Never Enough
Written on March 12th, 2008 by carinoStory Details
(10 votes, average: 3.9 out of 5)
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Rubbing his eyes, Artemis willed his brain to focus on the screen in front of him. This hacking had taken longer than he’d expected; he was almost falling asleep where he sat. However, Artemis knew that he couldn’t stop now, even if he wanted to. In a way, what he was doing was completely useless. Knowing the whereabouts of someone did not make them any closer to you, and it would never be enough to just know anyway. Call him greedy, but he wanted to have. And what he was doing, almost harmless hacking, would never be enough.
Impatience drove Artemis to the window, where he stared up at the clouds above. He wondered if she was out there somewhere. At the computer, he had been searching for information; here he was searching for fulfillment. He wished he could just ask where she was, but even if he did, he knew she’d never answer. Not to him.
The facts overwhelmed all hopes of his, and disappointment sent him back to his chair, where he couldn’t be seen. He hated this feeling of weakness and hopelessness, countered by the compulsion he felt to have. He didn’t want to fall into this rut again, but there was nothing he could do to help it. He was falling deeper in love with every second, but he did his best to annoy it. His eyes throbbed from his work, and he concentrated on the ache instead. Artemis turned back to his computer screen, hoping to drown his hurt with physical exhaustion and pain.
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March 13th, 2008 at 2:34 am
*sniffle sniffle* wow! great style format. What a sad beginning…
March 13th, 2008 at 2:35 am
FCD* OMG sad! They’re in love!!!!
anyway I really liked it. They really seemed like their characters, which is very hard to do. Are you going to continue? That would be awesome! Oh and only catagorize it into one catagory.
March 13th, 2008 at 3:07 am
She doesn’t need to put it into one category.
I loved it. I posted my crit on the forum.
I’m just going to rate it 5/5.
March 13th, 2008 at 10:00 pm
Very Powerful. I’m very partial to a good A/H.
March 14th, 2008 at 10:49 pm
wow. all i can say. wow.
March 15th, 2008 at 9:50 pm
It’s cute, write another Chapter.
March 16th, 2008 at 11:50 pm
I’ll be watching until you update …
March 17th, 2008 at 6:14 am
awwww!!! PLEASE update!! so cute!!
March 18th, 2008 at 11:22 pm
March 20th, 2008 at 10:35 am
That was really good. So sad!! But I love it. Update soon!!!
March 24th, 2008 at 12:40 pm
would holly really give up her magic for him?
April 5th, 2008 at 1:35 am
update, why are they so confused about their feelings
May 14th, 2008 at 8:43 pm
wow please updte it although if you left it it would be fine as long as you wrote a little ending paraghrap or something like that but you get what i mean
May 17th, 2008 at 11:15 am
OOH this is cute
June 5th, 2008 at 10:47 pm
I don’t love it. I’m not a huge fan of A/H ships. It just seems wrong. I like the format. Good job!