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Never Enough

Summary: Flying Holly’s heart fluttered and so did her wings, carrying her even higher into the night sky.  Tonight, though, it […]

Chapters: 1 2

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Flying

Holly’s heart fluttered and so did her wings, carrying her even higher into the night sky.  Tonight, though, it was not the stars that Holly sought.  She only wanted to be seen, to be noticed.  Not by humans in general, one would do.  But no matter how high Holly flew, no matter how much she achieved, it would never be enough.

Looking down, she saw the red of car lights, the yellow of inside lights, and in some places, the blue glow associated with electronics.  She wondered if he was in one of those locations, up late on his computer, but she couldn’t bring herself to look.  That would be too creepy, following him around like she longed to do.  She would be shunned by her kind.  It would almost be worth it, to be able to spend a lifetime in his arms.  She would give up her magic for him, she would give up her life for him, if only he asked.  But she knew he never would.

The knowledge of this stung Holly worst than the ice crystals in the clouds as they rushed up to meet her, but Holly ignored her emotions and concentrated instead on the ice scratching her face, the cold wind numbing her ears and nose.  She was higher than she’d ever been before, and still it was not enough.  Holly opened the throttle on her wings all the way and kept flying upwards, not to seek or prove anything, but instead just to get away.

Chapters: 1 2

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  1. *sniffle sniffle* wow! great style format. What a sad beginning…

  2. FCD* OMG sad! They’re in love!!!! 🙂 anyway I really liked it. They really seemed like their characters, which is very hard to do. Are you going to continue? That would be awesome! Oh and only catagorize it into one catagory.

  3. She doesn’t need to put it into one category.

    I loved it. I posted my crit on the forum.
    I’m just going to rate it 5/5.

  4. Very Powerful. I’m very partial to a good A/H.

  5. wow. all i can say. wow.

  6. It’s cute, write another Chapter. 🙂

  7. 😥 … that was great. Keep writing, make one where they meet. I’m a pure A/H shipper, always will be. 😥

    I’ll be watching until you update … 😈

  8. awwww!!! PLEASE update!! so cute!!

  9. That was really good. So sad!! But I love it. Update soon!!!

  10. FictionWizard March 24th, 2008 at 12:40 pm 11

    would holly really give up her magic for him?

  11. update, why are they so confused about their feelings

  12. wow please updte it although if you left it it would be fine as long as you wrote a little ending paraghrap or something like that but you get what i mean

  13. OOH this is cute

  14. Minerva Paradizo June 5th, 2008 at 10:47 pm 15

    I don’t love it. I’m not a huge fan of A/H ships. It just seems wrong. I like the format. Good job!

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