Now or Never.

Written on September 22nd, 2007 by elfreda

Story Details

  • Status : Complete
  • Category: General
  • Author: elfreda
  • Word Count: 251
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holly took a deep breath.it was now or never.

“i aint your average girl,

im from a different world,

not gonna give you a twirl,

cos my hair aint curled.”

every one was staring at her.not much of a change there.but this was different this wasn’t work it was love.she could see artemis, as usal he had that miveriva by his side.she gulped, it was now or never.

“i can see you standing there,

that witch by your side,

i had love to share,

but you only had pride.”

it wasn’t fair she had all the luck in the world why wouldn’t he pick her insted?

“i had luck, 

she had IQ, 

im not afraid of muck,

she’s just like you.” 

 only three simple words.

“i love you,

you love her,

why dont you love me too?

all she does is purr.”

she shouted those fatal words at him, she told him that she loved him.his bodyguard shot her and all went black. As black and as cold as his heart.

 okay i know that was really sad but lets look on the bright side, i finally finshed a story for once in my life!                                                                                        

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11 Reviews for “Now or Never.”

  1. elfreda Says:

    hi every one come on people REVEIW!

  2. 1crazyhollyfan Says:

    well, it doesnt make much sense that butler owuld shoot her just becuase she told him that she loved him. but its okay. =]

  3. elfreda Says:

    thanx i finnaly got a review!

  4. fowlgirl19 Says:

    same as icrazyhollyfan. but i would prefer it if Minerva got shot! :) no offense if your an a/m fan.

  5. fowlgirl19 Says:

    can u plz read my story? it girls dont interest me, but why does she. thx! :P

  6. Vinyaya Says:

    arg holly got shot by butler!!!! y????????????????? is da world so cruel!

  7. lil.arty Says:

    Butler shoot Holly???? did i miss something>?
    ok besidse that it was good

  8. elfreda Says:

    sorry i am A/H!

  9. arty_and_holly_4ever Says:

    I am also a a/h fan. this is really good! but did holly get shot by butler? AHHHHHHHHHHHH sry i am very hyper.

  10. elfreda Says:

    no she did not get shot by butler she got shot by juliet cos she also had a crush on him and butler retired!

  11. elfreda Says:

    COMMENT!!!!

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