from his forehead. Which thourougly disgusted Artemis.
“Oh dont worry, Im not the one here to kill you. i will simply drain your body of its blood once you are dead. Its that Gremlin out there you have to worry about. Im just here to make sure he does his job, by the end of this flight.”
Jim looked out the window and he saw a small creature on the wing of the plane, It had sharp fangs and claws to match, with an up turned nose and leathery skin. it crawled over to his window and started clawing at it, trying to get in! Jim jumped and pulled down the blind over his window. He turned to look at Artemis, who was delighted at how easy this was. Of corse there was no Gremlin, but with Jims fragile mind- it was easy to plant the image in there… with the simple power of words…. And maybe a hint of magic.
“please! you have to help me! you cant let it kill me, you cant!” Said Jim, traces of sanity scarce in his voice.
“sorry, but the quicker you die, the quicker I eat.” Said Artemis Smiling to himself as he saw Jim start to shake violently.
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December 30th, 2007 at 8:20 pm
LOL you captured artemis very well. i liked it a lot.
December 31st, 2007 at 12:42 am
i like the sound of this….insane person…possible vampire…awsome..plz continue
December 31st, 2007 at 4:53 am
lol! that is really awesom and HILARIOUS , i think overall this story is going to enbd up funny , with the way this mastermind twists things around . i love it and u must continue!
January 10th, 2008 at 12:23 am
I don’t remember giving this idea 2 ne1. Very funny! definatly need to continue!
January 12th, 2008 at 7:05 pm
goood up8m … now i noe where i got the idea for my story ” i have no title yet” it takes place on the plane to.. i really like this story ! PLZ UP8!
January 13th, 2008 at 3:11 am
Hmmm… it seems Jelly is quite popular around here.
Artemis sounds too dark and how old exactly is this Jim person?
January 13th, 2008 at 3:31 am
lol I like the update! now I remember that idea! The little gremlin thing I had seen in a T.V. show. Twilight Zone I think. Maybe they should get into fog or something and Artemis says they are in the Bermuda triangle and then he says the Gremlin broke in causing Jim to hide in the bathroom but then the gremlins come up the toilet.
February 3rd, 2008 at 2:55 am
oh maybe there could be a whole flock of gremlins coming up the toilet!!!!
February 3rd, 2008 at 5:06 am
lol……………. “THERE ARE GREMBLIN’S IN THE TOILET RUNN!!!!!!!!!”
February 18th, 2008 at 2:45 am
LOL! Or if the pilot turns into Death and claims to “bring him home”!
March 2nd, 2008 at 10:55 pm
oh YES! hey Star and Mahi I think we ust found our next group of ‘in turns’ story writers! that is a PERFECT plot and Unappreciated genius is never on so maybe he wouldn’t mind if we would use some of his plot.
March 14th, 2008 at 11:36 am
LOL, she’s on msn sometimes. Mwahaha.
March 24th, 2008 at 3:29 pm
now that just terrible hee-hee